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Ohmigod. I decided to re-read the story yesterday, and I got about half-way, noted the chapter, and started again today. I clicked the little arrow thingeh on the chapters, saw that there was one more than I remembered, and commenced to freak out in excitement.

I read it, whined about how Clow was such a bitch and about the stag, and then squealed out loud when Touya found his escape! The first thing I thought about was Sakura and Li, though. If her brother grabbed her and tried to sneak her out, she wouldn't want to leave Li without him knowing where she was going, but if her brother tipped her off, Sakura would tell Li, and as much as he loves her, her escape contradicts with his job and, well, his decision to pay her off and marry her. D; I think now he wouldn't stop her because he loves her, but he'd do *something* so that he can stay with her. Aaah! You have to write and post the next chapter soon, I'm actually shivering in anticipation. Grr! This is why I should read finished stories only, I'm so demanding.

-Sets up a tent and camps out waiting for next chapter.- *_*

Wow... just wow. Opportunity is the most amazing thing. I sincerely hope that Touya's going to try to escape with Sakura, even if she won't like it. Great turn!

Intruiging.

I do love it when plots progress.

I'm also happy to see that although you're churning out quite large chapters each week, they never seem rushed; But then maybe I should have expected that.

I find Touya's reaction to Clow... interesting. It's not what I expected, (but then I didn't expect Clow to show up) which made it all the more pleasurable to read.

No Syaroan/Sakura here also, which makes me a slightly happier panda.

Please, continue at your own pace. I'd hate for you to rush.

This phrase here, had me laughing:
Upset to discover, after fearing he was a replacement for Clow, that he was only a replacement for a giant deer.
It was great.

This chapter opened up a lot of trails for it to lead to. Most likely Touya will go to his sister about this, at least I think so. I don't think he'll waste a lot of time thinking about this, and after going to Sakura, she'll feel compelled to stay due to the fact. a) she's in love and b) he's in love
But, I have a feeling she won't be so matter'o'factly about it. I have a feeling her mind will race about her own lover, and I think Touya will notice some thing's wrong, and will get offended she wants to stay here instead of going home, but I think if he broods over it he'll realize he doesn't want to go home either.

*freaks out* O.o Now he's got a way to escape the castle with his sister?! Oh this is killing me ^~^ lol Clow sure does have an odd sense of humor @_@ and is a bit creepy *shivers* Awesome yet evil way to end the chapter. I can't wait for more.

Wow. Somehow, I feel even he he tries to escape, he's going to be caught by someone like Yue, Ralen, or some other person... Also, he's going to want Sakura to escape with him, but she might not be as set on leaving because of Syaoran, and there's no way she'll just go to her brother and say that she doesn't feel like leaving because she loves syaoran and that he proposed to her and that he's saving money to buy her from yue. Something really bad is going to happen in the future if he tries getting out of the castle...

OH MY FUCKING GOD!! Clow DID something! It's a freaking miracle XD. Now Touya can go home....but for how long until Yue finds him, or he wants to go back? And what will he do with Sakura?? WE HAVE TO KNOW!! WRITE MORE!! XD

wow, this is going to sound very oxymoronic since everyone hates cliffhangers, but dammmn, that was a good cliffhanger! Wow, a way to escape! Hmm.. I don't think he's going to.. but it would be interesting to see Yue's reaction if he actually really does.

"Upset to discover, after fearing he was a replacement for Clow, that he was only a replacement for a giant deer."- I'm sorry, I understand why Touya is so upset, but this line by itself seem just so absurd that it's hilarious! I think it's the giant deer that did it.

Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait til the next one! good luck!

.............................. O.O Wow. That was mind blowing! I wasn't expecting Kero to show up @_@ way to keep me on the edge of my seat *claps*

I just wanted to say that after reading this fic for a very long time that I still love it no matter how long it may take to update. I must say recently that you have been doing such a great job. Well thanks for this great fic and I hope that it never ends. Keep up the great work!!!