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weekly updates wuld b cool !!!! this story is good. feel sad 4 touya tho. but its good hes getting back at yue !!!!

Nice. I love all the drama, it makes things so much more interesting. Hopefully Li will be able to listen to Sakura's words in the future and will stop his fight with her, but I guess I understand how he feels, if I were a guy and I caught my lover with another like that, I would be pretty pissed and probably wouldn't even listen to what their side of the story is. But I actually like the Yue and Touya drama, because it's showing just how dependent Yue is on Touya, it seems like that to me, especially with an ending like that to this chapter. I'll be sure to read the next one when it's out. Good job with the story.

I've been rereading this for awhile now mulling things over and if I mull any longer I'm never going to review. Lazy pants is laaaaaazzzzyyyyy.

I can't decide what must be bothering Touya more - the fact that he thinks Yue loves Clow more (up to debate) or the fact that he found out/thinks he found out that Yue was also a slave. I know I'd be pissed at that too - that's a hell of a leap to make from sharing some cuddly cute love love thing as your master's slave to becoming a cold hearted bastard living on the top of the mountain going through your own pleasure slaves like tissues.

The Sakura Li thing . . . well . . . meh, it'll work out. Eventually. Li's not a jack ass at heart, Sakura isn't a flimsy bimbo - sooner or later they'll see this. *throws flowers* Open your heart!

Oh ho ho ho ho - your dream sequences are fantastic. Just the amount of imagery in this one - just guh ajsdhasjhd! Please update soon!

Meh! Upon further thought I've come to the conclusion hat they are BOTH justified. Ok maybe not in death by whipping but I just went back and reread all those chapters and you have to admit Touya is equally guilty in the stupid department on this one. Impudent or not if I slept in the same bed as a god only knows how old, winged whitey man who had awesome god powers and they tld me not to pick at certain things I would listen.

It just goes to show the depths of his interest in Yue that he wouldn't leave this particular topic. Total Yue stalking. http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/radish_baby/yuestalking.jpg But then again I don't blame anyone for wanting to know more about a mystery man.

Still this will be interesting to see how it plays out.

I can't imagine the pain Yue is going through. You are right in your Authors Note: Everyone has been in A similar situation at some point in time where they wish they could turn back time and erase a bad mistake. I can only feel sorrry for Yue because I understand where he was coming from and that it is only his nature to act like that and do cruel things. Yue can't help it and Touya should be happy that Yue is showing any remorse and sorrow at his actions because I don't think Yue would have had those feelings for any of his other slaves. After a nightmare like that is Yue going to wake up distressed or even crying? Would that alarm Touya into fogiving Yue? I wonder what Touya is thinking through all this? Maybe the next chapter should focus on Touya's thoughts since this chapter focused on Li's and Yue's thoughts. You have stumped me with these new chapters. I couldn't possibly predict what will happen next because I can't even begin to imagine what the characters are planning to do next. I check this story every day for a new chapter and I hope you can get away from the kiddies long enough to write the next chapter hopefully sometime this week. That would be nice.

Well... It was one strong action>_< Syaoran got mad, Toya got mad, Yue and Sakura got dumped-___- But strangeli I think that Toya's an ass here. Sure, whipping was a little too much, but he WAS told to stay away from that room, wasn't he? And he went there like a stupid kid and then even asked the most stupid questions. If he was smart, he would know how Yue reacts to rudeness... I understand that his situation is difficuld, but it looks like he's trying to piss Yue off on purpose sometimes.

I'm all for whipping himXD *cruel, cruel woman i amXD*

Syaoran is just his usual hothead self. He will get some time to think and I guess he'll see that he was to fast to judge. Sakura is just her timid and not so fast self and I hope that someday she'll get enough courage to kich some sense into her boyfriend^^

I'm sitting tight and waiting for the next chapter with hope that Toya will finally get some sense beaten into his head and Yue will stop going all emo on himXD

I am glad I made you laugh. i didnt expect to get praise for my review. Thankyou. :) :) :) This chapter was intense. i could almost feel the tension in the castle. Nothing is going right for anyone in the castle which is sad for them. but gives us great reading! I couldnt help but notice you mentioned Yue being alone a few times. Has something happened to him in the past that has given him a fear of being alone? i got the vibe that you were emphasising that. the last line in the chapter said 'poor sad lonely Yue' like it was the last thing that is meant to get stuck in our heads when we read it.
i had a dream about this story the other night. it was weird. Touya was on the balcony and still hasnt spoke to Yue. somehow he knew about Sakura and Li being together. and he finally spoke to Yue and said simply 'I want to leave'. Then he and Sakura left the castle while Yue got into a deeper spiral of regret and depression. it was such a vivid dream. I can still see the image of Touya and Sakura walking towards the city holding hands as they leave the castle while Yue watches them from the balcony but he cant stop them. I had to check the story to confirm if it really didnt happen.lol. scary!

i am looking forward to chapter 33. Please write soon. a one week update would be cool :) :) :)

To the contrary I think that Li was completely justified. After risking everything, after being so loyal and doing so much for Sakura all he ever expected in return was that his loyalty would be returned. He was unfortunately dissapointed - honor is so obviously important to him that this sort of a betrayal is unforgivable. Sure, she didn't really understand what she was doing, but that doesn't change the fact that she effectively stabbed him in the back.

I can see Li's reasoning alot better than Sakura. She's naive but her saying that she had to was just plain stupid on her part. I mean she's what 12 in this story maybe 14? (Sorry I forgot if you mentioned her age when her birthday passed.) She wanted to forget I can give you that, but to go into Tomoyo's arms, not caring that Ralen was there, and practically beg for it just to forget and say that she didn't want it when she obviously did. That is sad, even for her. She must've had a REALLY sheltered life if she doesn't even know what the word whore means but her brother does. Hell, he's been protecting her this whole time and she calls him ignorant? Sorry, but sometimes I just wanna smack her one and tell her exactly what's been going on with her brother and what he's done for her to live as happily as she could. Jeez, if she told Touya in the beginning about Ralen I'm sure he would've told Yue to do something about it, but noooo she's too stubborn and yet she expects him to tell her what happened? No, sorry Sakura but not everything will fall at your feet. If you had even told Li he would've done something too but instead you buried your own grave not lie in it. And Yue seriously needs to realize this too, not everything will go the way he wants it; therefore, he needs to tell Touya that he's sorry and he needs to do some serious making up to do.... He can start by killing Ralen, hehehe. Out of all of your character developments, I like Touya and Li the best b/c they both try to do what they can in what they believe for themselves and both caring for Sakura even if she is waaayyy too innocent for her own good that she needs a reality check. Too bad that they don't get along though... YuexTouya rocks!!! =^-^=

I have to admit I can't hate Li even when he called her a, "whore". @_@ So is Touya 'broken' now? T.T Yue is feeling pretty sh!tty right about now. I was shocked when Li found out Sakura was doing those kinds of things while Ralen was watching. T^T Please update soon *grabs a tissue*