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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-Squeals- Yet another wondrous chapter~ Thank you so much! X3 Anyways, to the rant on this chapter.. Grr! I hate Sakura! Well, not 'her', just the fact that she's so dang.. Happy and lucky! I mean, Touya, I'm sure, is not exactly happy, though we all know he's head over heels for Yue, however much he denies it! And here's Sakura prancing in daisies. -Pif- Plus, I'm beginning to think that she's enjoying her stay.. >.> I 'was' thoroughly convinced that no one can enjoy being kept in the same castle as Ralen, but now, however late this thought may be. XP
I must admit, I thought for sure when you mentioned 'second base' that they were actually er.. Going to go all the way. But I'm not disappointed that they won't, though I am a tad sorry for Li. Poor poor boy~ I'm wondering if Sakura, the innocent little thing XD, would actually er.. Take Meilin's advice.. I think she would be thoroughly embarrassed (who wouldn't on the first time?) but do it anyway, ignoring Li's probable protests. She can be stubborn when she wants to, I noticed.
On a last quick note before I depart, I liked the conversation between Kero and Touya the best, especially the moon and sun comparison. Keep up the good work and I'll be checking everyday for the update! No rush, though.. >.>; I know you're rather reliable on updates, but I like checking once a day for my favorite stories no matter the regular day. ^-^
I must admit, I thought for sure when you mentioned 'second base' that they were actually er.. Going to go all the way. But I'm not disappointed that they won't, though I am a tad sorry for Li. Poor poor boy~ I'm wondering if Sakura, the innocent little thing XD, would actually er.. Take Meilin's advice.. I think she would be thoroughly embarrassed (who wouldn't on the first time?) but do it anyway, ignoring Li's probable protests. She can be stubborn when she wants to, I noticed.
On a last quick note before I depart, I liked the conversation between Kero and Touya the best, especially the moon and sun comparison. Keep up the good work and I'll be checking everyday for the update! No rush, though.. >.>; I know you're rather reliable on updates, but I like checking once a day for my favorite stories no matter the regular day. ^-^
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I beat you review script!! It cut down my review again, but I was smart and copied it! in your face awful script!! actually...I think he hates my emoticons...:O
I've been late to review your chapters lately XD
Where to start...?
Kero and Ralen...Yes, thank you for the bullying! I love to see that guy getting bullied about, he is just too mean to Sakura.
Kero and Touya...kero does like playing the harbinger, right? Their conversation was great, I love it when authors make Kero actually smart (too many dumb him down) The look on Touya's face told him everything he needed to know about their relationship! Yay for Kero and his secrets! XD
Meilin and Tomoyo...I was actually wondering last week when would they be seen together. It was a great moment for them, and oportune for the "talk" Now Sakura is thinking dirty thoughts!! LMAO! I imagine Syaoran blushing all the way through, either way she decides (although she probably would go for the hand for starters)
aaaaandddd....
Finally, Yue and Touya...They are soo cute together, when they are not being all master/slave. The end, the dream said...so the dreams will end, meaning they served their purpose. Yue has realized whatever his subonscience wanted him to, which makes me think he is going to crack first! I like saying that word, crack...crack...
Touya's psychic powers are developing and that makes me wary though...he is just too worried about Yue to be normal. And Yue should know better than to not pay attention to what Touya feels. I gotta say I love transitional chapters, they develop the story much more than all the important ones XD
I've been late to review your chapters lately XD
Where to start...?
Kero and Ralen...Yes, thank you for the bullying! I love to see that guy getting bullied about, he is just too mean to Sakura.
Kero and Touya...kero does like playing the harbinger, right? Their conversation was great, I love it when authors make Kero actually smart (too many dumb him down) The look on Touya's face told him everything he needed to know about their relationship! Yay for Kero and his secrets! XD
Meilin and Tomoyo...I was actually wondering last week when would they be seen together. It was a great moment for them, and oportune for the "talk" Now Sakura is thinking dirty thoughts!! LMAO! I imagine Syaoran blushing all the way through, either way she decides (although she probably would go for the hand for starters)
aaaaandddd....
Finally, Yue and Touya...They are soo cute together, when they are not being all master/slave. The end, the dream said...so the dreams will end, meaning they served their purpose. Yue has realized whatever his subonscience wanted him to, which makes me think he is going to crack first! I like saying that word, crack...crack...
Touya's psychic powers are developing and that makes me wary though...he is just too worried about Yue to be normal. And Yue should know better than to not pay attention to what Touya feels. I gotta say I love transitional chapters, they develop the story much more than all the important ones XD
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Ralen shivering in terror on the floor, so nice... And Keroberos and Meilin are, as usual, hysterical, though the conversation between Kero and Touya was interesting. And poor shy, timid Sakura, she's so cute when she's blushing! Not done before the third birthday? No, not really surprised. In fact, does it have to end at all?! Just kidding... Well, it'll definitely be interesting to see what's next, and was that actually Clow who's been tormenting poor Yue's dreams?!?! Whoa, the evil blighter... Well, looking forward, as always, to next chapter! Laters!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much! I'm so happy I can finally read it directly off this site before I have to go back to school (where the have a blocker to keep me away from AFF). Anyway, excellent as always, I look forward to the next chapter
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a lighter, happier chapter than we've seen in awhile. I rather enjoyed it; also hearing the things Kero told Touya, it somehow didn't surprise me at all. Yue really is a very dependent creature, as his dream shows. It looks like he's finally realized it for himself. I just wish that one of them would admit their feels to the other sometime soon. But seeing as there is still so much of the story left I get the feeling it isn't going to happen.
It was nice seeing Meilin and Tomoyo together for once! It really reminded me of the anime, seeing them all together and Syaoran's quiet uncomfort. But of course the things the three of them talked about--it's just like some teenage sleepover, because that's what best friends talk about sometimes. Certainly nothing the 10 year old Sakura from the anime (or manga) would talk about. It was so cute, too!! She's so modest, it's just unbelievably cute. Especially at the mention of Syaoran never getting to know her bed. XD I giggled when I read that.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! It's hard to say what will happen next, when you end in a dream like that. Which reminds me... Did Touya have some sort of sense as to what the Void was thinking, or was that a dream telling him what it was thinking? Oh-ho... If the Void thinks that it smells like Yue, then it must know that he spends a lot of time with Yue, thus he is something important to Yue--something that in taking would help in its defeating Yue. >_> Oh man, that was long winded. Okay, okay! This is the end of the review. I LOVED IT!
It was nice seeing Meilin and Tomoyo together for once! It really reminded me of the anime, seeing them all together and Syaoran's quiet uncomfort. But of course the things the three of them talked about--it's just like some teenage sleepover, because that's what best friends talk about sometimes. Certainly nothing the 10 year old Sakura from the anime (or manga) would talk about. It was so cute, too!! She's so modest, it's just unbelievably cute. Especially at the mention of Syaoran never getting to know her bed. XD I giggled when I read that.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! It's hard to say what will happen next, when you end in a dream like that. Which reminds me... Did Touya have some sort of sense as to what the Void was thinking, or was that a dream telling him what it was thinking? Oh-ho... If the Void thinks that it smells like Yue, then it must know that he spends a lot of time with Yue, thus he is something important to Yue--something that in taking would help in its defeating Yue. >_> Oh man, that was long winded. Okay, okay! This is the end of the review. I LOVED IT!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, holy shit. Yue's going to fucking freak out over that last dream. EXCELLENT! We haven't had a visit from "dream Touya" in a while though. I loved the concept of the sun and the moon! Wow, that was fantastic! And it was nice to see Ralen gone for a few day.. whew, thank god! I'm glad that Sakura's so happy ^^ But that sentence about breaking the tradition and reading to new loved ones just broke my heart. It's going to be hard for Touya to let Sakura go. Haha, I'll stop mad rambling now :) Can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck on it and keep up the good work!
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Fantastico!!! ^_~ oh naughty Li *hits with w/ newspaper* So a new beginning/end is arising *thinks* can't wait to figure it out.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! When I started reading you had 39 chapters and now I've caught up with the most compelling fanfic I've ever read. Really I think Touya has an idea about his sister and the 'brat'.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, oh man, I don't know where to review anymore! I guess both is ok though. But great chapter!!! Gah, I'm scared for Syaoran if he is the one that makes Sakura's collar change. Ralen getting pummelled to death would make me cheer, but Syaoran.. oh man, that's going to be interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice peaceful chapter ^_^
I got to review until today, busy as hell on the weekend.
Kero's got the brother thing down, he feels sometimes like the older one (and I like to think of him as the older one too XD) and he never did like Touya in canon very much. You are ebil, you said he was getting past second base and we all assumed they were gonna do it. But they didnt. EBIL!
I hope Kero stays for a while, we need a kero/ralen confrontation already!!
So much for locking the door at nights <_< but she should help him a bit *wink wink* but this way she is still somehow innocent. Syaoran is forgetting that Yue wont give up Sakura because its part of the deal with Touya! Yes, I figured it out!! I was re-reading it, and it just has to be the deal. It can't be anything else. And since I was re-reading it all, in retrospect, I don't know why i thought back in the chapter 37 that Yue was talking to somebody that wasn't Touya, perhaps I was forgetting about Yue's dreams. It was a very nice effect having the dreamscapes in the same dimension, given enough power they could walk into each other's dreamscapes (O_O dreamseers!!) I wonder if Clow will pester them more soon, or if he'll wait it out...XD
I hope Touya's powers develop more than in canon, though. What good is to see things and not being able to do something? And I notice how Sakura knows now how to fight, and that will develop nicely once she can use magic.
I'll be joining the group, finally have some use for that yahoo account. And I still havent forgotten about the art I promised, but it will take me a while to finish it, you keep writing faster than I can draw (which is a good thing ^_^) and the drawing just has to be perfect. See you next chapter!!
I got to review until today, busy as hell on the weekend.
Kero's got the brother thing down, he feels sometimes like the older one (and I like to think of him as the older one too XD) and he never did like Touya in canon very much. You are ebil, you said he was getting past second base and we all assumed they were gonna do it. But they didnt. EBIL!
I hope Kero stays for a while, we need a kero/ralen confrontation already!!
So much for locking the door at nights <_< but she should help him a bit *wink wink* but this way she is still somehow innocent. Syaoran is forgetting that Yue wont give up Sakura because its part of the deal with Touya! Yes, I figured it out!! I was re-reading it, and it just has to be the deal. It can't be anything else. And since I was re-reading it all, in retrospect, I don't know why i thought back in the chapter 37 that Yue was talking to somebody that wasn't Touya, perhaps I was forgetting about Yue's dreams. It was a very nice effect having the dreamscapes in the same dimension, given enough power they could walk into each other's dreamscapes (O_O dreamseers!!) I wonder if Clow will pester them more soon, or if he'll wait it out...XD
I hope Touya's powers develop more than in canon, though. What good is to see things and not being able to do something? And I notice how Sakura knows now how to fight, and that will develop nicely once she can use magic.
I'll be joining the group, finally have some use for that yahoo account. And I still havent forgotten about the art I promised, but it will take me a while to finish it, you keep writing faster than I can draw (which is a good thing ^_^) and the drawing just has to be perfect. See you next chapter!!