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Thanks for the new chapter! I really liked the portrayal of Keroberos. And I think those things that are running around wild that Kero and Yue have to take care of are the Cards! Knowing that this chapter is called Harbinger, I wonder whether they're going to wreak havoc if it really is the Cards, or whatever else might happen too. And maybe Touya and Sakura will show some of their magic as well.

Really, thanks for updating! I usually check this section of the site everyday for an update, and for awhile I felt pretty useless because I checked the first day or first week right after an update knowing full well that the likelihood of something being there was small, but still doing it out of habit. Now I can check and really expect a chapter to be there! It's great, I'm happy and excited that the muses are being good :)

I had basically resigned myself to the idea that you weren't gonna bring my favorite big mouthed Osakan cutie into the story, but when he was introduced, I just couldn't stop grinning. Good idea, too, bringing him into a chapter that was really just serving as a transition and lead into whatever bad stuff is going down soon.

Love, love, LOVE the story so far. You keep surprising me, and always for the better. I can't wait for you to finish, even if I will miss awaiting each chapter eagerly. ^^

oh yes! I can review again!! That's good. When aff made people get an account, I stopped reviewing- nothing to do with you- I just think it's useless to get an account if you aren't a writer. Love the story as always, and Kero was just so amusing! I'm glad that he popped in- hopefully he'll pop in again (even though you said that he's playing a small part, I just love him too much for him to only show up once!). Good luck with the story and please keep up the good work!

Aha, and now it allllll falls into place. The cards are out and about, somewhere along the plot Touya will get hurt by one of them, thus making Sakura somehow the captour cause she's speacil, something magical will happen sooner or later that in the end all the characters re-start into their 'proper' CCS roles. Wow...mind trippy when you re-read the story from the begging.

OMG i am so happy that kero was in this chapter. i think you should have him around alittle more for sakura.
i was sad when i found out that i couldnt review before but now its all ok :D

well keep going with your very good work and i cant wait for the next chapter.

byebye :D

So much for my vision of "plushie Kero" popping up in Sakura's cage one morning. This works just as well, though, loved Syaoran's reaction after Sakura came bolting out of the kitchen in terror. If I had any regrets, it's that we didn't get to see Ralen run into him, that could have been gold! ("Slave, where are you this...Ahh! Not you again!" "Hello, putz.") So, the two have been "searching" for something? Wouldn't happen to have the last name "cards" would they? Also liked Touya's "introduction" to Kero, very nice. I rather hope he does come back now and then, if only for a quick snack and to see Sakura. Well, I'm out of things to say for the moment. Laters.

I've been reading this story from the very beginning, ever since it was only 2 or 3 chapters long. I wish I reviewed before now, but I'm a little shy :D

But once this chapter rolled along I had to say something!! Ohmigosh, KEEEEEROOOOOO!! I hope Kero goes Chibi and sticks with Sakura at night to protect her from Ralen! :D At first I thought he was just a jerk, but now I think Ralen is a first-class bastard. At least Touya freaked him out today, huh?

I love this story, thank you for writing it. <3

.... that last sentence gave me a shiver .. is Yue going to die?

OMG!! I love kero! He's so funny!!! He made me chuckle...him and Yue fighting....oh Jeez..I would love to see him with that emo Ralen!

"Hello, there Ralen-baby! You gonna scream again?"

Ralen*Lets out a girly shriek and runs to his bedroom, hiding under the covers*

Thanks for adding Kero when things were getting down!

Nice Kero! Good idea bringing him in, you think he'll turn up again?

Can't wait for the next chap!