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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Madd Hatter
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you for updating this sooner than I expected, but I hope to dear lord you update the next one faster Dx
person cocoke5
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh the story is getting real good and i love the chapter and i can not beleve that tonya told yue that the deal was off. now what will yue do. i know that he love toya and what will happen to li. i can not wait for the next chpater of the story. i will be waitting for thenext chapter. up date soon. love the story .
person Nikki
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I have been reading this story for years, and I have been waiting for this chapter since the beginning. Wow.. thats all I have to say. Update soon cause I'm dying here. (sorry I haven't reviewed before, I'm a loser I know.)
person Silverwolfe
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! CLIFFIE!!! AN EVIL CLIFFIE!! I'm glad Ralen got what he deserved though...but Touya can't go away!! Yue will be cruel and evil again, and screw girls like they were doorknobs...each one would get a turn!!! NOOOO!!!
person Edith
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, you killed Ralen, finally.
I Love you.
I'm worried about Syaoran tough, but I know he can't die (well I hope so). I can't wait for the next chapter and see what Touya and Yue will do...
Saludos!!!!
person 0ri
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have no words. I'm stunned. I think this chapter has now replaced my previously favorite chapter. If you don't update I might just implode. o_o

person ayachan
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.. since it's so early and I need to go to bed, I've skimmed through this chapter. But the emotions still hit me like a ton of bricks. Hmm.. I don't know how I should feel about Ralen's death. I mean, it's great that he's dead, but then again, who's going to be the jackass in the castle that everyone loves to hate now? And Touya's thing just kind of confused me. After all he's been through, he just doesn't seem like the guy to call it quits.. well, but then again his sister was almost raped... Anyway, GREAT chapter! I can't wait to see what the next one is like!
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whispers* ooo, he's maadd... great chapter. can't wait to see what happens.
person Shadow Light
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Tgat was so friggin' beautiful. I swear that's like one of the best chapters I've ever read. It was so packed with drama. Oh your the best. I'm scared for Li but I can't help thinking that this was one deliciouly juicy chapter you made, till next time.

Ja na.
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You were right. That was an absolutely horrible cliffhanger. Of course I still love you, but I'm wondering how I can right about now.

I'm speechless. What can I say?

In any case, now Ralen is dead. Wow. And what a swift ending for him. But of course, like everyone else I'm sure, I hope Syaoran doesn't die. He just can't!

Ugh. Well, I really do hope the next update comes soon. That was terrible of you. :(

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