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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday, Capitalist. Hope you have an awesome one! You got your 1000 reviews!
Loving your story as always but Touya annoyed me so much when he was rambling about missing his village. I really wanted him to give it to Yue; tell him that what they have together isn't a partnership between equals and that slavery is wrong. It doesn't matter how opulent his lifestyle, he's still a prisoner. It IS terrible to be with Yue!
Although, I actually love how selfless Touya was, what you did was much better. So, not a criticism but a testament to your writing that I care so much (having not watched CCS for many years! :p). Keep up the amazing work.
Loving your story as always but Touya annoyed me so much when he was rambling about missing his village. I really wanted him to give it to Yue; tell him that what they have together isn't a partnership between equals and that slavery is wrong. It doesn't matter how opulent his lifestyle, he's still a prisoner. It IS terrible to be with Yue!
Although, I actually love how selfless Touya was, what you did was much better. So, not a criticism but a testament to your writing that I care so much (having not watched CCS for many years! :p). Keep up the amazing work.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... wow ... you know I'm anticipating the next chapter far more then I anticipated harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. In fact if this was in printed form I would gladly line up at midnight to get the first copy.
that said ... Happy birthday! May you have enough of everything in life.
that said ... Happy birthday! May you have enough of everything in life.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so will there be an update this Friday? I hope so.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that i LOVE this story..so keep writing!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're pretty close to those 1,000 reviews!!! Oh man.. I just started freaking out when I read the title of the chapter!!!! You could hear me screaming for half of the chapter, LOL. And thank god he didn't actually rape Sakura.. but wow, you took years off my life with that. -_- Haha, but I LOVED IT!!!! I can't wait to see what Syaoran is going to do! and Happy Early Birthday :)
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!
Although, my goodness, it feels weird saying that after such a dark chapter. Way to totally take a billion steps back for ever gradual step forward you took toward sweet niceness in the story.
I am quickly losing my sympathy for Touya and Yue. Gosh, they're dumb. I love them, but my patience is starting to wear thin. Not even over this latest development with the spirit breaking and everything, but more because Touya doesn't seem to realize he's just as big, if not a bigger jerk than Yue could ever wish to be. His misogyny towards Sakura is becoming kinda creepy. Also, I really hope that Yue eventually gets over his need to own and moves toward wanting a real relationship. But that might be asking for too much.
At least Sakura and Syaoran continue to be sweet and deserving of all my concern. Heh, but it'll be fun when the other shoe drops when Sakura finally earns that black collar. At least Syaoran will get laid, though! The boy deserves it.
I care so much, though, about this story that simple compliments don't seem to do it justice. I've been following it for months and months now, and I'm so excited to see it continue to play out! I don't know how much longer, but I know I'll enjoy the ride as much as I've enjoyed it up till now. Thank you for the great story, that continues to brighten my day whenever you update.
Although, my goodness, it feels weird saying that after such a dark chapter. Way to totally take a billion steps back for ever gradual step forward you took toward sweet niceness in the story.
I am quickly losing my sympathy for Touya and Yue. Gosh, they're dumb. I love them, but my patience is starting to wear thin. Not even over this latest development with the spirit breaking and everything, but more because Touya doesn't seem to realize he's just as big, if not a bigger jerk than Yue could ever wish to be. His misogyny towards Sakura is becoming kinda creepy. Also, I really hope that Yue eventually gets over his need to own and moves toward wanting a real relationship. But that might be asking for too much.
At least Sakura and Syaoran continue to be sweet and deserving of all my concern. Heh, but it'll be fun when the other shoe drops when Sakura finally earns that black collar. At least Syaoran will get laid, though! The boy deserves it.
I care so much, though, about this story that simple compliments don't seem to do it justice. I've been following it for months and months now, and I'm so excited to see it continue to play out! I don't know how much longer, but I know I'll enjoy the ride as much as I've enjoyed it up till now. Thank you for the great story, that continues to brighten my day whenever you update.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing. Took me on a lot of spins and turns; for a minute there I thought Yue realllly wouldn't listen to anything Touya would say when he was about assault Sakura. But then Touya said his bit and I caught my breath. Touya is finally broken, but I wonder whether Yue is going to regret it, because Touya submitting himself completely isn't going to make them lovers again. And love is for equals, I believe!! And Sakura nad Li, I just love them, and I'm happy that they're going to get some action soon, hahaha. The visual of them hugging through her cage bars is sad but romantic. And ah!! Birthday soon! Congratulations, thanks for sticking with this story for nigh 3 years of your life XDDD
Thanks for the chapter, loved it!
Thanks for the chapter, loved it!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Touya. Poor, poor Touya. I wonder how long it will take Yue to realize that a Touya without spirit isn't really Touya at all. Great chapter.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wootness! I was semi-right. But Yue tried to rape Sakura instead. Aaaaawww, poor baby. Well then! Can't wait to see life now with every sentance being finished off with Master. You're evil. Very much so.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I smiled to myself in success when I thought Yue would do that. I kept thinking back to their deal, and while I was excited at my own achievement, I felt so bad, lol. When Yue reminded Touya of their deal I was just "Go me!- wait.. aww.."
I am, however, surprised Touya admitted all that, however, logically it made sense. That surely would break him, and Yue knew it. Touya shouldn't be too embarrassed with his sister though. Being blindfolded and unable to hear anything - she doesn't really have a clue what Yue did to Touya right below her.
To be honest, I'm not real excited about a Syaoran and Sakura sex scene. I'm not opposing it, but it's not the part in this story that drives me to read it. Probably, because there's so many Syaoran and Sakura pairings. Plus, I haven't the slightest clue as to how he is going to take her virginity within the next 2 chapters. Something tells me Yue's anger won't be extinguished unless Touya gives some really good oral or something. Not to mention Syaoran's certainly not going to be able to pay her off in 2 chapters either, unless he gets a serious bonus.
Oh my, I just now thought of it. Unless Sakura gets her collar turned black before hand. If it's black it won't matter how many times they go at it, but that also means a spirited broken Sakura. So something might spark the sudden interest from Yue, or Ralen gets completely out of control. Or even worse, Yue doesn't make her his slave anymore, which might make Touya happy at first, but not when he finds out Ralen has just been dieing for this day. Touya won't be able to do anything about it though, and he might not even know if he's confided to his chamber and balcony. Though, Syaoran will know and will have to spill blood over it. Maybe that's what you mean by he'll be really busy and need his strength. Ooo... that also means he won't have to buy her anymore if she just becomes a maid in the castle. So I'll go with this feeling. I'll go with her not being a slave anymore, getting in Ralen's midst, and if that's the case Syaoran could stop Ralen, physically, before harming Sakura. Although, knowing you, put us under the most intense suspense of what's going to happen to Sakura in Ralen's bed. Then Syaoran saves the girl and they're free together. -This sounds too good to be true though-
One thing I am disappointed at is, Yue really did go light on Touya. He had intended with the worst punishment for Touya ever. But gave in to Touya, so I still see Yue as Touya's slave. Despite the fact Touya is groveling at his feet and kissing his hands. Yue is melting to it way too fast. Yue has the element of water and wind, I think Touya has the element of fire... because he is always able to melt Yue's frosty heart. I hope I didn't miss that somewhere in your story and I'm just late at discovering this. I think Yue should've gone through with his punishment and not melt to Touya's pitiful groveling. Yes, it means a great deal to the story, but to me I was a little disappointed in the punishment. Great chapter though. Really put me at ease when I woke up to see this chapter updated. Can't wait to see the next one, but at least I have closure now.
I am, however, surprised Touya admitted all that, however, logically it made sense. That surely would break him, and Yue knew it. Touya shouldn't be too embarrassed with his sister though. Being blindfolded and unable to hear anything - she doesn't really have a clue what Yue did to Touya right below her.
To be honest, I'm not real excited about a Syaoran and Sakura sex scene. I'm not opposing it, but it's not the part in this story that drives me to read it. Probably, because there's so many Syaoran and Sakura pairings. Plus, I haven't the slightest clue as to how he is going to take her virginity within the next 2 chapters. Something tells me Yue's anger won't be extinguished unless Touya gives some really good oral or something. Not to mention Syaoran's certainly not going to be able to pay her off in 2 chapters either, unless he gets a serious bonus.
Oh my, I just now thought of it. Unless Sakura gets her collar turned black before hand. If it's black it won't matter how many times they go at it, but that also means a spirited broken Sakura. So something might spark the sudden interest from Yue, or Ralen gets completely out of control. Or even worse, Yue doesn't make her his slave anymore, which might make Touya happy at first, but not when he finds out Ralen has just been dieing for this day. Touya won't be able to do anything about it though, and he might not even know if he's confided to his chamber and balcony. Though, Syaoran will know and will have to spill blood over it. Maybe that's what you mean by he'll be really busy and need his strength. Ooo... that also means he won't have to buy her anymore if she just becomes a maid in the castle. So I'll go with this feeling. I'll go with her not being a slave anymore, getting in Ralen's midst, and if that's the case Syaoran could stop Ralen, physically, before harming Sakura. Although, knowing you, put us under the most intense suspense of what's going to happen to Sakura in Ralen's bed. Then Syaoran saves the girl and they're free together. -This sounds too good to be true though-
One thing I am disappointed at is, Yue really did go light on Touya. He had intended with the worst punishment for Touya ever. But gave in to Touya, so I still see Yue as Touya's slave. Despite the fact Touya is groveling at his feet and kissing his hands. Yue is melting to it way too fast. Yue has the element of water and wind, I think Touya has the element of fire... because he is always able to melt Yue's frosty heart. I hope I didn't miss that somewhere in your story and I'm just late at discovering this. I think Yue should've gone through with his punishment and not melt to Touya's pitiful groveling. Yes, it means a great deal to the story, but to me I was a little disappointed in the punishment. Great chapter though. Really put me at ease when I woke up to see this chapter updated. Can't wait to see the next one, but at least I have closure now.