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Forgot to say happy birthday! You got your 1000 reviews and so much more!

umm.. wow.. yeah, totally did not see that coming! But it was very exciting!!!! Now to figure out what magical powers Touya has which made the monster actually stop attacking him! And that was a very awkward sentence, LOL. Maybe Clow is magically protecting him in some way? And I want to see what happens between Sakura and Syaoran (wow, never in my life would I thought I'd be saying something like that :P). But GREAT chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!

I guess there is just absolutely nothing that I can complain about this chapter. It's just awesome~!
I wonder if Syaoran had the guts to ask Yue for Sakura as his reward... and if Sakura can convince Touya that she loves Syaoran and that he accepts the two together (ignoring the slim chances here...), just what are the chances that Yue would say yes... Hopefully Yue will not forget that he has still to grant Syaoran his reward and that we'll soon hear about it in the next chapter or two~~! (or is that my wishful thinking?)

oh how wonderful T-T
i thought Li was going to..uh...you know?..with Sakura
and SEEEE!!!! SHE ALMOST GOT TOUYA KILLED....AGAIN!!
%#@E&%$@$*$&%#^%&$@%^&$%$*&$!!!!

*sips tea*
very good job as always, i have been waiting for that chapter ^O^

oh aaand..your a girl!!
wow, im so happy to finally know..
sry *blush*
it's not that i ever wonderd if you were a guy or girl
but like..i just had no clue?!
*slaps self across face*
i am sorry oh wonderful writer..T-T (oww..my face)
but Haza! now i know your a girl, and a very talented one at that :)

OMG!! That was so unexpected! Damn lizard things....I'm more ad at what Li's cahracter did! I'm sure that he'll ask Yue by the end of the story...if he doesn't let them go first...I think that's what's going to happen...maybe. Yue is going to die*sob* and Touya will not be happy and be regretful, until Yue somehow comes back. Maybe lol.

Speculation Time!!!

The monsters are going to start targeting Toya for some reason....Right...RIGHT!!! Pet me on the head and tell me that I am right. *smiles* Since the little monsters tell the Void what they see and know, the Void now knows 'something' about Touya. That's why it sniffed at his head. What would make the void of life so interested in Toya. Is it obsessed with Toya's powers like Naku-chan in the manga and anime. What will Yue do if Touya is consistently targeted.

OOOhhhhhhh...its so exciting!!!

Of course, I would like to know what the heck is going on in Sayoran's thick head. I really never got the extreme antagonism between the two men in Sakura's life. They share certain characteristics so you would think that they would at least respect each other even if they didn't like each other but noooooo.

I have no means to speculate over Touya's reaction to Sayoran perhaps getting Sakura. Following your story, it is likely to be negative but the anime leaves me doubting. Here, Touya is more than a little mysognistic but that is not surprising seeing that BOTH his mother and his father is dead leaving him to hold the bag. In the anime and manga, although Touya is very protective, he isn't necessarily overbearing. Afterall, both always imply that he knows a little of what is going on. He is aware that Sakura is doing dangerous things. But, he never directly interfers or trys to restrain her. He protects from a distance. The anatagonism against Li is a side affect of the fact that he thinks Li will try to take her away. Nevertheless, he doesn't interfer between them ultimately even though he could have. Nevertheless, I can't help to think that a little of Touya's apparent antagonism is just his brand of teasing. He calls his sister a monster and Li a brat. Touya doesn't give such 'pet' names to people he doesn't like at least a little. Thats just my take on it which leaves me in the dark for predicting any interaction between Sayoran and Touya.

Until next time (which could be another review for this chapter *smirk*)

You know, you should start up a discussion board for this story. A yahoo chat group or something) There are so many interesting people that read this story that I am sure they would enjoy chatting with each other about what they think of the characters. And of course, we would all like to 'meet' you and figure out a little about how you mind works. I enjoy reading the reviews for your story almost as much as I enjoy reading your story. Some of them make me want to write an AU of your AU (although I wouldn't dare. I would be a sore disappointment being rather ineloquent myself).

This chapter was certainly unexpected, but Kero DID warn Yue that he wasn't fulfilling his duties like he should, so it's good he's got the point now.
I've seen all the movies of CCS, but was confused as to what you were talking about, but when you explained it more, a 'ooh' moment occurred.
In my opinion, I'm glad Syaoran wasn't naive enough to openly say that he wants Sakura, at least right now. For 2 reasons:
1. Touya was in the room.
The reason being, is that he would not stand for it, and he's supposed to be submissive right now. As of now Yue enjoys his domestic stag, and wouldn't want to deal with his anger.
2. Yue had just got done saying how he was so happy Syaoran kept his slave safe. He likes Sakura, and wouldn't want her harmed, but he also spent a pretty penny on her.

I'm sure he comes up with some idea though, because he gets laid next chapter.
I think the more logical way for him to ask would be for her to be free. Not "Can I keep her?" and I'm sure he's smart enough to go with the freedom thing, because her collar gets taken off and she can get it as much as she wants then and no one has to know.

YAY!!!...you've updated so fast....I really like this chapter...whne Yue finally realizes
that Touya as a submissive is a no go...hehe...keep up the good work...

YA NE!!

Oh my god. My heart is pounding and my entire body is shaking. I'm completely in tears and have been since Yue almost confested that he loves Touya (well he said 'adores' but its close to love!). This is hands down the most beautiful fan fiction I have ever read. I'm not joking about anything. Yue is so in love with Touya that he is willing to give him anything for the boy's happiness even if it broke his heart in the process, so no wonder he is so angry that Touya left - life with Yue ISNT that bad!! I believe this fic is the true definition of love. This is the most beautifuly writen fan fiction out there. If I wrote half as well as you, I'd truly be an amazing writer. Thank you so much for writing this and posting this. It really made my heart melt.

I don't think I'll ever stop crying (and that's a good thing)
Cute-but-Psycho.

P.S. I don't think I've ever cried this much in my life.