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Holy Shit, Yue said it first! My, my, that chapter was a doozy. It really is coming to an end, isn't it... And Clow knows about Syaoran and Sakura! It's too bad Yue doesn't know what he was talking about. He'll find out soon enough I suppose.

Yue's attitude, no, his whole persona changeds completely when dealing with Clow. He turns into an adoring little child who knows nothing but of the one he loves so much. It's hard to believe it's the same Yue, but I'm glad he's broken free of Clow. And with the clock no longer ticking we know that Clow is forever gone. It's an ending to that part... Now I only hope that Touya will admit his own feelings. I'm sure he will soon enough.

With all of Clow's talking, I can see why you had such a hard time. I'm sorry if I was pestering you! You did wonderfully though!

I'm very curious about the next chapter, after the ending to this one. It leaves no hint of what's to come, other than Clow's comment about Syaoran. I doubt he'll do anything just yet, but then again I'm probably wrong. I shall wait as patiently as I can!

Hey again. I really liked the ending of this chapter. The situation wherein Yue finally tells Touya he loves him was just awesome. I also thought Clow's interaction with Touya and Yue was really well-written. The part where Clow talks about his "creation" and Yue reminded me of Shelley's Frankenstein (except Yue is, you know, beautiful).

Anyway I commissioned a few pieces for this story awhile ago on this forum site, but then just earlier I was browsing the reviews and the artist already posted up the links, rofl, the story is too good (I gave her the link to the story at her request) There's actually one more couple piece so I hope we can look forward to that :)

but anyway, more~~

http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb139/lucie_en/sakuraxshao.jpg
I wanted to see Sakura's pretty butterfly lace dress in color and all

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Touya in his silk clothing that he is so unused to when he first arrives

Thank you for writing; for three years; for a great story!
-lili

Poor Yue!! I'm so glad he picked Touya though ;) no 1 says no to Touya!!!Awsome job Capitalist:D

Woah that was chilling and mysterious. I can't believe Yue said that out loud to Touya. @_@ And the clock stopped *surprised* what does this mean? (Yeah I'm slow T-T don't hurt me)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HOW DA HELL COULD U LEAVE IT DERE!!!
URE SO EVIL!!!!!
PLS PLS UPDATE AGAIN SOON
PLS

the wait till the next chapters frustr8ing :P

I am anon above..
muya mya? did i do something ood mya?
thats good!!! your welcome for whatever i dit :D

OH. MY. GOD!! In this chapter, I thought Touya or Yue was gonna die! My heart was in my throat the whole time! I liked it how Yue won't give up the information because of his pride and love for CLow...thats a good thing hes got goin there, so keep it up!! Great chapter!

i'm sorry if this offends clows fans but.... that freak job of a magician just had to come!!!! now i bet he's gonna twist poor lil yue's mind even more!!!! that poor angel is already confused as it is!!!!
but this was one heck of a chapter! i loved ur ver of the void.... not the demented child doll thing in the movie.....I just can't wait to see wat happens next!!!!!!
*waitin eagerly*
n thank u sana chan!!!!! n those fan arts were so awsome!!!! i loved chibi touya!!!!!

i'm in love with your story! it reads like the old romance novels i use to love only with more spicy erotica and angst. except my humble praise for i haven't read a really good story in a long while. let alone on one of my favorite anime. most always get to high chaps and stop leave me hanging and i'm an sooo estatic that you are continuing. (I know I full of it right :P) anyway i can't wait to see some more of sakura and syaoron relationship development. those two are my absolute fave.