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Oh, yeah, he's really in for it now. In hindsight, I probably would have done a private dry run of that path on my own just to make [b]absolutely[/b] sure it went where I thought it did, and upon discovery of the rickety old bridge, I'd have postponed my escape long enough to create a new bridge from fresh wood and rope, this time with posts and rope handrails! Ok, so that would probably be tricky to hide, but I'd still try that then try to take two people across a bridge that could be who knows how old!

"Not dark like that."

When that was said I immediately thought of only one thing, and an image of that particular card/spirit jumping out of the canyon and possessing Sakura(as it obviously had no interest in Touya) sprang to mind. Alas, we again think differently on things. Oh, well, either way, we all know what's down there! And I really can't wait for #39! Laters!!

Actually, the way I figure it, either Ralen or Syaoran noticed they were gone earlier than planned and called Yue on those walkie-talkie things, or the "Spirit of the Canyon", Dark, mentally summoned him when she/it noticed them escaping along the canyon wall. Would I be right, or great and glamorous Capitalist?!

that last chapter was great but how could you leave it with that cliff hanger???

i cant wait for the next chapter so please hurry and complete the next chapter!

thanks

*cringes in sympethy for Toya* Gotta feel sorry for him!!!! if what happened before was nothing then the next lot HAS to be bad...can't wait to read it. Thankyou!

2 week update?

No no no no no no..... don't punish Touya...
I can't bare seeing Touya get ripped half apart by Yue...
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Can't Yue just try talking it out with Touya and leave it at that? :~
I don't want to see Touya getting hurt again...
but I want to read the next chapter just as badly...

Ooooh boy. ANOTHER cliffhanger ending, I don't think I can handle it! And you had to include that last line in the author's note. What a tease. xD I can't wait until the next chapter, and this one was so excellent! I figured Sakura was going to stop Touya from leaving, because she wants to stay in the castle. But when I read the title of the chapter I was like, oh no! But I loved how you kind of.. explained Touya's thought process and how he was going to miss Yue, but he tried to be mad at him and he couldn't. I figure that should be a sign that you should stay, if someone takes you from your home but you still like them, haha. Sakura falling was really good too, I mean, my eyes were all wide and I really liked the line... 'his life destroyed' [and the stuff before that, I just can't remember. xD] And then Yue saves the day. I figured he would make an appearance there, and I'm so glad he did. xD But I am scared for Touya, and I'm wondering would could be worse than almost killing him with a whipping! ahah.
...And I remember a few chapters back you kind of talked about who you think would... admit their love for the other. I think it will be Touya, but not really... on purpose. More like an accident. But you know, after getting punished he's probably not going to be too fond of Yue for a while.

Anyway I'll wrap this up. Keep up the great work though!

Hmmmm....reminds of the other saying you used a way long ago. Think Yue'll rape Toya in front of her now?

^~^ F*cking awesome I didnt' see that coming. Jeeze way to give a girl a heart attack >.<* @_@ Well update when you can I barely have time anyways to get on XP stupid college.

oh my god. What a close call! Sakura was definitely right to worry about all this; I just knew Yue would save her, but... I don't want to even imagine what he's going to do to Touya next time. I think I might just end up crying. I mean, he was such a bastard that first time, but now... Of course he wouldn't be happy about Touya attempting escape, but I hope that he doesn't get to close to killing him again.

Seriously. Have to stop thinking about it.

I wonder if Sakura and Syaoran still have a chance together.

Great chapter; I'll wait as long as I have to for the next one. I always do, anyway.