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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank the stars, i'm finally able to review this story. Once they took away the review function, i was lost without being able to tell you all the wonderful things in your story that have me drooling over the next update. Cause yeah, i'm that big of a nerd. You have no idea how much i've enjoyed reading this, as, hell, one of my favorite couples EVER and no one has bothered to write anything about them. Maybe I will one day, but, lazy. Anyway, enough about my internal writers dilema, we're here to talk about you, and this amazing story. Since it would stretch on forever if i started reviewing my favorite parts thus far, so lets just concentrate on the last chapter. And let me say, angst is my mistress, and you wield her well. Though i'm yearning for those two to just fully shack up and enjoy each others lovings, we know that wouldn't make for a fun read. And hey, Touya is just too perfect at coming up with ways to wound Yue, injuring him consiously and unconsiously. I only hope his wounds don't scar too badly. If I were Yue though, i tihnk my temper would flare up a lot quicker than that never ending patience. Besides, Touya has reacted much more animatedly towards threats and problems from Yue then these soft words and touches. Maybe they just have to have a good old fashion scream fest. Hopefully more productive than Lee (cannot spell proper name for the life of me) and Sakura. It's just not fair for him and Yue to gang up on their lovers and storm off while the other is chained/caged. That just isn't going to make a good relationship. Besides, Lee's naivety is kinda pathetic- what did he tihnk he was getting when he fell in love with a pleasure slave?
Okay, i'm going to wrap this up before i ramble forever, but still, just to make sure you understand my love for your story and giving myself a big ol fangirl stamp, OMG I lik, ttly Luv U!!!11!
Okay, i'm going to wrap this up before i ramble forever, but still, just to make sure you understand my love for your story and giving myself a big ol fangirl stamp, OMG I lik, ttly Luv U!!!11!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Yue must feel like he's being repeatedly slapped in the face while his heart is being constantly stepped on... it's like Tartarus or something. Forced to endure the same agony forever in hell... man, Touya's cutting him off completely! Downright refusing to acknowledge him, that's some serious shit! Poor boy was seriously falling hard for Yue and not only did seeing Clow's stuff make him feel like second place in Yue's heart... but he got the ULTIMATE whuppin from HELL because of it... so yea, he deserves the right to be pissed to high heaven!
And to tell the truth, I pity poor Sakura... but I don't hate Syaoran... that "Whore" comment was VERY harsh and I didn't appreciate him calling her that... but it was necessary to convey in that scene and I respect your writing. But he's hurt too! Not to mention he's also angry at himself for getting aroused at the situation, that coupled with the jealousy didn't make for a good mix when talking to Sakura. He's really in love with her... she's his first love and you can tell he would've jumped at the chance to marry her. So to find out she's been doing all that with Tomoyo (even though she was forced, the one time he saw her... she didn't seem like it was BEING forced upon her) in front of his most hated enemy (that perverted evil BASTARD!!)... I can see how he felt betrayed...
GODDAMN DO I LOVE ALL THIS DRAMA!! YOU ROCK MY FACE OFF!! XD
And to tell the truth, I pity poor Sakura... but I don't hate Syaoran... that "Whore" comment was VERY harsh and I didn't appreciate him calling her that... but it was necessary to convey in that scene and I respect your writing. But he's hurt too! Not to mention he's also angry at himself for getting aroused at the situation, that coupled with the jealousy didn't make for a good mix when talking to Sakura. He's really in love with her... she's his first love and you can tell he would've jumped at the chance to marry her. So to find out she's been doing all that with Tomoyo (even though she was forced, the one time he saw her... she didn't seem like it was BEING forced upon her) in front of his most hated enemy (that perverted evil BASTARD!!)... I can see how he felt betrayed...
GODDAMN DO I LOVE ALL THIS DRAMA!! YOU ROCK MY FACE OFF!! XD
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Li? he has some issues to work out. everyone does, actually. excellent update.
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa! You had it planned for us to hate Li like this, didn't you. T___T I remember that little hint... I didn't want to believe it. But yeah. I think I do now, and I really don't want to but...that was so cruel.
Great update, no matter how sad.
Great update, no matter how sad.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't hate Li, so much. I knew it was coming at some point. After the last time they had their moment, I knew it would come this time or the next one. I'm just ashamed that he took it so badly CONSIDERING that even relieved himself same as Ralen does. Sounds like Li had some hypocrisy surging through his hot-blooded male veins. But in the heat of the moment he probably didn't think to check himself like he should have and what not. She may have cheated but other than that she's never been anything but herself and she loved him. I just think he should have at least listened to her reasons a bit better.
Yeah, sure, if you want to say it was all Sakura's fault, I can see that but I definately don't agree with it by any means. Her excuses were the truth but in her raging of emotions she lost her thought enough to find a way to make Syaoran listen as I knew he would if she could but find a way to make it so. But even so, Sakura IS a pleasure slave and knowledgeable in the ways of pleasure. It's an undeniable fact that she can't help due to her naive nature at helping that man some numerous chapters back. Considering that she was all alone, save her brother, Li was all she had, not considering the rare visits from Tomoyo and Meilin, and to suddenly have it all ripped away once more because of her own weaknesses, will probably scar her deeply. It could either hurt her or make her stronger, if she lets it.
I do, though, hope that Tomoyo, being the one that brought it all on, fixes things as they should be. It might not so much be her place but it was because of her own reasons that she failed to find a better way of working around having Ralen permit her visits. Seems like she just liked things as they were.
Back to my indiscretions with Li, she had JUST AS MUCH, IF NOT MORE, to risk by loving him. Why didn't he realize that? What reason would she be doing things with Tomoyo, knowing that it was alright in some manner and yet risk her own life to love Syaoran? He needs to get over himself and realize a few things, same as Sakura. It's no doubt they both have much to realize in learn but with things as they are, it seems unachievable.
I am slightly concerned that, that may have been the thing to tip Sakura's suicide scale in absolute favor of the idea though. o.<;
Who am I forgetting...? n.n;
Oh ya, Touya x Yue. xD Anyways, I loved the previous chapter when Touya asked if Yue was Clow's pleasure slave. I wanted to die with fangirl screams. It was awesome and damn, did it feel good to read. I am definately assured and no one will change my mind that Yue was in the wrong from his first cross word in that situation. Curiosity is inevitable and any one would have looked at some point and probably asked the same questions. I know I would have. He deserves the way that Touya reacted to him for his haughty attitude and for lying to himself. He cares DEEPLY about Touya but wants to maintain his authority so he denies it. He was bound to do one thing to many to break Touya's love for him.
If he will but give it back, is all up to Yue. Though I doubt it will happen soon. I never liked their coupling in this story. Yue's unwillingness to submit and act, in some form, human, turned me away immediately.
Yeah, sure, if you want to say it was all Sakura's fault, I can see that but I definately don't agree with it by any means. Her excuses were the truth but in her raging of emotions she lost her thought enough to find a way to make Syaoran listen as I knew he would if she could but find a way to make it so. But even so, Sakura IS a pleasure slave and knowledgeable in the ways of pleasure. It's an undeniable fact that she can't help due to her naive nature at helping that man some numerous chapters back. Considering that she was all alone, save her brother, Li was all she had, not considering the rare visits from Tomoyo and Meilin, and to suddenly have it all ripped away once more because of her own weaknesses, will probably scar her deeply. It could either hurt her or make her stronger, if she lets it.
I do, though, hope that Tomoyo, being the one that brought it all on, fixes things as they should be. It might not so much be her place but it was because of her own reasons that she failed to find a better way of working around having Ralen permit her visits. Seems like she just liked things as they were.
Back to my indiscretions with Li, she had JUST AS MUCH, IF NOT MORE, to risk by loving him. Why didn't he realize that? What reason would she be doing things with Tomoyo, knowing that it was alright in some manner and yet risk her own life to love Syaoran? He needs to get over himself and realize a few things, same as Sakura. It's no doubt they both have much to realize in learn but with things as they are, it seems unachievable.
I am slightly concerned that, that may have been the thing to tip Sakura's suicide scale in absolute favor of the idea though. o.<;
Who am I forgetting...? n.n;
Oh ya, Touya x Yue. xD Anyways, I loved the previous chapter when Touya asked if Yue was Clow's pleasure slave. I wanted to die with fangirl screams. It was awesome and damn, did it feel good to read. I am definately assured and no one will change my mind that Yue was in the wrong from his first cross word in that situation. Curiosity is inevitable and any one would have looked at some point and probably asked the same questions. I know I would have. He deserves the way that Touya reacted to him for his haughty attitude and for lying to himself. He cares DEEPLY about Touya but wants to maintain his authority so he denies it. He was bound to do one thing to many to break Touya's love for him.
If he will but give it back, is all up to Yue. Though I doubt it will happen soon. I never liked their coupling in this story. Yue's unwillingness to submit and act, in some form, human, turned me away immediately.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't hate Li at all (probably cos I'm way more interested in the development of Yue/Touya at this stage). Hope the 'darkest night' is as dark as it'd go for Yue/Touya... (still feeling rather sad for Touya at the moment...) When will Yue realise why Touya is so hurt and what it is that Touya wants? :~ [secretly yelling at Yue: don't you beat Touya up again!] So I guess I'm a Touya fan...??!?
Please update your fascinating story very very soon! :D Look forward to reading the next chapter.
Please update your fascinating story very very soon! :D Look forward to reading the next chapter.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one more review to sum it to all the rest you have so far... no need for me to tell you that your story rocks, not that i like yaoi but either way the plot always makes me read it, it is brilliant, i though i leaved a comment a while ago... but i guess it got deleted or something... wow... it is great to see so many so many reviews as well as so many people wanting to read what will happend in this story, it seems you could writte a novel or a book out of this fic, but that will be your call, i must say it is very sad that you got pissed about those flames some people posted to you a few chapters back, and that you got pissed, but thatīs history, you do writte like a pro, maybe you are, i cannot say what things i like especially of this tale because i like all of them, and i cannot speculate about whatīs going to happend later because you are writting the plot, im just a regular reader that doesnīt stand from the rest of reviews or flames, just a reader, thatīs all, but a reader that is letting you know that you entretain me and other people with your fic, i am a writter of fics myself, but not as good as you are, i wish my fics got so many reviews like yours, but then i remember in the end we do this just to entretain and have fun...
eh... i just recently readed your chapter 30, althou i know you already expresed your anger to those that flamed you and i know you got over that, and you no longer care, but, i just felt the need to express myself and say... chill out... be cool... keep writting and entretain people.
im no diferent from any comprensive writter and i donīt care if i donīt get or not a honorific mention at the end of one of your chapters, i just want to let you know, that i am one of the people that supports you... thatīs all
keep up the good work, and... it would be nice if you ever decide to talk to me, althou i think you already said that you donīt talk to reviewrs or something, but is ok, just as long as you read this review it will be mission acomplish to me.
thanks for an awesome story... bye
eh... i just recently readed your chapter 30, althou i know you already expresed your anger to those that flamed you and i know you got over that, and you no longer care, but, i just felt the need to express myself and say... chill out... be cool... keep writting and entretain people.
im no diferent from any comprensive writter and i donīt care if i donīt get or not a honorific mention at the end of one of your chapters, i just want to let you know, that i am one of the people that supports you... thatīs all
keep up the good work, and... it would be nice if you ever decide to talk to me, althou i think you already said that you donīt talk to reviewrs or something, but is ok, just as long as you read this review it will be mission acomplish to me.
thanks for an awesome story... bye
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!
No I don't hate Li, he just made the story more coplicated, and emo. (YAY)
Now perhaps Touya will see Sakura's swollen face, and ask her about it, and Sakura will spill the beans, Touya will get Trés Angry, ask Yue about it, Yue will be like ?????? Then all grr. Li will come back to Sakura but Touya will be there and then there will be a fight, and then Yue will come in and put Li in prison, but Sakura still loves him. Yue lets her go from slavery, and Touya falls into love with Yue again.
The rest of the story in a nutshell. (Maybe)
No I don't hate Li, he just made the story more coplicated, and emo. (YAY)
Now perhaps Touya will see Sakura's swollen face, and ask her about it, and Sakura will spill the beans, Touya will get Trés Angry, ask Yue about it, Yue will be like ?????? Then all grr. Li will come back to Sakura but Touya will be there and then there will be a fight, and then Yue will come in and put Li in prison, but Sakura still loves him. Yue lets her go from slavery, and Touya falls into love with Yue again.
The rest of the story in a nutshell. (Maybe)
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Li, that titchy dumbass! Poor Sakura. I feel kind of bad for Yue too. I'm really curious to know what's going to happen next. Thanks for the chapter!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, boy. First Touya and Yue fall apart, and now this. Though all things considered, Sakura might have an easier time making up with Syaoran than Yue will with Touya. Somehow, though, I'd gotten the impression that Sakura had already told him about having to have extra training sessions with Tomoyo in order to be allowed time with her by Ralen....oh, well, my bad. Here's hoping the little monsters don't kill you too much before you can get out number 33, kay?! Laters!