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Man, I'm so eager for you to update after reading this chapter... I keep checking like, every day now. Since you said you liked hearing other people's ideas I think Toya should definitely be taken to a hospital or something, wounds that deep would most certainly need stitching, even with medicine they'd take a really long time to heal, and Toya could need to re-learn how to walk. (aww!) anyway but it's your story and I'm quite happy with what you've done with it so far, so whatever direction you take next I'm sure I'm going to love it. Keep up the great work. (and I TOTALLY predicted what happened. I knew yue was clow's pleasure slave. I KNEW IT. XD)

Two things stuck out at me in this chappy; 1. When Sakura yelled at Yue and said something like "you said you liked him". That would have really hurt Yue I think. and it would have gave both Li and Ralen a big shock too!
2. Touya thinking about using the picture as a way to get out the castle. I didn't realise he still wnated to escape. I guess Touya thinks that Yue is only reliving what he did with Clow because he still loves Clow and that nothing Touya and Yue have done together is "real" and that it's all just memories of Clow. Or whatever.

Please write the next chapter soon. It's been 3 weeks already. That's longer than we've had to wait for a long time!!

Wow, that was quite the rant at the end of chapter 30, and I feel for you. Some people don't know when to quit. I heartily agree with you; it's your story, your plot, and it's ultimately your descision how you tell it. I have been following this story for over two years and I still love it immensely. Don't you dare cave to pressure, just follow your path with pride. Although it may take you quite some time between postings, I'll keep checking, because it's worth the wait. You Go Girl!!

Lol, I don't know whether to be happy that I was right. The bit of fluffy between them was rather nice; but if it'd been nothing but more fluff til the end of the story, I think I might have lost interest. I can't say I'm mad at Yue really, nor am I really that sorry for Touya. He knew he was risking punishment. Actually, I feel sorry for Sakura who was helpless to do anything for her brother except plead with Lee to intervene.
As for predicting what comes next...I wonder if the reason behind Yue's disappearances (besides his new moon weakness) is going to come to light soon...right about the time Yue and Touya just begin to patch things up after this latest fallout. As for Sakura and Lee, I bet the next "major development" might just be their secret being found out. I can guess how Sakura, Lee, and Touya will all react...its Yue that is the wild card in that one. If he dismisses Lee from his service, that leaves Sakura at the bad guy's mercy...

I am not angry at Yue. I feel sorry for him. I'm sure we have all done something bad to someone in our lives [hopefully not to the extent of what Yue did to Touya] and I can definitly relate to the feelings of regret Yue must be feeling right now. he probably has a million things on his mind and all of them thoughts are bad. 'Why did i do that? Why didnt I wait to calm down before reacting? Why did I say those things to Touya? I wish I could go back and change what i did. How bad have I hurt him? What will he say when he wakes up? Will he ever want to talk to me? Will he even wake up? I wish i didnt hurt him. I wish I didnt hurt him. I wish I didnt hurt him.' I think they are some of the thoughts going in Yue's head now. We have all had them thoughts before about someone in our life. i am looking forward to chapter 32. Please write soon :) :) :) :)

Read this story all in one go on a reccommendation. Best Four hours ever spent on a fanfiction. :D <3 I love where this is going. I honestly thought it was finished. I was surprised when I saw that it was longer than one of the Harry Potter books. I'm glad there is going to be more. I can't wait for it at all. :) This is so good, and my brain is currently mush because it's 3:00am but I'll review it so far.
Exciting, sweet, eeexxxccellllent vilan *tents fingers* Sayoran and Touya always have some hardships. >_> I know they'll have an understanding one day though. I've got no predictions for this story, trying to predict it will just ruin it for me.

I really like this though, it's terribly hard to find good CCS fanfiction, even harder for things that are well thought out. This has taken 2 years? Wow that's some dedication. I wish the best of luck to you on writing this and hope it doesn't become a chore and keeps being fun to write.

this chapter has hit me hard. i can't stop thinking about it. please write the next chapter soon. i was hoping it would be up this week sometime. please. please. please.

Love you! your great ! don't change a thing.

Wow. That was wonderful and terrible to read, all at once. Funny thing is, I felt desperately sorry for Yue at the end.
Anyway, I've always loved your story and never commented before but I really felt motivated to after this chapter.
Keep up the awesome work!

I've never actually written a single review for the tonnes of fanfics that I've read... I'm more of the just read (and for some fics, reread again and again) and do nothing type. But if an extra review adds a 0.01% chance of having you finish your next chapter a day earlier [a motivation factor?], then here it is. Coz I wasted a whole night after reading the latest chapter thinking what's going to happen to Touya and Yue after this [and neglected my work]. And since my imagination sucks (imagining crap that ranges anything from Touya breaksdown with the thought of being just trash to Yue and want to commit suicide, to Touya puking everytime he sees Yue's face...), I'd really really prefer to read your version instead when your next chapter comes out. So please update very, very soon, please. In the meantime, I'll just have to keep rereading your existing chapters... >_< (cos the new novel I spent $$$ buying at the bookshop really suck in comparison with your story...)