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Great story. Just finished reading up to the current chapter, and I must say I love what I have read so far.

As far as you comment at the end of chapter 32, why would anyone hate Li for his reaction. If anything I feel pity for him for falling for Sakura. However anyone wants to try and spin it Li caught her having sex with someone else. Not only that but he finds out she was doing it before and after she started her relationship with Li, and never told him about it. Also did she even once seem to regret what she chose to do with Toyomo? All she tried to do was justify and make excuses for her choice, and her comment on how he was the only male she has ever kissed was suppose make it better? While it's sad to see this happen to her, hopefully that will make he grow up a little and be a little less niave.

No, I don't hate Li.

Also,I have no sympathy for Yue, for his actions both in this chapters and previous ones he is getting what he deserves, maybe this will eventually make him remember what it was like to be on Touya side of the equation, probably not in time to save any sort of relationship with Touya, for I can't see Yue finding any way to get Touya's forgiveness except maybe to free Sakura.

If anyone in the story deserves the readers anger/hate, I would say it would have to be Toyomo. I mean with as long Toyomo has been coming to see Sakura she hasn't been able to figure out a way around Ralen's demands? Especially after Sakura confessed to her that she likes Li? She had to know something like this would happen if Li, found out about them, she is no where near as naive or innocent as Sakura is. It's not like after the first time could realy stop them from seeing each other. Ralen comes off would protect his own hide and job first above all else. All if would most likely take is a offhand comment by Toyomo about what Yue would think of his actions to his pleasure slave. Ralen would then have no choice but to back off for now till he could think of something else to blackmail Sakura with. Then again I think Toyomo is honestly happy with the excuse preform those act with Sakura and that is why she has done nothing to stop them.

What I would love to see in the near future is Toyomo come back in the next few days concerned for Sakura, find out Li dumped her, and storm off to give Li a piece of her mind only to have Li turn it around on her. And then we could sit back and watch the sparks fly. ^_^

Couple things I am curious about in this story.

First what principles govern the color of the collar? I mean for something that is used to bring so much more money in the sale of a slave I would have thought it would have less easily circumvented. Would buyers still be willing to pay so much basis of the collar be white if it doesn't denote the complete purity/virginity of slave? I mean it's been proven that you can have oral sex with the collar still staying white. What about Anal sex? Would buyers feel cheated if this took place or were the loopholes built into the collars on purpose to allow for slave training?

Second since you have introduced magic and Clow Reed do the clow cards exist and will Sakura be getting ahold of them?

Hope I haven't offended anyone with my opinions or questions. All in all I am really enjoying this story.

Is it weird to say I don't hate Li? I can understand exactly where he's coming from. Using words to lash out in the only way he can hurt Sakura as badly as she hurt him. I also can't wait to see Touya's next move ..

No I don't hate li. He does have the right to be mad. Hopefully he calms down and actually listens to Sakura, than again that relationship was illfated from the momment they met wasn't it?

I think Syaoran will give in. He'll feel bad and come back to her and say a little more harsh words but give in. I was wondering about that the whole chapter while her and Tomoyo were together, thinking "doesn't she realize she's with someone now?" She technically never made it appear to have no experience.I mean, common, she was bought at an auction, so she'd have to be taught some stuff. Or does he just not know how those types of things work?

I'm at a loss for Toya and Yue though now, I have noo idea what's happening in that area. You kind've made the story seem like it's coming to a closure, and then broadened it again with mystery. Which is nice for me, because that means more chapters to read. Thanks for the update <3

I actually really feel bad for both Sakura and Li. I completely understand why he would be upset about that, but she also needed to talk to Tomoyo, and that was really the only way....
I don't know...I definitley don't hate Li though :(

I hate the situation that Li and Sakura have found themselves in, but I can't honestly say that I hate Li. ... I just don't really like him anymore. Heh. "Darkest Night" is certainly an appropriate title for this chapter and it's hard to imagine how it can be put right again. As much as I have been enjoying the couples, I hope that the reconcilliation doesn't come too soon. It gives Yue a chance to see what he's missing in a relationship without affection and I'm interested in seeing how Li will act after this. Spiteful? Angry? Vindictive? Or just hurt? Quiet? Depressed? I wonder what Meilin will think of all this? Perhaps she will be the one to snap sense into Li. Although he does have a point and maybe Sakura will be too distressed to "perform" with Tomoyo anymore? Ralen would hate that and what Ralen hates makes me relatively happy. A good chapter. Good luck with the continuation. :)

Now Li will come back to her feeling bad.

he is mad right now and her .. but i think that he still love her. and for yue and tonya i hope that they get thing right and back to they love . i cn not wait for the next chapter of the story and i fell for yu and teach little ones . i bet it is hard and good luck and be wait for more of the story. up date soon.

oooh...I love this chapter..ur story is gettingbetter an dbetter...soo marvelous...
I can't wait who will actually apoligize...will it be Yue ora Touya?...and ugh..that
thickheaded Li...why can't he just go and talk with Tomoyo...but nooo...he had to end
thing with Sakura...keep up the good work...update as soon as you can..

ya ne!!

Wonderful story and what not.

My only concerns if it Ralen is going to mean anything more to the story. I hope so. Just so I can read that Li kicked his ass and all that jazz. xD <3