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I dont think touya really is broken. he has no option but to act like a slave right now. but yue wont want touya to be broken, cos then he will be boring like yue`s other slaves. its sad Yue has gone back to treat touya horribly. he should find a way to understand touya, not hurt him.
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This story is the only reason I come to this website. I check it a lot, and every time a new chapter appears I squeal with glee. Your writing style is so elegant, and you capture every detail in such lovely ways. Even the most brutal parts you manage to beautify. At the end of this chapter, though, I find myself feeling a bit broken inside, too. Touya has gone and spoiled everything! If only he'd remained well-behaved like a good boy, and listened to his heart (which told him to stay), then everything would have turned out fine.

But gosh, when Yue had Sakura on the bed, I was really nervous. I couldn't possibly imagine Li's devastation to see her collar black, seeing as he got so defensive when she and Tomoyo were fooling around. Li has gotta mellow down about everything, though. Sakura's life has been tough, and it's not going to be easy for her to be the ideal girlfriend when she's got that collar on her neck.

But something worse than the collar, I think, is Clow's necklace. It must burn Touya's skin like fire, especially now that he's got the idea in his mind that Yue abhors him and will never forgive him, and that Clow will always be first in his mind. (Which I would like to refute, since Yue has anger management issues and a stern possessiveness over his /loved/ one. Shh, I didn't say that.)

Anyway, I would love to thank you for how you inspire me with your writing and gripping storyline to try and write well, too. Emotions like this are difficult to capture in words, and I want to try and be like you and write them just as articulately. It'll be a goal for this summer, that's for sure! But you can count on me to always come back and read the adventures of Yue and Touya. Thank you so much.

WOW what a sad chapture. I would have throught that Yue would have more compassion, but I trust that you know what you are doing with the story. I think that I was about to cry. Well can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapture. Till next time!! Love the story lot and this is still my fav story of all time!!!!

-Inulover16

On the subject of Syaoran "working hard" next chapter before getting to be with Sakura fully in #41, the following possibilities --

One: #40 will involve some "Fastfoward" action as we dial foward quickly to get to the point when Syaoran finally has the gold he needs to buy Sakura.

Two: He starts putting in some hard over/double time to try and earn the rest quicker, feeling Yue may finally turn his attentions to Sakura fully.

Three: He goes to Meilin and asks her for a loan and/or she gives him the rest he needs as a gift(it has been stated she's a highly popular dancer and dance instructor, I'd imagine she has a fair amount of gold from her paying customers in the local bank!).

And four: possibly a mix of 2 and 3 above. Past these, the only real possibility to Syaoran even getting away with having sex with Sakura right now would be if Ralen finally just lost it and raped her outright(though then he'd have to try and frame someone else while calling her a liar, but that takes us back to how gullible Yue is, and also to whether or not Sakura would even tell, though her collar would be screaming it loud and clear for her.).

Well, that's all for me for the moment. Laters!

Well, if nothing else, I am thoroughly repulsed and astounded. I assumed that following Touya's and Sakura's escaping, something would happen but not something for the both of them together in the manner it happened. But in the end Yue got what he thinks he wanted and yes I say, thinks. I'm quite sure that after a rather short time of loveless devotion it will begin to gnaw at Yue and he will start asking for small liberties from him. Such as: saying "I love you," kissing him with "feeling," etc. Things that show real attachment and caring. He'll think that it won't matter if he orders it or not, he will get what thinks he wants.

Anyways though, the embarrassment Touya felt at seeing his sister in such a way, naked at least, was kind of weird. I'd think that, if anything, he be paying rapt attention so he could see how far Yue would go before his mind could work out what to do, but ah well. it was sort of cute though, I could imagine it rather easily and sort of half-heartedly giggle. I'm sure that sounds rather peculiar and almost deranged but oh well.

I was vastly disappointed with Li. I half wonder if he is so shallow. She was touched by another man beyond her will and he couldn't stop and yet he ranting about how she left? She is a prisoner, unlike him, so I could halfway understand though I was exceedingly bitter about it.

Speaking of being a prisoner, I pondered the theory of: since Yue can't understand freedom since he was created for the use and purpose of another unlike real humans, would Yue have tried to escape Clow had he not be created for him? I thought it was something worth mentioning at least. Because, like most anyone knows, human aren't made with predetermined destinies in mind. [I'm not religious so asserting otherwise is rather pointless in my case.] So unlike to Yue, Touya needs freedom, he was born and lived up till then bound to no one. Yue, even now, only knows servitude. Which I think is why he can't understand Touya's reasoning and needs at all. He's selfish and misguided, to be frank.

All that aside though, great story. I do so hope to see more from Sakura and Syaoran, good and bad. I sort him to see him excerpt more of his "knightly-ness" from before. It's more or less vanished to his selfish and shallow nature of the moment.

Hope to read more very soon. <3

Hey there again! Oh my god...it took him this long to submit...and What is gonna happen to Sakura? Will she ask Yue to let her live with Li? God too much suspense...*whines* Please write and I shall give you a Poem OR eve na picture for your fic. I have enjoyed it emensly..keep writing...^-^

0_0 Two chapters!!!! OMG I can't wait!!!!! Ahh Touya finally broke, and here I thought I'd see Yue take Sakura... Ah well. Two chappies... Muahahahahah. Keep up the great work!

Happy Birthday Capitalist!!!!! I love this fanfic and I check on it every day. The least I can do is to contribute in your 1000 reviews.
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so yue broke tonya spirt and now what is going to happen . can not wait for the next chapter and see . up date soon the story is real good and can not wait for more. you fan.

I was thinking about this, but the Touya punishment scene kind of seemed like a compromise to me. Technically, touya did get raped in front of Sakura as everyone was guessing, but she couldn't see or hear anything, so the situation wasn't as scarring/spirit breaking. I agree with KarenElhyam about Touya and Yue though. I'm about to sic Clow on both of them and make him force both of them to get alone and say their feelings and all that jazz. *sigh* men and their egos, ne? LOL just kidding guys :P Haha, I just want another fluffly scene with both of them since they were getting along oh-so-well. I also agree with Madd Hatter that the punishment scene just didn't seem as bad as it could have been. Maybe we were expecting blood and all that nastiness and stuff.. or that we just aren't grasping how bad of a punishment Touya's submission is?.. or maybe Touya's submission is just the start and it'll just get worse from there? Anyway, I hope Sakura doesn't fall into Ralen's hands though. That fantasy rape scene in Ch. 34 still gives me the shivers just thinking about it.