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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person yaoi_qt
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. omg..OMG!!! that was so good, i love it! will yue confess soon and oooooohhhh the trouble that syaron and sakura will be in. I can't wait for the next chapter.......!!!!
person priya
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wat a confession!!!!!! seriously....... i never ..... but did Clow had to go that far!? ok it lead to something good in the end.... but still!!! he didn't have to go that far!
but i have to say... this was ur most poetic chapter till now..... it was coz of clow i guess...if anyone would talk smooth n puzzelin at the same time it would be him.... silly magician. But the part i liked the best was the last line
'“I love you, Toya."
And somewhere else in the castle, in a high and lonely tower, an old clock stopped ticking at last.'
it was beautiful! n marked the almost certain end of that magician.... but one thing that i didn't understand was the bit bout Li... is he gonna turn evil or something??? I sure hope not!

Here's my take on Void!!!!! I just hope u like this! :)

http://chasva.deviantart.com/art/void-64774635
keep up the amazin work!!:)

person JuyJuka
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, Hello Capitalist,

English is not my native language, so I don't know how to descripe how greate, megnificant, nice, wonderfull, .... I could go on with the list, but I would have to get a dictionary for the translation into Englisch. I just can not descripe (neither English nore my native language) how I love this story. Just so mutch: I fond the story 3 days ago and skiped sleep since then to read it (although I have to go to work).

The exciting start, the hot scenes at Silken Flowers, the cage, the re-appearance of Tomoyo, ... Every body, reading so far, knows what I'm talking about.

I whish I could by a hardcover of it and put it aside in my other books. Would you minde if I would let make a hardcover for my selfe? Oh yes, you do not want to write into the reviews, so please send me an email to l.o.l@gmx.de if you minde or not.

Greatings
Juy Juka

(PS: Really the mentioned email account is mine.)
person dream_queen
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao...wow people really had problems with the title of you chapters? lol...this story is freakin amazing. It's the only CCS story I really like. Just..wow.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
daaaamn! just when i think it can't get anymore heartrending , you have to go and...! uugh, this was wondeful! in all honesty, i can say i hate you for leaving it there, lol.. but <(''<) setting that aside, please, please update soon! Thanks for sharing this, by the way!
person Rhian
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! He needed to say ?way way long ago. I love Clow so much right now for finally helping him realize that. Now, I wonder if Touya has become more clear with his own feeling right now?
person Mel
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story has so much going for it!! Please don't stop now! It took me several days to read through it all and I love it!!!! So... update soon? =)
person 0ri
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was unbelievably incredible. I don't even know what else to say.
person Madd Hatter
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot =3 I noticed how you squeezed in a hint as to how the Void could be defeated. A love so strong and was it pure? Bah, I'm bad with quotes... something along those lines as to where the Void cannot even destroy.

Anyway... I look forward to the next chapter. I hope Touya accepts Yue D:
person Minna
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. This chapter was very well done. Awesome, awesome!

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