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Ahhhhh...you evil little thing you. Leaving us with a long wait and a severe cliff hanger. There is more angst in this than in a teenage girls drama. *sigh* I can't help thinking that Touya would choose to stay if he only had the freedom to leave. He would enjoy the sex more if it wasn't all about dominance and submission. Like was hinted in previous chapters, love is taking a risk and giving up whats important to you to make another person happy. I think if Yue was to set Touya free, he would get more of what he wanted.

Ah well. I am the everlasting opptumist (sorry...I can't spell). On another note, I can't understand the minor obsession everyone seems to have over Touya being raped in front of Sakura. Thats that type of trama that sends people into self-induced comas. It crosses the line from punishement to sadism. This fic walks that line anyway but has always stayed just this side of it. I can't help anticipating exactly what Yue will do however. I can't help but think its not what everyone is suggesting. Afterall, you've been able to keep this fic going by constantly doing the unexpected.

Of, course I can see all privledges being revoked. Are the chains going to make a repeat preformance. Afterall, there is not guareentee that there was only one secret passageway out of the castle. Touya has to be keeping an eye out for them in the future.

Nevertheless, its obvious at this point that prior to whatever punishment you have in mind, Touya was leaving less out of a desire to leave and more out of a desire for freedom.

You keep us in so much suspence that it draws a bit away from the sid plots but I am extremely interested in what is going on there. Are Yue and Kero chasing after rebel magical creations. Did Clow make a big booboo in his arrogance. Are Touya's powers ever going to develop to the point where they are really an issue. Although he is 'just a psychis' in Yue's words, the manga and anime make out his abilities to be no joke. Otherwise he wouldn't have been a good source of 'food.'

Ahh well, I have taken enough of your time with my speculations. Like everyone, I hope you will update soon.
Fae

man, I don't even want to contemplate how bad the atmosphere will become in the castle if Yue does rape Touya >_< Sakura'll be scarred for life.... well.. hmm.. she's smacked some sense into Yue before, so maybe she can do the same thing before things go too badly?

I hope you tell us how Yue found out about the escape. did Ralen contat him with the jewel? Did he rush home to find the necklace on the bed and it break his heart? Did he follow touya and Sakura? Did he hear Sakura's scream from a distance and investigate? please tell!

Yesss! we need some gloomy atmosphere in the castle! really give the servants something to talk about!

It's understandable that Yue wouldn't be himself after all that happened - even the most seasoned masochistic killer would have a problem with a loved one (or someone they cared about) choosing to escape in front of them. I probably would have written it the same way. I happen to enjoy this story very much - and if you can update quickly then that's even better.

WOW, I wasn´t able to read some fiction because of my computer for quite a while, but to read you again is really great. I am sorry for Yue, but well noone is there to comfort and try to woo our porr devatated Yue. I liked very mucho how you describe Toya´s attitudes towards Yue, he is kind of cute when he tries not to be an asshole all the time. lol
So, anyway great fic, great characters.... and I really, really hope to read your next chapter soon and see what is going to happen to Toya, or how is going to develope this lustfull relationshio into a more lovely one. But first; Toya´s punishment!

Hope to read you soon.

Oooh, thank you SO much for updating, I was looking forward to this for a while..

Anyway, I love how you've managed once again to keep everyone so completely in character, even down to Touya's reluctance to leave in spite of himself. Of course, he'd feel almost obligated to attempt the escape, love or not, ne? But besides that, I still don't see how he can deny the obvious feelings that he and Yue have developed.. Oh well, I guess that's just like a couple of silly men, right? Always too caught up in dumbness and complication to step back and take an objective look at things..

And Yue?

Classic "Hmph" reactions be damned, I thought it was sweet that Touya's farewell affected him like that, it's great to see a believable "ZOMG YUE HAS FEELINGS!?" scene! Most people portray him as pretty lacking in that respect, most of them write him as either Uber Uke-ish, or Super Sadistic, haha.. You've managed to retain his aloofness while simultaneously showing a development in his emotional state, and that takes quite a bit of doing, congratulations!

Keep it coming, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next wonderful installment!

That was an epic chapter. I really thought that touya and sakura were gonna get all the way home.
About yue losing control, is he gonna end up like clow said young yue was like (when yue couldnt handle being in his physical body and was totally unpredictable and dangerous). that would be so awesome! i am happy that ralen got yelled at!! he deserved that.

OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOES!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE!! Not NOW! If you do, I'll... I'LL... I'll cry!! And writhe in complete and utterly depressing agony waiting for the next chapter. I NEED MY P.S. it's like crack to me!! I'm soooo addicted!! Why you do dis to me, eh?! WHY?! Do you LIKE to hurt me?

I honestly thought I'd had the heart attack in Sakura and Touya's place... she was like "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" and he was like "SAKURAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!" and I was like "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" Omfg, that was just fuckin intense... and when Yue saved her I was like "HOLY SHIT!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYS!!"

But YOU!! How could you?! You can't just have YUE save her and leave us hangin when we all know Yue's gonna be two steps away from blasting Touya's ass to death in anger of him trying to escape.... that's so cruel of you... you are so... T__T ToT I'm starvin for it!!
So... post as soon as you can possibly can please? I'M BEGGIN YA!! On my hands and knees!!

Btw, Touya fuckin over Ralen like that was like a whole damn crate of Lucky Charms... just all kinds of magically delicious... XD

omg!!!! they escapped!!! im shocked they didnt get very far.


yue must rape touya infront of sakura!!!!! worst punishment ever!!