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...Damn it! It's so terrible of me, but...I wish Yue had raped Sakura. Oh, God. There I said. That horrible, sadist side of me forced me to do it! I swear! *runs away to cry in a corner*

Great chapter, by the way!

*conks herself on the head* Silly me, I was so distruaght over the (odd...okay, disturbing)feeling of saddness at not seeing Sakura raped that I forgot to mention everything else!

First off, Happy Birthday! How old are you going to be? Although, you might've said it and I just wasn't paying attention...oh, well.

Second,I've decided, that if at all possible, it'd probably be in the best interest (for the reader's sanities [or is it 'y'? Gahh...]and for the sake of your windows[you don't want angry fans beating them in with oh, let's say rocks and bats])if you would post the next two chapters at the same time. I don't think many of us would survive the agony (not to mention anxiety) of waiting to see how Li does get past second base with her. (Speaking of, if he teaches her to play baseball and she just gets to third base, I'll be so angry!!) While the Yue/Touya sex gets me all worked, I'm dying to see a little boy/girl action kicking....that doesn't involve Ralen! That little freak...grr.

Third, I was just positively purring when Yue raped Touya. (Sadistic side of me again. It nearly rules over me. I attempt to beat it down with thoughts of cute and fluffy kittens, but it just doesn't stay!)It was just so...intense. It wasn't by far one of their more-detailed sexcapades, but dang....woo. *fans herself*

Hello Hello! I've been reading this story faithfully through for the last several weeks but this is my first review. To which I must say I LOVE IT. The characters are incredible and you have a great writing style. Seriously, I've been sitting and reading to the point of tears at parts, biting my nails at others and screaming at various characters in still others. You are a good writer and I'm super glad to have the opportunity to read your story. I only hope the next chapter will come soon too.

Specifically on this chappie though. I was dreading the moment with Sakura. I somehow knew that something like this would happe. When you wrote how Yue was thinking of what would hurt Touya the most, I instantly thought Sakura and then felt a pain in my chest for what might happen to her. (Thats props to your great writing) Thank goodness you saved her. BUt could Syaoran be anymore of a wuss? I know he was told not to disturb them on pain of death, but seriously, its the woman he loves! You'd think he'd do anything for her. Hopefully he'll redeem himself in future chapters. When are they going to be found out? Are you putting anymore Keroberos in the story. HE was a fun character. Anyway, thanks for the amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG!!!!!!!!
dis is kool!!!!
but now dat yue has broken touya's spirit, will he like him dat way?
pls pls pls update soon

Here I am again writing another review for the same chapter, but I felt I missed mentioning something that needed to be mentioned. I wanted to thank you for showing the depth of love that some siblings can have for each other. To do what he has for Sakura in the past in remarkable in and of itself but to completly submit and give up the last thing he had, the last power over Yue (his dignity and pride) for his sister is truly impressive. I just wanted to say thanks because very few writers in all the fanfics I've read have so beautifully and masterfully described the kind of relationship I have always thought that they had. Your protrayal is perfect, so thanks. On that note, I'd also like to say Touya finally won. Other readers may disagree but I think he finally beat Yue. Everything he has ever done as been to protect Sakura and he has always insisted he wasn't a slave. And when he is finally broken, he is FORCED to say it. IT doesn't come as endearment or love for Yue, it comes at the hands of protecting Sakura from a fate worse than death (probably in his mind anyway) He ran from Yue to reclaim his freedom and he is only giving it up now for his sister. Yue was right when he noticed (during the dancing, music scene) that there was no room for Yue in their perfect existance. This has proven it. Yue can take everything from Touya except his love for his sister and he is a slave to that relationship first and foremost and secondly to Yue and that won't change. TOUYA WON!! Anyway, this was just a long review to say what an immensely excellent job you've done in writing this and how I applause you for the depth you added to the story in just this chapter. Can't wait for the next! :)

I must say, I came looking for some quick well written sex, and instead found a quite intriguing story. I've always loved the touya*yue pairing.

I read all 20 chapters at once, from midnight to almost 4 AM. I hope you update this often, because I'll be looking to see what happens!

I love all these twists and turns in this story! I wonder how long Touya can manage staying so docile... Can't wait to read more - thanks so much for the update!

And last but not least, Happy Birthday!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! And I was thinking again about this story. After reading a couple of reviews, I thought, How the heck DOES Syaoran get some action by the next 2 chapters? unless, besides the conjectures Sorpiniac put out, Sakura and Syaoran both get swept up in the moment and are trashy romance noveled. XD In the aftermath, however, how is Touya going to know, since he no longer has dinner with her anymore? And when he does find out he'll probably freak out madly, although how he is going to take action I'm not sure, considering his current relationship with Yue. One thing I'm also looking forward to is whether or not Yue and Touya take their evening meal together now. Before the escape occurred, when Touya always had dinner with Sakura, I always wondered about what a Touya/Yue tableside conversation would be like. But now, seeing as to how their relationship is all master/slave, they probably won't be eating with each other I suppose; Yue will probably make Touya sit on the floor or something.

Aah so many questions. but anyway HAPPY BIRTHDAY, YET AGAIN!!!!!

Happy Birthday dear Author!!!
May this year your wish come true n u also write more chaps of this fic. XD

This chap was really hard fo' me to read. Touya's helplessness was really painful.
I am so lookin forward to ur update~
hopefully coming chap will be more better for touya.

OMG I FORGOT! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! hope u get those thousand reviews lol