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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yea so i already reviewed but...sorry ^.^U i drew a couple more. http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w96/Bound2Darkness/pleasureslave.jpg and http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w96/Bound2Darkness/yueandsakura.jpg
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! what a chapter!! Yes, lots of wonderful, wonderful fluff!! I can't believe Syaoran PROPOSED. Oh. my. god. Well I have a feeling Yue will be more understanding than that, and let it happen. He seems to like Sakura an awful lot. :3 He'll let her be happy, I'm sure of it!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was actually one of the girls who was mad at Syaoran, what a jackass...but I suppose thats all fixed for now. Um please forgive my terrible drawing skills but I made these after reading the newest chapter. http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w96/Bound2Darkness/toyaandyue.jpg and http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w96/Bound2Darkness/betrayed.jpg
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really a wonderful chapter to have after all the angsty things. I especially like when Yue said Touya's arms were strong like Clows, since he pretty much compared Touya and Clow there, and when Syaoran asked Sakura to marry him, it was all sweet fluffyness!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was good and i was glad that tonya made yui talk about crow and i glad that syan talk to tonya sister and ask her to marry her. up date soon .
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sad, happy, beautiful, mad, passion, hatred, secrets, glad.
now it sounds like i'm chanting. but, these are all the emotions i felt from this chapter. a worthy update, that is truly awe-inspiring!
now it sounds like i'm chanting. but, these are all the emotions i felt from this chapter. a worthy update, that is truly awe-inspiring!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why yes that shoddy little piece of MS Paint art was drawn by me. :D
It was actually a last minute cheap cop out of one I'd done earlier to illustrate my point in a debate that Yue's fixation on Clow is a natural and beautiful thing :
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/radish_baby/clow.jpg
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Oh this chapter!
Ahhhhhhh! Every time you give us a peek of the Clow/Yue (Yue/Clow? :x) I feel like a druggie that's just gotten a fix of the good stuff. Oh and you write for them so beautifully - maybe not a lot but still enough to make me shudder in anticipation. This was just - guh! And when Yue thinks he can still feel Clow's hands on him.
Oh Super Fic how do I adore thee? Let me count the ways.
It was actually a last minute cheap cop out of one I'd done earlier to illustrate my point in a debate that Yue's fixation on Clow is a natural and beautiful thing :
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/radish_baby/clow.jpg
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Oh this chapter!
Ahhhhhhh! Every time you give us a peek of the Clow/Yue (Yue/Clow? :x) I feel like a druggie that's just gotten a fix of the good stuff. Oh and you write for them so beautifully - maybe not a lot but still enough to make me shudder in anticipation. This was just - guh! And when Yue thinks he can still feel Clow's hands on him.
Oh Super Fic how do I adore thee? Let me count the ways.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good afternoon... Oh well... its 5:24 PM right now...
I think I’ve been successfully reading your fanfic for a year and half or two. Just want to apologize for not commenting and reviewing your fic. I’m actually not that type (of not giving reviews…)… hehehe... *pout*…Call me a parasite... *wink*
I find your story rather profound and delicate. I can see consistency in the story line although there is no parallelism in your grammar. I always find consistency in the way you relate the conversation of Yue and Sakura. The part of no parallelism is not that of a large portion yet sometimes I am confused with the ‘he’ in some paragraphs.
The detailing of characters is good and knowing the anime itself is quite helpful since the readers won’t be having enough trouble of imagining it. On the contrary, knowing this full well, you still describe some of the obvious but giving it a variation according to your sense of taste and plot.
The introduction is very well written that you let me think and ask of what the story really is. A factor is that I am already hooked and didn’t care if I am more than fifteen chapters behind. I caught up (I really can’t remember where…) for only a night I think. Just got so curious what will happen next, I think.
I hope you still continue writing and enjoying very well your story.
I really have one question. Do you plan to bring Clow back? *smirk*
I think I’ve been successfully reading your fanfic for a year and half or two. Just want to apologize for not commenting and reviewing your fic. I’m actually not that type (of not giving reviews…)… hehehe... *pout*…Call me a parasite... *wink*
I find your story rather profound and delicate. I can see consistency in the story line although there is no parallelism in your grammar. I always find consistency in the way you relate the conversation of Yue and Sakura. The part of no parallelism is not that of a large portion yet sometimes I am confused with the ‘he’ in some paragraphs.
The detailing of characters is good and knowing the anime itself is quite helpful since the readers won’t be having enough trouble of imagining it. On the contrary, knowing this full well, you still describe some of the obvious but giving it a variation according to your sense of taste and plot.
The introduction is very well written that you let me think and ask of what the story really is. A factor is that I am already hooked and didn’t care if I am more than fifteen chapters behind. I caught up (I really can’t remember where…) for only a night I think. Just got so curious what will happen next, I think.
I hope you still continue writing and enjoying very well your story.
I really have one question. Do you plan to bring Clow back? *smirk*
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, one reconciliation down, one half-way there(I don't think Yue and Touya are all the way there just yet.). And something tells me it'll be easier for Syaoran than he thinks it will. The only real problem is that bastard Ralen. Though I must say Sakura's commentary comparing him to the guy who kidnapped and sold her was interesting. Can't wait for #34! Laters!
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I practically swooned at the proposal, for real, it was so romantic. I loved that, it was so sweet. And I was really engrossed in the castle's backstory and the relationship between Yue and Clow! And yeah, Yue is showing a more vulnerable side now...I LOVED the Yukito scene hahaha, it was hilarious at the end. Anyway, I wonder if Touya might ever be seme now that their relationship has changed so much, and how he's going to react if/when he finds out that Syaoran is planning to marry his sister and buy her freedom too. (And also that his sister wants him to!)
Thanks for the chapter! It came out pretty quickly, I was really happy!
Thanks for the chapter! It came out pretty quickly, I was really happy!