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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....poor Touya....had to be reduced to that....but I feel the most for Li because Sakura was almost taken from him. His character really does seem to portray an undying amount of love for Sakura, and the story would never be complete without those two together!! I loved the chapter!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T^T OH you're so mean but this is so f*cking awesome damnit! I felt the adrenaline coursing through my veins while reading this *fans self* I can't believe Touya's finally broken and Sakura's virginity was almost taken away (Ralen would be happy if it was) ^~^ Oh my I can't wait for more.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read your fic when you had about 20 something chapters and I never reviewed until now but uhhhh happy b-day. Really can't wait until Syaoran and Sakura take their relationship to the next level.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...he broke down...YES!!!!
this was an amazing chapter. Yes, they did it with sakura there in the room, but hey, at least she didnt hear it or see it. About time he admitted something! Is it possible that Yue has no idea yet from where they escaped? And what happened to punishing Ralen for his mistake??? XD
Glad to know Syaoran is gonna get laid in two more chapters. And it would be soooo cool if she appears one day with a black collar and Touya goes berserk ^_^
Happy birthday next week!! *throws cake* because its sooo much better to throw cake than confetti XD
this was an amazing chapter. Yes, they did it with sakura there in the room, but hey, at least she didnt hear it or see it. About time he admitted something! Is it possible that Yue has no idea yet from where they escaped? And what happened to punishing Ralen for his mistake??? XD
Glad to know Syaoran is gonna get laid in two more chapters. And it would be soooo cool if she appears one day with a black collar and Touya goes berserk ^_^
Happy birthday next week!! *throws cake* because its sooo much better to throw cake than confetti XD
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you tease, you! XD Two more chapters? A lot of work to do? Why, I wonder what that could mean!
But oh damn. I was wrong! Although nothing too serious actually happened to Sakura, so that's good. Still... That must have hurt, and been very frightening for her. God, the sadistic person in me almost wanted to see her raped in front of Touya, just for his reaction. To picture him writhing in pain at having to watch. Or maybe to see his stomach turn even more in disgust... Yue sure wouldn't be happy about it.
Anyway, I shouldn't be so sadistic. :( It's not exactly a good thing... Now, as for Touya. The poor boy has finally been broken. And when Yue was out on the hillside, thinking of everything, my heart was aching for him. I even held a breath thinking about it... I wish one of them would have admitted their feelings already, but I'm sure it'll come eventually. At this rate, I see Touya admitting his feelings first just because Yue doesn't seem so close to thinking that way. He's just being selfish. Bah. Back to Touya. It was kind of painful to see him broken like that (except the sadist in me disagress, and smiles with joy) and to beg, cry, and bend to Yue's will... To call him master... I wouldn't have wanted to do it either. It's humiliating. Degrading...
I loved this chapter; it was excellent and had my heart going doki doki. XD Also. Happy Birthday! I wonder how old you are... But you probably wouldn't want to tell us, or would you? :B
But oh damn. I was wrong! Although nothing too serious actually happened to Sakura, so that's good. Still... That must have hurt, and been very frightening for her. God, the sadistic person in me almost wanted to see her raped in front of Touya, just for his reaction. To picture him writhing in pain at having to watch. Or maybe to see his stomach turn even more in disgust... Yue sure wouldn't be happy about it.
Anyway, I shouldn't be so sadistic. :( It's not exactly a good thing... Now, as for Touya. The poor boy has finally been broken. And when Yue was out on the hillside, thinking of everything, my heart was aching for him. I even held a breath thinking about it... I wish one of them would have admitted their feelings already, but I'm sure it'll come eventually. At this rate, I see Touya admitting his feelings first just because Yue doesn't seem so close to thinking that way. He's just being selfish. Bah. Back to Touya. It was kind of painful to see him broken like that (except the sadist in me disagress, and smiles with joy) and to beg, cry, and bend to Yue's will... To call him master... I wouldn't have wanted to do it either. It's humiliating. Degrading...
I loved this chapter; it was excellent and had my heart going doki doki. XD Also. Happy Birthday! I wonder how old you are... But you probably wouldn't want to tell us, or would you? :B
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After giving this chapter some thought, of how Toya was able to leave without seeming too upset about it - is I'm thinking he's not thinking about himself. I haven't given up hope of him revealing his true feelings for Yue, but I think Sakura is on his mind more than Yue at the moment. He promised his mother he'd take care of her, and her sitting in a bird cage for display is probably not what his mother had in mind.
That's why I'm also not surprised she didn't reveal everything to her brother and she didn't whine *too* much. They have been spoiled despite their restrictions, but I think Sakura understood her brothers intentions. If she hadn't, I'm sure she'd announce everything and beg her brother not to leave.
As for Yue, I still can't imagine what he's going to do. What I'd like is for a show in front of Sakura, or maybe including her (<-- perferibly that idea). But I can't see Yue disrespecting Sakura that much, but on the other hand, she IS his property and he can do whatever he wants to BOTH of his slaves. The deal was Toya takes the place of Sakura, but he broke that deal by trying to escape. Yue might use that as a loophole. If that's the case, perhaps Syaoran will reach his brink and rush in to save Sakura and announce his feelings. Although I must say I don't think Syaoran would rush in so blindly - but then again, people do stupid things when under pressure and emotions.
I truely do see Yue forcing Toya to submit in front of his sister. He defied Yue by running when his back was turned. He has proven he can submit during closed doors, but his pride refuses him to allow any weakness shown in front of his sister.
We'll see, I'm really excited - as you can see by my 3 posts - I hope you update soon, I have you bookmarked on my toolbar for firefox.
That's why I'm also not surprised she didn't reveal everything to her brother and she didn't whine *too* much. They have been spoiled despite their restrictions, but I think Sakura understood her brothers intentions. If she hadn't, I'm sure she'd announce everything and beg her brother not to leave.
As for Yue, I still can't imagine what he's going to do. What I'd like is for a show in front of Sakura, or maybe including her (<-- perferibly that idea). But I can't see Yue disrespecting Sakura that much, but on the other hand, she IS his property and he can do whatever he wants to BOTH of his slaves. The deal was Toya takes the place of Sakura, but he broke that deal by trying to escape. Yue might use that as a loophole. If that's the case, perhaps Syaoran will reach his brink and rush in to save Sakura and announce his feelings. Although I must say I don't think Syaoran would rush in so blindly - but then again, people do stupid things when under pressure and emotions.
I truely do see Yue forcing Toya to submit in front of his sister. He defied Yue by running when his back was turned. He has proven he can submit during closed doors, but his pride refuses him to allow any weakness shown in front of his sister.
We'll see, I'm really excited - as you can see by my 3 posts - I hope you update soon, I have you bookmarked on my toolbar for firefox.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gasp. tomorrow is friday. a week passed slowly! i hope an update tomorrow!
another gasp. yue will be violent next chapter? scary! it will be interesting to read lol
another gasp. yue will be violent next chapter? scary! it will be interesting to read lol
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no..cliffhangers! Literally...people hanging off of cliffs. Oh dear. ^_^ Fantastic chapter. I'm so glad Touya got Sakura to attempt the escape. I was worried she was gonna stay behind and poor Touya was gonna feel even worse. Man, the next chapter is gonna be so good. Poor Yue. Hehe...can't wait for the emotional blender that shall be the next chapter. Woot!
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, I don't even know how to BEGIN this review.
Omgomgomgomgogmgomg 10000000000000x times over.
Seriously.
:_: OMG.
I sat shaking in my seat after finishing this chapter. Holy god. You are brilliant. I feel so stupid for reviewing because I suck at reviewing and can never form my liking of a story into proper words but - I LOVE YOU.
I actually remembered that quote back from chapter 12 also. Chapter 12 was probably one of my favorite chapters, because of teh angst. So that's probably why I recalled it. I just.. didn't say anything. :x
I was so happy when Touya knocked Ralen's ass to the floor. I HATE Ralen. XD I hate that bastard like woah.
And I liked how Touya was being so devilish and planning his escape when Yue was making love to him... Oh he's been naughty.
I don't possibly know how you can abuse him more then you did in the whipping-chapter unless you killed him. (zomg!11 I doubt that'll happen though.) I seriously want to glue myself to the computer screen until you update. And you REALLY deserve all the praise you're getting, no doubt about it. It's incredible that you've been so loyal to this story for so long, truly incredible.
If you ever write anything else on any other sites or whatever - put a link in your profile p.l.z.! I would definitely read everything by you.
Omgomgomgomgogmgomg 10000000000000x times over.
Seriously.
:_: OMG.
I sat shaking in my seat after finishing this chapter. Holy god. You are brilliant. I feel so stupid for reviewing because I suck at reviewing and can never form my liking of a story into proper words but - I LOVE YOU.
I actually remembered that quote back from chapter 12 also. Chapter 12 was probably one of my favorite chapters, because of teh angst. So that's probably why I recalled it. I just.. didn't say anything. :x
I was so happy when Touya knocked Ralen's ass to the floor. I HATE Ralen. XD I hate that bastard like woah.
And I liked how Touya was being so devilish and planning his escape when Yue was making love to him... Oh he's been naughty.
I don't possibly know how you can abuse him more then you did in the whipping-chapter unless you killed him. (zomg!11 I doubt that'll happen though.) I seriously want to glue myself to the computer screen until you update. And you REALLY deserve all the praise you're getting, no doubt about it. It's incredible that you've been so loyal to this story for so long, truly incredible.
If you ever write anything else on any other sites or whatever - put a link in your profile p.l.z.! I would definitely read everything by you.
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome. i can't wait to read more for what happens. i mean yue can't blame touya for trying to escape when given the chance. he is feeling unloved at tthis point with no security as yue's lover. i want to read on the progression of sakura and li's realtionship. please don't let the evil overlord of the girls take sakura as punishment for running away when it was all touya's fault.