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I must say, this is one of my favorite chapters. I love how you have Kero in it now. And the description of the ring sounded perfect for her. :) Very nice. Question. Are you going to have the other characters in here as well?
I adore how there's a whole other part to Yue and what he does when he leaves. In all honesty, as much as I love S/S, I think I'm beginning to read this fanfic more for T/Y and the back story you have planned for Yue. You have my full attention. Though...I must also admit, the way Sakura is portrayed, as this really, really innocent girl can be a little bit too much for me. But I love it nonetheless. :)

Reading this chapter today just made my day. Thank you for writing. :)

Hmmmm. Does this mean that the Clow Cards are attacking? Perhaps that's what they're supposed to be watching for, to turn them back and keep them from harming others. It was nice to meet Kero though. You're right about the comic relief. For Sakura's sake I wish he'd come back. XD It's obvious they get along really well.

Only 10 reviews? I hope it's just that people haven't checked/noticed updates.

Can't wait for more! It's so good. :3 Hmmm.... I think with the help of Sakura, Touya will probably crack first. He may be more stubborn, but he's realized more of his feelings than Yue has. Or at least Yue seems way more reluctant to admit than Touya. But...then again, if Sakura talked to Yue about it again, he might just confess first.... Except he can't seem to get over Clow. >_____> Update update update!

KERO!!!!
ermm, well, now that thas out of my system...I love how frustrated Touya ended up chopping wood, and his ramblings. Hopefully, Keroberos' part won't stay small for long XD
Like some said before, Sakura will help Touya realize his feelings; but it would be soo cool if Kero did the same for Yue. "You looove him!! admit it so I can be right!" "Dammit Keroberos, leave me alone!!" "Not until you admit it! Ja!"
I don't want to say that the things they are capturing are the clow cards, nor that sakura will become the cardcaptor, but it sure feels like they are, I feel like those things will eventually storm the castle, making good on Yue's advice of taking care of it.
Keep going, the plot is getting really good!! ^_^

please do not award anything to this review..

I love your entire story, but i do believe that you should also have kero in his teddy bearish form. Either way, maybe you could let there be a day for which sakura and touya are allowed to go back to their home town. It seems sad that they cant go back even though it may get the plot a bit twisted. Nomatter what i love your story and keep up the good work. Even thuogh you only got ten reviews for the chapter before, trust me your not losing your touch. ^.^

you are making more...right? you betta cos i am waiting and if you dont im gunna explode al over you and make you messy. ^^. (its a beauty spot not a full stop :P)

Well, the story is certainly getting interesting. I wonder what task Clow told Yue and Kero to do, and what about when Kero was saying something is it being a close call or whtever he was saying. It's ture what you said, small role, big mouth. It's nice to finally have him in the story.

o.o I absolutely LOVE your writing! I was never really into CCS fanfictions before, but this story made me take a U-turn. ^-^ I really really like the line at the end of the chapter.. 'It was already too late for that.' As if he finally realized the depth of his decision months ago. Anyway, I have the feeling that the collar had something to do with Yue's slave days. Like he wore it when he was a slave for Clow or something like that.. Just a guess.

Fantastic chapter and I definately cant' wait for more to be revealed ^_~

Thank you, thank you. (Takes a bow.) Yeah, you are getting these out quick. To be honest, I didn't think Yue had even bothered to give Yukito a set of memories in this version, just created a look on the spot to get Touya to talk to him again. Either way....

So, Tomoyo was falling in love with her, too, hm? Okay. And it's nice to see Syaoran being on good terms with Tomoyo, always helps. Interesting how Touya compared the necklace to wearing a slave collar, hopefully he'll get over it. Well, at this rate #36 shouldn't be too long at all, and I look forward to it, and maybe a visit by Kero?(I have this vision of him turning up in the cage in his mini-form, having come to visit Yue, and wondering who the cute new girl is. And then later having an "altercation" with Ralen leading him to break out his true form, for intimidation value if nothing else.) Okay, gonna shut up now. Laters.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh my god oh my god..... OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!How can u write so well....??? HOW!!!???? this is a brillant piece of work.... the way u foritified (sounds like a shampoo ad -.-) the chars... the way u tell the story... the emotions... all just brilliant!!!!! I got to know bout this fic from a friend of mine (thank god for good like minded people) n i told this to another friend of mine... n will not believe the craze it has created!!!!!!!! U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!! U SO ROCK!!!!!!!!!
This story is bout to end isn't it!!!!???? NOOOOO!!! say it aint so!!!! But it'll have to end sometime ne???i wish it wouldn't!!!!! but me n a friend of mine were thinkin of how it would end.... mind u we were slightly sugar high, just slightly, so other than coming up wit a weird scene in which Yue would go barkin mad n stab everything in site includin touya n then go.. 'Oops... sorry' we thought this mite have a really sad endin... somehow... we think that this fic has to have a sad endin....
oh!!! i haven't been able to draw anything else other than PS pics!!!!! but I'm completly done wit only 2.... I hope u like these...
-This is yue huggin sakura inside that cage.... i hope it looks like it!!!!!
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa45/chasva/yusak2.jpg

-this is that glorious bedroom scene in the earlier chaps!!!! the one in which touya is wraped up in yue's amazin hair!!! i couldn't get that scene outta my mind!!!
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa45/chasva/be2.jpg

i really hope u like em.... n.. U ROCK!!!!!