rate_review Reviews

I usually don't like stories with rape and degredation but I find myself liking your story in spite of that. Its well written and well thought out. It is an interesting case of stockholm syndrome. Of course, now Touya is going to run into problems with Sakura. He will want to take her with him in an attempt to escape. If he tells her, however she will not want to go because of her still secret promise with Li. What pain will Touya feel if she 'betrays' him in this manner. Afterall, he has allowed himself to endure whippings, rape, degradation and humiliation all for her. If she refuses to leave with him or even tells on him... He has to expect that at some point she will display loyalty to him for all his sacrifices. Will he get angry? I can see Sakura claiming as justification Touya's love for Yue. However, if Touya was really angry, he could just throw that back in her face saying that she labels it as love because it makes her feel better about all that has happened. It relieves her guilt. Geez, your story really makes me speculate about the feelings and actions of the characters. You are really doing a great job of revealing things gradually and naturally, something that is frequently lacking in fanfiction. Please, continue to update. (PS. Your allowed more creativity once you make to the higher levels of education. However, I hope your choice leads you to good things in life.)

:::clears throat::: AHHHHHH!! ^_^ Okay, done freaking out now. Wow. What a great chapter! The whole stag thing was just perfect, especially the way it was in the dream sequence. Really really perfect. Hmm...after seeing everyone else's stuff I really want to do some fanart now...muahaha.

Touya has finally found his way out, now will he take it? Due to his stubborn nature I can see him trying to flee, he's so determined to ignore any and all feelings he may have for Yue. I don't believe Sakura would be willing to leave Syaoran and maybe to some extinct even Yue. It will be very interesting to see how that all plays out.

The dream sequence with Clow was just wonderful, I absolutely loved Clow and how you've portrayed him. I'm kind of curious though, although I could be reading too much into it. Is Touya the reincarnation of the stag? I only ask because of these few lines: "But Yue has been waiting for you all these years, and when he saw you he was determined to have you.", "You were his slave long before Yue ever laid eyes on you, before you were born.", "You needn't be frightened," Clow told him gently. "It's only a reflection, after all.", Tentatively, not at all sure why, he reached to touch. But Clow was right; his hand only met the cool reflective glass of a mirror.

In my opinion you have truly written a masterpiece here and I can't wait to see what happens next.

capitalist. are you making us wait a few extra days to torture us into wondering what touya is going to do next? we neeed to know if he will escape. please update quickly, k?
give the kids at uyour school a nap time then write as fast as you can while they are all asleep!lol

I hope to God that there is more to this story. It would be quite destructive to end it there.

Oh My God!!!!

What else is there to say? wow... ... ...
All that time? It was right there. Wow...
I can't wait.

Until next time,
Your loyal reader

Still reading, and it's still awsome.

OMFG!! TOUYA FOUND A WAY OUT!! That is some crazy shit... and he met CLOW!! A deer?....A. FUCKING. DEER?!?! I woulda been pissed too if I found out I was a replacement for a deer from my present lover's past lover... yea... some shit would've got knocked around... a few thing blown up... Ralen would've been found and maimed faster than you could say "FUCK".... yea...

Ok, my thoughts are running rampant cuz of this chapter's awesomeness... I cannot wait for the next one!! OMFG!!

I'm sad on Touya's behalf for finding out that he is only Yue's replacement for the stag. I think Touya might escape the castle because he has just learnt of that from Yue and isn't feeling very loved about it. I hope Yue starts to show Touys what he really means to him instead of trying to mould Touya into a stag or Clow model. If I was Touya I'd be seriously considering whether I was truly being loved or not!! That would be enough incentive for me to escape!!
But if Sakura refuses to go with Touya will he chose not to go too? I hope not!!! After all this time he deserves the chance to run away to clear his head and have the choice to go back to the castle or not to go back. I hope Sakura doesn't screw that up for him!

ooooommmmgggg...!!

this is getting REALLY good.


ive read "Pleasure Slave" since you posted on the other website, too.

i dunt see anything really wrong with the fanfic, but can you PLEASEEEEEEEEEE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEE
write a lemon for Sakura and Syaron?