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by Capitalist

schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if his dreams have anything to do with the traditional meaning of antlers or if its your own meaning after all it can be interpreted pretty interestingly. Often as symbols of male sexuality and aggression .. sometimes as wishes for more power ... hmm ...
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm out of words @_@ Ralen has such a nasty mind *beats him down* >.<* can't wait for that psycho to leave. ^_~ Great chapter!
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This update was quicker than expected!! Man, Touya really must be tired from all that sex. I'd be sore too. I mean, damn. And then there's Sakura, ever the innocent. She doesn't really understand what goes on in Touya and Yue's relationship, but it sure did catch her attention... Hahaha!! I love how she kept asking for things while he was in that daze, and he would answer immediately yes. Ralen must accept defeat. And damn does he have some dark fantasies. He's such a control freak, it's insane. I really hope his fantasies don't come true. They're not going to, right? Syaoran and Sakura are going to get a happy ending...?

Touya's perception is amazing. It's not that Syaoran is dangerous, it's just that he's taken the love of Touya's most precious person... I sure hope he doesn't end up too angry, though I have a feeling he will. Ahh! And of course Yue will side with Touya. "No boys." "Of course." XD Touya will always be the protective big brother. He isn't ready to give her away just yet.

Mmmm such a good update!! Can't wait for moooore!!
person RAW19
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0-0! moat excellent!
person cocoke5
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM

yes the chapter was very good and i was happy that saka ask yue for her friends to be her gusts but that man is real scare forme and he will try to get her. do she have power too. i hope so and it come to her. up date soon.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely chapter! It's so nice to see the couples together and happy. And good for Sakura, asking for what she wants from Yue! I was wondering how she would deal with getting to meet with Tomoyo. Touya really surprised me in this chapter, with the dream about the antlers and also the way he interacted with Syaoran. If his magic really starts to develop and he realizes why he hates Syaoran... things could get ugly. Oh yeah, I sincerely hope that Ralen's fantasies don't come true but when I read it I got that cold feeling in my gut that it was foreshadowing that possibility. Ralen, yuck. Anywho, another great chapter and I can't wait to read more!! :D
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEK! wow...loved it!! great job once again!! lol can't wait for more!!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, someone's on a roll!! And yeah, those Viagra adds were very irritating! Okay, reviewing...

Well, Yue and Touya have definitely made up all the way now, even I cannot deny it(Touya's poor bum...) And Sakura glowing all day and denying it was just too cute for words!("You're glowing." "No, I'm not!") And I have to say it's nice seeing Ralen stripped of his "show privileges". And just when I was actually starting to not care about him anymore, Ralen gives me a whole new reason to want to see him dead! Preferably as painfully as possible! But I'll wait... Let's see, anything else? Oh, yeah, loved Syaoran walking in on Yue and Touya, totally priceless! (And somehow I think the secret engagement won't be very secret much longer at the rate Touya's powers seem to be growing...) Okay, I think I'm, done now. Well, until next chapter. Laters!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MAKE MORE CHAPS....IF YOU DONT I'LL GET VERY CROSS....I'LL FIND YOU AND FLY OVER THERE ON MY WINGS AND MAKE YOU BLEED...(are you a girl or guy????)
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow Ralen really needs to die. poor Toya......

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