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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Touya REALLY needs to get an attitude adjustment there....and the scene with Sakura dn Syoran made me cry!!! *sniffle*
What a turnaround! Yue is letting his prized possession go!!! YAY!!! I think Touya will come back after he's had his fill of free life, realize that he misses Yue and go running back to him, but find that he's gone, and then go find him lol. But, that's just my take on it xD
GREAT CHAPTER!!! I really like it, so keep it up!! And good for Ralen....he deserved to die lol
What a turnaround! Yue is letting his prized possession go!!! YAY!!! I think Touya will come back after he's had his fill of free life, realize that he misses Yue and go running back to him, but find that he's gone, and then go find him lol. But, that's just my take on it xD
GREAT CHAPTER!!! I really like it, so keep it up!! And good for Ralen....he deserved to die lol
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really don't like Touya right now.
What a change since I first started reading this! My first yaoi story! See me cheer our hero on! Which one? I've never been sure. On one hand, slavery is so teh suck. On the other...Yue and Touya are hawt *and* epic! There's angst, yes, but so much passion and love that if they could just get their heads out of they're respective asses, they could be oh so happy!! Yes? Maybe?
And then came Sakura and Syaoran and suddenly my hopes were pinned on a completely different couple. Here lay more angst but they found love so quickly I was pretty reassured.
Silly me.
The scene between Syaoran and Yue was perfect. P-E-R-F-E-C-T. How fitting, that Yue finally succumbs to the painful truth because of Clow's descendant. The moment is so important because Yue has already realized the nature of his love for Touya. All he had to do was accept it in all it's terrible reality. Which then makes what he's done to Sakura and Syaoran even more horrible. So why am I not so mad at Yue? *shrug* I guess I'm used to him being selfish. I don't expect our manipulative little moonchild to change in one day. But at least he was able to tell Touya that they did wrong. And he hasn't even cared for Sakura for as long as Touya, which brings me right back to my first statement.
Bad Touya. When I read the words "victorious smile", I wanted to do great harm to him. I know he's all super-protective-oniichan but I didn't expect he'd intentionally act in a manner that would so destroy her happiness.
“She’d never hate me,” Touya muttered, uncomfortably. He hugged himself, rubbing his arms. “And even if she did, at least she’d still be mine. It’s better than losing her forever.”
I swear, I recoiled when I read that. Poor Yue, to be faced with such a reflection.
I'd say that the only good that came out of all this misfortune would be dead!Ralen and defiant!Sakura. It's about time she put Touya in his place. Only now do I see how much their relationship paralleled his and Yue's to a lesser extent. He doesn't call her slave, but he does dictate much of her life because he believes he knows better. Earning her hatred may be a harsh lesson, but he's gotta learn before his very unhealthy love costs him everything he's tried to protect.
My Gawd, he's so much like Yue. You had this planned all along, didn't you?!! Now I have to read this from the very beginning to find the clues I've missed.
And so my babbling ends. What a long winded (and probably redundant) first review!
What a change since I first started reading this! My first yaoi story! See me cheer our hero on! Which one? I've never been sure. On one hand, slavery is so teh suck. On the other...Yue and Touya are hawt *and* epic! There's angst, yes, but so much passion and love that if they could just get their heads out of they're respective asses, they could be oh so happy!! Yes? Maybe?
And then came Sakura and Syaoran and suddenly my hopes were pinned on a completely different couple. Here lay more angst but they found love so quickly I was pretty reassured.
Silly me.
The scene between Syaoran and Yue was perfect. P-E-R-F-E-C-T. How fitting, that Yue finally succumbs to the painful truth because of Clow's descendant. The moment is so important because Yue has already realized the nature of his love for Touya. All he had to do was accept it in all it's terrible reality. Which then makes what he's done to Sakura and Syaoran even more horrible. So why am I not so mad at Yue? *shrug* I guess I'm used to him being selfish. I don't expect our manipulative little moonchild to change in one day. But at least he was able to tell Touya that they did wrong. And he hasn't even cared for Sakura for as long as Touya, which brings me right back to my first statement.
Bad Touya. When I read the words "victorious smile", I wanted to do great harm to him. I know he's all super-protective-oniichan but I didn't expect he'd intentionally act in a manner that would so destroy her happiness.
“She’d never hate me,” Touya muttered, uncomfortably. He hugged himself, rubbing his arms. “And even if she did, at least she’d still be mine. It’s better than losing her forever.”
I swear, I recoiled when I read that. Poor Yue, to be faced with such a reflection.
I'd say that the only good that came out of all this misfortune would be dead!Ralen and defiant!Sakura. It's about time she put Touya in his place. Only now do I see how much their relationship paralleled his and Yue's to a lesser extent. He doesn't call her slave, but he does dictate much of her life because he believes he knows better. Earning her hatred may be a harsh lesson, but he's gotta learn before his very unhealthy love costs him everything he's tried to protect.
My Gawd, he's so much like Yue. You had this planned all along, didn't you?!! Now I have to read this from the very beginning to find the clues I've missed.
And so my babbling ends. What a long winded (and probably redundant) first review!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. I kinda do hate you right now. ):
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This whole chapter was like torment. I honestly was about to cry at the end of this chapter. I didn't because I felt that even though no one saw me... well... Just that feeling... Hmmm. But almost. It was fantastic though. Very heart wrenching. If I had been in Yue's position during Sakura and Syaoran's display, I would feel awkward being there too. This happens any time I'm around a couple being very romantic, having a moment. I feel like I'm intruding. I'm glad that Yue finally had the nerve to let them both go. If only he'd done it before all this... But in return he and Touya have learned something valuable...about love. I can only hope things will turn out right in the end. Not much longer now; I don't want it to end, but it has to eventually.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh! it's such a maddening ending!
I want to take you by the shoulders and shake you until more writing comes out!
...Still, rabidly whipping an author around like a dog with a chew toy rarely made chapters write themselves any quicker.
I know for certain that this one will haunt me for a while.
On a lighter note, my head keeps putting in things that would happen if the cannon cast were to mysteriously show up.
Sakura would, of course, kick the void back to the curb in short notice, Li watching proudly. This would incite rage from Yue and his "Slave-Touya," something to the effect of "Wtf you fool, go save her" at which point Cannon-sakura's Yue an Kero would whoosh by and join the fray.
Double-take a few times, while Li smirks cooly and Sakura seals up Voidy-poo.
the "Nothing" card (or is it called the Hope now?) Would naturally go to great lengths to become friend with your version of Yue and the Void...much to their horror.
Heh, and now I'm rambling...
A very good chapter, but don't MAKE me come shake you.
I want to take you by the shoulders and shake you until more writing comes out!
...Still, rabidly whipping an author around like a dog with a chew toy rarely made chapters write themselves any quicker.
I know for certain that this one will haunt me for a while.
On a lighter note, my head keeps putting in things that would happen if the cannon cast were to mysteriously show up.
Sakura would, of course, kick the void back to the curb in short notice, Li watching proudly. This would incite rage from Yue and his "Slave-Touya," something to the effect of "Wtf you fool, go save her" at which point Cannon-sakura's Yue an Kero would whoosh by and join the fray.
Double-take a few times, while Li smirks cooly and Sakura seals up Voidy-poo.
the "Nothing" card (or is it called the Hope now?) Would naturally go to great lengths to become friend with your version of Yue and the Void...much to their horror.
Heh, and now I'm rambling...
A very good chapter, but don't MAKE me come shake you.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If a scream of complete and utter anguish can be communicated through a review, then please insert it here. I may be able to find it in my heart to love you again if you would kindly update soon so that our suspense is at least not dragged out longer than it needs to be. ^_^ Cheers.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i totally still love you but i wish you wouldn't have left me hanging like that.. lol im checking everyday.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've actually been following this story since long ago. The last time I read it (before catching up now) was when you were only up to chapter 15 or 16, and I'm so glad I found this again!
I must say, I almost always absolutely hate Yue in this. I love the way you've explained his character's selfishness and cruelty; it's fabulous! You make me want to love and hate him, in turn making me both love and hate Touya. Can't say that I dislike Shaoran and Sakura-tachi, though. =D
I cannot wait for you to update this. This is fantastic and amazing. I am supremely impressed, both with the work and with your dedication to it!
...PS: Poor Shaoran! ;-;
I must say, I almost always absolutely hate Yue in this. I love the way you've explained his character's selfishness and cruelty; it's fabulous! You make me want to love and hate him, in turn making me both love and hate Touya. Can't say that I dislike Shaoran and Sakura-tachi, though. =D
I cannot wait for you to update this. This is fantastic and amazing. I am supremely impressed, both with the work and with your dedication to it!
...PS: Poor Shaoran! ;-;
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are ... i am wordless. i've been looking forever and ever for a story that had just yue and touya, no yukito and i finally found it. and now you've got me addicted. like seriously, crazily, freaking obsessed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if i had a choice between a million dollars and this story, i'd choose this and die happy. i luv da tale you spin, i love the characterization, i love the characters (exception: ralen, ewww... but i like how u gave him more of a 3d role in this chapter), i love damn well everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you've done an absolutely awesome job!!! (not tht u need sum1 to actually mention it) and i'm just spellbound. and da BEST thing in da world is returning again and again for your story and finding not one but like three to four new chapters!!!!!!! i have no IDEA how u can do sumthin like tht but wow. waaaaaaaaaargh, n i'm so glad ralen's dead!!! n da last few paras are heartstopping. i'm dying in anticipation to see what's going to happen next!!! i can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IM ADDICTED!
FER SERIOUSLY
Please update soon!
FER SERIOUSLY
Please update soon!