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I was just waiting for it to happen.. just WAITING. XD I'm surprised you managed to draw it out so long without them being caught.. I almost thought Ralen would open the door and see them in bed together, but, no. Jaaaah so exciting, I wonder if Ralen is going to blackmail Li or turn him in? I almost felt sorry for Ralen in the pity paragraphs you did for him. ALMOST. But he's still a sick bastard.

Squee! Damn it...you are one of very few authors who can reduce me to an incoherent fangirl. But there you go. You've done it again.

Ah, getting that lovely close feeling in my chest that says the fic is almost done. Can't wait to see how Yue and Toya fair in the end of all this. Bravissima!

I knew I hated that rat bastard. Also, I had a feeling that he wasn't done yet but now I can only guess what he would do. Either, he'll tell Yue or try to use Sakura for his own advantage, THEN tell Yue. This is my guess as to what he's going to do. Just because if Yue learns of it, Ralen looses his favorite play thing. Either way, I still hate that stupid jackass. n.n; I'm beginning to wonder how many curses I will end up using in this review. Oh well, it's all legal anyways. xD

Moving on, I died laughing at the awkward feeling that quickly blossomed between Syaoran and Sakura. It was adorable but to mention it now, I don't really like that Sakura is portrayed as weak as she is. If anything, Syaoran is the weaker one because he couldn't weak the Final Judgment against Yue. Ancient magic, nothing. n.n; Sakura's heart and spirit always made her strong, despite anything else she may have been facing. Anyways though, ha ha ha. I had/needed to turn away from my computer just to control myself long enough to continue reading. All I was chanting in my mind was..."Awkward much~" but it was too adorable.

Oh yes, have I mentioned that I hate the stupid fucker named Ralen? If so, oh well, I'm going to keep going. I don't think I've ever hated any character more. Yue isn't one of my favorites. I enjoyed him more in the series, especially the anime because you could see his piercing silverish white eyes. I started watching it again for the maybe 6th time and each time Yue's eyes just send me over the edge. *Cough~* But that's not the point.

Okay, I know I am probably setting myself up for getting shot when I say this but really, I'd best admit it now. I hate YuexTouya. Well, maybe not hate, but it's not the reason by any means that I read the story. It is called Cardcaptor SAKURA after all. n.n; The moments with Yue & Touya almost bother me because it's everywhere. o.<; But I'm not blaming anyone for that. It just happens because so many people love it and what not.

Just to say this too, I am hoping so badly that things turn out well for Syaoran and Sakura, I'm sure they will by the end and what not, since well, most stories have happy endings and I would be beyond pissed if things ended up badly for them. xD Especially in this story. So much adversity, they need each other, damn it. D< <3 But yeah, I hope good endings for all~ ;3

Lovely story, btw~ xD Really. It's fantastic. <3 I wish and hope the next chapter comes soon.

[Continued from last review...]

But I'm not blaming anyone for that. People just love what they love and all that jazz. Not so much something they can help, or even would if they could. xD

I'm just hoping so badly things turn out alright for Sakura & Syaoran. I'd been more than absolutely pissed if they didn't, just because most stories have happy endings and what not. ;~; After so much adversity, they deserve each other. Just like, most of you agree, that Touya and Yue deserve each other in some awkward twisted way. xD I'm sure you'll bring good endings for everyone. Right? <3

Lovely story, btw~ I mean that too. Fantastic story. I am wishing and hoping deeply that your next chapter comes soon. <3

When you say 'freak out'... does it mean that the story will turn nasty?! [freaking out already...]
Please update soon - I want to see Ralen getting kicked out of the castle... although I'm sure it'll be still a long way before that happens if that were to happen at all. In the meantime... let's just say good luck to Syaoran? (Maybe kerobero will come back and save him in 3 days' time...)

(And I can't believe Touya still hasn't heard it from Yue yet! come on Yue! tie Touya up and force him to listen if you have to! just get it out! urgh... this is so frustrating!!! yea yea yea I know feelings/action is n times more meaningful than words but then again, I still think some things are better off properly communicated... now that all the obstacles are gone... aiii... come on!) [ya, getting a bit too emotional from the story...]

i love this story in never read yue tori storys before but now they are my fave couple keep up the good work and i hope tori can come to tuems with his feelings

WHA!!! WHAAA!!
Oh well, it couldn't last with those two. Some one had to catch them sooner or later. But GEEZ! Ralen, you bastard. You'd better not go check to see if he locked the door or not, sick, pervy pig in a wig! Someone needs to cut that man's balls off.

And YEA for Yue and Touya making up!

got to be kidding me....
How could you do that to them, poor Sakura and Syaoran, and just after that amazing moment. well i'm hoping that Ralen hit his head and forget about that whole matter...
Anyway your fic is amazing, I always end like this *o*

One of the things that caught my attention in this chapter that really moved me, was how coherent you were with the power and emotions running through Syaoran and Sakura. Sure, Yue and Touya are hot as hell, but people can't really put themselves in a slaves position.

During that scene with Sakura and Syaoran, it made me think back to my first time with a guy like that, not full blown sex, but just intimate such as they were. It just reminded me how scared I was my first time, and how powerful it feels and overwhelming when feeling that for the first time.
It's a very good feeling.

You did an excellent job writing this chapter.

Now, hurry up and write the next one plx!

I SO CALLED IT. I was hoping that wouldn't happen, but oh god it did! And I hate myself for calling that one.

I'm freaking out, damn it. I am. Hell is going to break loose. I can't imagine how infuriated Touya is going to be. Oh god, oh god, I wonder what's going to happen! I hope that you're able to write the next chapter a little quickly, or something... I mean, with a cliffhanger like that I don't know how patient I can be. I'll wait though, because damn it I have to. Ohhh, you evil, evil thing. <3