rate_review Reviews

Hello,

As far as I know, I was always against thinking on the lines of gayhood or lesbianism. Sometimes I think it was because I was always told it was gross, and other times simply because I am straight. I could never think it.

I could never.

But then, for the first time, I came across some stories about Touya and Yukito on FF.net, where Peacewish introduced me to the world of loving someone unconditionally, ignoring their sex. I didn't cringe in disgust, I didn't close the page and runaway. I was reading...gladly.

And today, I came across your story. Your story telling is exquisite, and I will have to say that it is very similar to Peacewish. Because even Peacewish, sometimes, never mentioned Eriol.

Everything has invaded my senses. The emotions, the lust, the coupling...everything!

Of course, I read your other two stories before I read this one, and those were brilliant as well. The idea, the plotting...simply brilliant. Yue has truly been inspiring for me. I've been dying to write a tale of Yue's, because I'd never used him before. His character, his personality somehow falls in easily now. I'm not stealing, mind you. I'm proud to say that I look at Yue in a way I've never before.

God, I can be melodramatic. This must be your first review with so much drama filled in, but I think I was on the verge of tears when Touya fled to his sister's side after Yue granted him freedom. And of course, when he was whipping Touya. I couldn't breathe for the next two chapters. The emotions, the feelings...were all too real for someone like me, who doesn't believe in too much gayhood and romance. And then, when Touya kissed him for the first time. I will safely say that I can actually understand their love, and not question it even a little.

My boyfriend's going to freak, knowing my ideas on homosexuality has changed so drastically with only a few stories. Do you know that he's been kissed on the cheek by a lesbian and I swore never to kiss his cheeks ever again? lol. He's been showing off those pictures for months. And finally, I can look at them and breathe in peace.

Anyway, hopefully the code I enter next will not be incorrect, and I'll be sending this review to you in no time. I hope I have not offended you in any way. Do not be. I know this might just be another reviewer, writing off silly tales about your tale. But I just had to, you know? Tell you everything I feel 2.04 in the morning. :)

Will keep reading.

Praty.

P.s: I'm joining AFF.net just for you!

It's so sad to have to come to the end of this absolute jewel of a story. I can't remember when I started reading it I know it must have been at least 2 years already and every time I would get to the end of a chapter I would wait anxiously for the next update hoping it would come out soon but not wanting you to rush and make it short. I decided to wait until you had come to the end before reading it again and I have to admit I did forget about it. But no more than 4 days ago I was watching a CCS video of TxY and wondered to myself where it was at this point. I was so happy to see that it was finished though in these past few days I really wish I hadn't ever looked at it. With classes still going and final papers needing to be typed I couldn't stop reading I swear to you I even went 2 days straight with no sleep trying to both read this story and my text for class. But it was worth it, I love the TxY pairing and it's not easy to find stories with such an in-depth plot about them. Your writing style is so beautiful and straightforward; it’s easy to see how much time and effort you've put in to it. As I kept reading this story I had always wondered to myself if you had ever considered being a published writer, I was glad to see in your afterword that that's what you plan on being. I consider this to be one among a very short list of stories that I hold in very high regards and though it has come to an end I hope to see more wonderful works from you whether they be fanfics or original and published.

Love this story so much this is the 5th time ive read it but... none of the links to fanart work anymore... could u perhaps email them to me? or give me another link?

I enjoyed your story immensely. It was full of excellent detail with a compelling and intriguing plot. One of the best Yue/Touya fictions I have ever read. And I would have been disappointed if you had paired Sakura with anyone else but Syaoran. So thank you for sharing it with all us readers. It was a great read and you should be very proud.

Angel

Oh boy, where to start. Obviously, this has been done for a while, so I don't know if you'll ever look at it, but I just want to thank you for giving me the most profoundly embarrassing experience I've had on this site. I usually roam around the dark corners of aff.net looking for stuff to laugh at and link later to exasperated friends, but after skimming the first few chapters of this a couple years ago, I was horrified to find myself actually getting hooked in, and equally horrified at finding both plot and the, uh, racier material more compelling. Later, I felt guilty. Horrified and guilty. Not enough to stop reading, though.

I read all your author's note stuff at the end, and I recall thinking throughout my initial, ah, excursion, that while the characters were certainly in line with how they should behave (at least to the best of my knowledge and instinct, since I only saw about half the show when I was a young teenager) in this specific setting, the setting was so far removed from the original series that this could be made into a fully original piece (just picture the embossed cover!) without much fuss. I don't know if this is just my way of rationalizing finding an erotic fantasy story based on a children's cartoon show both interesting and really hot, but I still feel this way. Speaking as someone who pretty much solely visits aff.net to find humor in the contributors' often-feeble, sometimes-disgusting attempts at sharing what revs their engines, the amount of care you put into your writing is both unusual and strangely heartening. Even though I'd be unlikely to buy something like this in a bookstore proper, I'd like to think that other people would, and enjoy it. So I hope you will consider writing professionally, like you say in the notes.

I haven't written any fanfiction since I was about nine years old (none of it made it online, thank god), but I do write a little bit in general every now and then, and liberated by the anonymity of the internet, I think I can finally admit to someone without too much embarrassment that I finally had the experience of reading a fanfic that actually succeeded at what it was trying to do. That someone might as well be the author. So, thanks for leaving a surprised giggle-seeker with more than just giggles.

-a. visitor

Hey *waves* recent inductee to this fic here, read it all over the course of a couple of shifts at work, and like WOW, rollercoaster or what, with the happy, and the sad, and the nailbiting, and so on and so forth (you should know, you wrote it after all). lol. Really, just brilliant!!!

All I can say is wow. I have been reading this story for a couple of days now, and have sacrificed sleep because I couldn't stop myself. The funny this is, I have no idea what CCS is really all about. I've never watched Anime, and have never been into Manga. But this story still grabbed my attention. Obviously it is worthy being turned into an original piece! I love it! I usually don't review on here either cause I don't have an account, but I feel as if I couldn't not say something, it seemed wrong after enjoying your story so much. So I believe this is my second review ever on AFF, so you know your story was amazing! I'll admit I'm happy I didn't read it as you were writing, cause I don't know if I would have the patience to wait 3 and a half years to see the end!

i loved it and it was such a hidden gem amongst the plotless shtuff that i usually encounter! thank you so much for a wonderful story!

I just recently found this monster of a story, and I read it in about 4 days. I have never before become so devoted to finishing one story, and I have never read such a long story before. I would stay up almost all night to read this, because I needed to find out what happened next. This is possibly the most epic fanfiction ever, and it was so beautifully written. If you ever do make it in the literary world, please tell me, because I know it would be great.

God i really love you story , is so beautifully written , and the relationship between touya and yue is so intense (and so hot) , I really wish you luck in all you future proyects, you have a chilean fan!