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I do not mean to sound terrible, and please do not take this the wrong way, but I sincerely could not enjoy this chapter. I have thoroughly enjoyed everything else, but this time around something felt skewed. Perhaps it was that the weight of this chapter focused on Sakura and Syaoran whose plot I am not the slightest bit interested in, though I understand that you, as a writer, are the only person who can choose who to center your chapters around. Or perhaps it was the disappointment that I felt upon learning that Touya never heard Yue's confession, and that the two haven't progressed in the way that I had hoped would. Yes, I think it was that which really put me off. I was amazed at your ending to Chapter 44. It almost brought me to tears when you so thoroughly described Yue holding the pillow to his chest as he admitted the words that we all have been waiting for. And yet Touya didn't hear them! Their plot has gone nowhere, and with such terrible timing! (with the conclusion of this fanfiction in sight). After Clow's ceaseless effort to get that part of Yue to mature and finally admit his love, he is still incapable of doing it! It frustrates me to no end to discover that, after almost half a year of living together, the best those two have accomplished is to live in relative harmony. Nothing more. Nothing less.

Touya is no better. Sometimes he acts like nothing more than a child and I do wonder what his motives for these actions are. Why would he fear such a confession from Yue? Why revert back to something as immature as silent tretment? It makes no sense to me! I cannot comprehend why these two would act in this way. In a way I am pleased that Clow has left the earth, so he cannot witness the absurdity of Yue and Touya's actions. At least he left the earth believing that Yue had finally opened his heart to another. Unfortunately he was not right in his assumptions.

I do hope that Yue does not only admit his love in the final chapter. That would severely disappoint me. I do hope some progress is made in their relationship soon. At least before the finale.

One question: will Touya ever dominate Yue?

I apologise if this rant offends you.

still love this story...

Hey! I found your story around a month ago and read the whole thing in two days lol, which was a horrible idea because ever since then I have been fervently waiting for each following chapter... I just wanted to say that this is one of the most provocative, well developed story lines I have seen in a long time. Kudos to you for creating such an addictive story! Though I hate the fact that, along with everyone else, I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. I have many thoughts on where this is going, but I know that you will bring everything together in the end... and hopefully, HOPEFULLY you aren't so cruel as to deny us our beloved pairings' happily-ever-after =P

~Fluffers

*P.S. Do you have a mailing list for when this story is updated? How about a link to other stories you have written?* Glycerine_7788@hotmail.com

ok...breathe...crap!!
Ok, Ralen, we all admit it: from being a rat bastard antagonist, you turned into a cool rat bastard antagonist. You just earned my repects man, even if we all love to hate you.
I completely understand the poor Sakura, people expect her to be stronger, but this isnt a situation for that. This is something completely different. Anyone would be scared to do what she did for the first time, and it did took her a lot of guts to go through with it.
I agree with sana-chan, I think Ralen will try to rape her and then blame Li. Now, if he can pull it off, then he'd become the best evil original character ever!
But still, my favorite part was where Touya asked Yue to do him rough XD
And if Yue *could* have kids, then the castle would be full of little Yues @_@

here's the art I promised you girl!

http://cocos111.deviantart.com/art/Yue-s-Slave-65008137

I'll send you a bigger copy to your mail :D

Hi there,

The end of chapter 44 was badly to bear. But the new one makes me beg you:
Pleas let us not suffer so long waiting!!!

Greatings
Juy Juka

I'm just glad 'fin d'affiare' didn't mean it was the end of the story.

can we just smack ralen upside the head and stake him out for the lions to eat, plz?
or is the rat-bastard going to be a conduit for the Void to get into the castle? His slimy little brain seems like the kind of place the void would be a t home with.

OMG!!! Poor Touya! I can't help but feel bad for him after what happened with Clow and Yue and everything...poor guy...and now Sayoran and Sakura are getting caught?? Nooooes!! They deserve to be happy after everything they've been through!!! Ralen should get a kick in his obviously non-existent balls!

Great chapter BTW! Keep it up!

Man, Sakura can't even handle lovely, probably peach flavored SYAORAN semen. She's gonna lose it at the weasel flavored stuff.

You know, it was a teensy bit annoying seeing Sakura act like Syaoran had fed her dead baby guts, or something, but that is building toward something so tense and gross and awesomely sadistic that I almost can't take it. I will seriously lose sleep waiting for this!

In other words, good job!

oh.. jesus... I'm going to do what you said and freak out. I'm going to sit in a corner and pretend like everything's going to work out now. Lol, man, can't they go a day without some kind of drama? :P

How's this - SHIIIIIIIIT!!!!! I just knew when I saw the title, "Fin d'affaire", which I'm pretty sure is french for "End of the affair", that something major was going to go down, and then I hit the last sentence. Oh, damn, this is so not gonna be good! Aside of Yue blowing yet another gasket, Touya will murder him most horridly, with or without Yue's permission! But at least Syaoran and Sakura are one step closer to full sexy goodness! On the other hand, I found I actually rather liked the backstory on Ralen, makes a lot of sense in the long run. Still, though, #46 is looking to be another of those five million steps backward chapters. Can't wait to see what happens, regardless. Laters!