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Wow! This is a wonderful and truely emotional story! Thank you so much for posting it and writing it! I hope you don't leave the world of fanfiction for good, but I wish you luck in all that you do! Thank you for writing such a wonderful Touya/Yue and Sakura/Syranon story!

Hi!! I love this story already and I loved Laybrith too!! One question can I have Yue's Library?? Or at least make a copy of it? Yay, Touyua hit Ralen! (I don't have an account here but you can find me on fanfiction, just make sure there is a space between Shadow and Cat.)

I finally finished it. I couldn't read it for a long time. I'm paranoid so I waited till I was 18 till I started to go on this site again. Yours was the one I missed the most. I waited till I had a lot of time and instead of reading it from where I left off even if I did remember. Hands Down this is the best CCS fanfic I ever read and I liked this series for a while so I read hundreds. I'm glad Yue let him go for I feel that's how you show your love the most by letting your beloved free. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story and I hope you get another great Idea come to you in a dream.

Wow, so I *finally* finished this after-- a very long hiatus. A friend recommended this story, and I'm so glad!!!!! Seriously one of the best (and longest o.o) I've ever read!!!! Although I'm only familiar with CCS in the basic plot (it's on my list to read/watch) and saw only a couple of episodes, I was glad this story didn't have too much stuff from the series besides the obvious. ^^;; Beautiful beautiful. I hope you find a job soon!

I love your story. I've been reading it since before it had 20 chapters. The writing really captivated me. This isn't just one of the best CCS fics I've read but one of the best in general. It's a very memorable read.

G'day

I read the entire thing which is pretty rare for me seeing as I have the attention span of a bug,
now I can't remember much from the show all I remember is watching as s oon as I got home from school on cartoon network then I got bored with it and stopped I never even got to the part where yue enters the picture, I know shame on me whatever.

I'm actually the kind of person that craves adventure or something to get my mind away from my current situation of the pointless tedium that is western sydney. for some reason I could not stop reading it even with all the male rape and degradation.

You have real talent to make someone like me consider the idea of gay sex being somewhat appealing but then I remember that I've been alone my entire life and that any carnal relations at all sound pretty boring to me, I find the idea of fighting much more interesting, you know for a good cause make the world a better place.

well the main point of reviewing is to make your opinion known and I reckon the story was freakin sweet, I write fanfiction too and I realised I'm a total review whore.
I actually wrote a story inspired by this one, don't worry I didn't infringe on any of your material.
If you want to check it out you can visit http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1408797/Tim_gear_solid.

Though I really don't expect you to because nobody does, my hatred for the world brings my critical analysis of everything to frame.
bah to the the phonies, wow I sound like a teenager.

I think i've ranted enough story rocks, you rock drop me a line if you want to discuss anything.

Cheers coming from Australia

Tim

hey... its really sad if this fic is really your last.. well i could at least say that you rOCK!!

this fic is really really cool.. my fave fic so far after reading countless fics..

there's nothing to be ashamed of.. actually you should be proud.. although it hold matured contents it's still great..

good luck on your career in life.. you're the best.. :3

great!

Okay. This review is probably going to be dwindled with all sorts of annoying and ridiculous fangirling, and I dont think me reviewing right after finishing this story is wise, but I have too, so you're warned. :)

First off, I think you should know that I am usually NOT A FAN of yuri...shoujo-ai maybe, and that's only because of Tomoyo x Sakura, but I tend to not go there so yeah, the first few chapters were real eye-openers for me. However, throughout reading the story, I never thought any of the scenes were PWP, not ever. Sure, I don't like yuri, but the yuri had purpose, and I'm sure I don't sound completely SANE but everything made sense, and everything was done for a reason so I thank you so much for that!

I thought Yue's and Touya's love was brilliant. I love how you focused on how the love changed the characters and not the love itself. I love how ALL OF THE CHARACTERS WERE IC especially in the extermeties of the situations in your story. To me, that is real talent.

I am a bigger fan of Sakura and Syaoran than Yue x Touya, but I think you may have upped the playing field! But, everything really was beautiful in your story. Even Ralen was beautiful in his bastardly way, you know, him being all tortured and evil. I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW HAPPY I WAS when you didn't pull the Yue/Yukito card. Because I hate it. I hate how people USE YUKITO to bring out the kindness in Yue, but you, YOU DID THAT ALL BY YOURSELF. I think that is truly amazing.

Oh, and the plot. Because really, after awhile it was ALL ABOUT THE PLOT. And I loved every minute of it, I don't know if you planned this, but it felt like you knew what you wanted from the start. And I sure has hell never do when I'm writng, and you can TELL, so if you were having some creative issues, it certainly didn't show.

You've changed ALOT OF THINGS for me, especially where bondage/rape/domination is concerned. I'm not a HUGE FAN of lemon personally, but you did wonderfully adn I could only hope there were more stories like this out there, but there isn't. WHICH BITES.

I really think you should publish this, it's too amazing for you to let it go. But I know there are more amazing things to come from you, and I can only hope that I have a chance to see it someday.

And yes, this review was massive, which is a typical for me but yeah---I think you are awesome!

AND OH--the toys comment was love. BECAUSE THEY ARE NASTY. LOL.

much love, fisah

Wow, this is a surprise. Congratulations for finishing such an epic fic, and for not letting the quality go down throughout the series. I really enjoyed reading this fic, best of luck for all your future ventures!