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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Breathtaking.

And we do love you for it, though if you take too long to let us know if certain key people live or die, we may learn to hate you.
person Flinky
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...hey you updated on my birthday! :DD BEST BIRTHDAY PRESENT EVER.

Well, I can't say I'm sad about Ralen...that filled me with an undue amount of sadistic glee. *has cake to celebrate* But...but don't kill Syaoran. Please don't kill Syaoran. ;_; Don't give Sakura even MORE angst, the poor girl's been through enough already! (Okay, I just don't want you to kill him. ...PLEASE. ;___; I. I'll be your slave? *is crushed under the irony*)
person mewling
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
surprised. shocked. thrilled.

That's a pretty awesome cliffhanger.
person K.E.Y
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O i...holy shit...this...*to overwhelmed to say anything else* update it and hurry please!!! *falls and dies*
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha I bet people want to kill you for stopping here. XD
person Snapelicious
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You. Wouldn't. Dare. Syaoran WILL NOT DIE!!! I mean... kinda yea, Ralen's dead, but you absolutely can't kill Syaoran! Kero! Kero, come help, your brother's lost it! Eeek!

Touya! Go back to Yue, please? Make Sakura safe and go back to Yue, you deserve each other, he's pretty! ::whines:: Why am I pleading with fictional characters? Capitalist, you're wicked!
person vix111
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(I hate reviewing here, it hates my smilies. Second try at reviewing)
BEST CHAPTER YET! (although I think next chapter will be even better XD)
Ralen finally dies, too bad he couldnt pull the blackmail off, though. He had the chance to be smart, and be cool, and he fucked it up with his man instincts. Yet, we didnt really expect much from him -_-
Unfortunately, he died too fast; I dont think even Li got to enjoy his death XD
I know you wont kill Li, but could you please maim him a bit? *hides from the stone-throwing fangirls* Seriously, how stupid you have to be to forget the MAIN condition of Sakura's slavery? Only sakura and him knew about the deal, and he *forgot* about it. It wouldnt have stopped him either, but still...
Oh, and the battle that comes forth Touya and Yue must be epic. I expect flying furniture, insults and everything on it, maybe even some forced molestation :P
But methinks Touya wont be able to leave the castle easily, even if he is no longer a slave. I'll especulate more at the group ^_^
person I love converse
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. We knew Ralen had to get it at some point, but leave Li be, he is sexy after all :P

Looking forward to the next chap!
person nini
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::bows:: Well played! ^ ^ I can't wait for the next chapter... although I must admit I am upset I have to wait for what happens next! *jumps up in down* ^ ^
person yaoi_qt
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU SOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS CHAPPIE!!!!! Touya's free, Yue's piss, Li's in deep shit and Ralen just bought it(about time too.) OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! I can't wait for the next one... will Kero make an appearance??? Oh the DRAMA! ^~^

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