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Well, the answer has come - Yue broke first! And how do I just now that the "crisis" that Syaoran is headed for begins with the letter "Ralen"? Can't wait for #45! Laters!

This was the best Chapter yet. I can't believe he finally admitted it. I still think everythings downhill from here seeing how Touya refuses to hear it.

eeeeeeeeeee! That was soooo great!! So did Toya hear hwat Yue said to him? Well I cannot wait to see what happens with these two and more so Sakura and Li because they were not really in this chap. just mentioned. But I suppose that hint about the future Clow said is good enough until the next chap. update. Well good luck with writting and your life outside if this fic!

I almost cried o-0. YOU MADE ME ALMOST CRY, and successfully made my heart flutter. I didn't know what to expect from this chapter, but oh my, oh my. I can't believe he finally said it! ...I can't believe that Clow slipped Touya some tongue XD

I'm going to go drown in textbooks now, so as to maybe gain ahold of my wit after that.

An update! You wouldn't believe how excited I felt seeing it! This chapter definitely depicted a different side of Yue; the side he longed to hide. I thought it was pretty sweet, the way Yue is so vulnerable and submissive around him. Clow and he really shared something special.

In a way, this was the final confrontation. For so long, you've had readers squirming in anticipation. Who does Yue love more? The answer I've come up with is that Yue loves them both equally. His love for Clow is incomparable to his love for Touya. Clow was a fatherly figure, a mentor, a person he was made to love. Touya was the one who shattered his cold heart, reheated it and made their love so genuine.

Still, I had butterflies when Yue thought 'Clow was kissing his Toya.' His Touya. I love the way Yue is so overprotective. It's endearing. The decision has finally been made. Clow shall be his eternally beloved master, but Touya has captured his heart. I also thought it was adorable how jealous Touya got when Yue and Clow shared their final kiss. Poor boy, Yue's got a lot to make up for in bed! (Ha ha!)

The last line in particular was my favorite. It was so simple, but its symbolic meaning brought a smile to my face. I'm not exactly sure what it represented specifically but I came up with: A) Clow's spiritual presence has finally come to a rest or B) Clow and Yue's 'timeless' love has finally come upon a conclusion. Or am I totally off on either?

I'm excited as always for your next update! (I'm such a stalker!) I'm hoping Touya'll hear Yue out and make his own final decision. And perhaps we'll see how Syaoran and Sakura's relationship has progressed. I'm kind of curious about Tomoyo's feelings as well. Have they subsided or is Tomoyo playing the 'self-less' beauty?

I should stop rambling and such but I remember you mentioned this story was originally based on 'Ai No Kusabi'? I actually went to check it out (the anime) and I was thrilled that I could pick out the similarities. One thing I do hope strays from the storyline is the end. I'd never be able to live it down if Touya and Yue die; especially dismembered (on Yue's part).

Write soon! I'll be checking constantly!

FINALLY1! THE NEXT ONE IS GOING TO BE...omg..omg ong YUE SAID IIIT :D

OH MY GOD!!!! HE FINALLY SAID IT!!!! COngrats! I love it! Write more...please..I am a slave to your story..PLEASE!!! I need this story to last! *gives you a cupcake with chocolate icing* ^-^

Squee. What a fantastic ending to such an exciting chapter! You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Man...usually yaoi fic writers can't carry an action scene to save their lives, but you leave me in awe with this one. Rock on!!

oh my...that...that bastard kissed Touya!!
ok, I'm lying, that was really hot XD
wow, just wow, that chapter just blew my mind. The writing was great, steadily rising to the confrontation. I've gotta say though, that my favorite line was
"I’d already created you to delight in bondage"
That sounds sooo kinky, and yet, it describes the situaton perfectly. Now, to just sit and wait to see how is he going to make Touya hear his confession. Even though you left it at a cliffie, I feel content with the revelation at the end.

Yue cracked first!

Good to see Yue and Touya's relationship finally moves onto a new stage... though it's a pity that we won't be seeing Clow again esp. now that I finally start to like him a bit more... Hm... (but I guess no regrets given we get to see Clow kissing Touya?!?!)
Very good chapter indeed. Please update soon~!!!