rate_review Reviews

I'm shocked.I thought Yue loved Touya too much to ever harm him again.he said a few chapters back that he would never allow anyone to harm Touya again. But now he has hurt Touya himself.I can't fathom how you are going to write the next chapter.The next chapter has become something that my mind can't grasp, Like what is at the end of the universe.It is just beyond me how you are going to continue.Needless to say I am very much looking forward to whatever happens next.Whatever you write next will be beyond anything I could ever think up.Please update soon.

This chapter really adds new dimensions to the title of your story, which at first glance doesn't seem too inspired or brilliant. But "Pleasure Slave" really has so many levels of meaning. The obvious referrent is Touya, but then there's also Sakura, and now last of all, the doubling effect of Yue as Clow's slave. I really love how this story only gains in complexity the further into it you go, and everything ties together so nicely - it shows tremendous thought. Most people get carried away with planning and so their first chapters tend to be plot-heavy, while the rest of the story is mostly resolution. Anyway, please don't get discouraged by the few critics and continue to write this beautiful and fascinating story.

I love coming to this fic and seeing new chapters. Not just one but two this time. ^_^ Have I mentioned that you make the best exam study breaks?

Man, this relationship is amazingly messed up. In a great way of course. Oh what tangled webs we weave?

Of the most recent chapter, the one thing that struck me more than anything else was Yue fleeing after he realized what he had done to Touya. Just the actions and emotions as he ran to Clow's tower was so palpable and intense. Lovely.

I'll be back next time. ^_^ See you then!

PS: sorry you had flamers and stupid people who don't want to read a fantastic story, they want to read what they want to happen, and are ignorant of all else that is well made. I know how one flame can really just upset you and put you in a bad mood, but we're all here for you. ^_^ Keep your chin up.

OMG That's mad crazy!! And I loved it!! But Yue almost killed him!! Thank God for Syaoran and Sakura or he would be dead!! All poor Touya wants is the guys heart... and Yue's not ready to let go so of course he'd be furious. And I knew it!! I just knew he was Clow's former lover, but I never pegged him being a pleasure slave! Crazy plot twist there that I didn't see coming! EXCELLENT CHAPTER!! I cannot wait for the next one! What's miserable!Yue gonna do now?!

Hi! :waves: Imma new fan of ur ficcie~

Cant believe I missed such great fic. Got in contact with ur fic when I fell face first into it i.e. while reading out few lines while checkin out for TouYuk fic(which is my fav pair of CCS) and so far just love ur fic very much. Collided with ur fic when 30 chap was already completed :sigh: Ya, I know imma late person, cant help it. Im not a good reviewer but just wrote sth. to let u know I am 1 more fan of urs.
Story’s plot is really interesting and exciting. I just don’t seem to get inuff of it n want more. I really love ur writing style too, very clear to picture it. I had not read such interesting story in CCS before n nonetheless of YuexTouya pairing( which I was not much of fan be4 reading ur fic, not that I don’t luv Yue…, really handsome)
Touya’s torture (including prev. chaps) was really painful, cant help but feel like crying. Glad to see Sakura stood up (even though it didn’t make any diff.) Poor Li suffered too XD
N last but not the least YUE… miserable… T^T Really lookin forward to how he is goin to handle the situation now

Will be waiting for ur next update, hopefully soon? ^ ^;v

Wow...this story is amazingly well written. I applaud your creative ideas...amazing. And the way you have their personalities...wonderful. Never before have I read a story quite like this! You have me on the edge of my seat greedily inhaling all the words in this story. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!

MOREEEE!!!!....I was soo totaly touched by this story...it sooo rocks!!...
can't wait what will happen now...will Touya forgive Yue?...and will Yue tell
Touya about his past with Clow?...aiiaia...and what will happen with Sakura???...
I need to know these things!!...sooo update as soon as you can!!!...you are doin a fabulous job!!

ya ne!

I'm all crying now. That was terribly sad. But I think about Yue's situation too. He seems to be in his own world, and is probably dealing with some pretty strong enotions in his own mind right now. Shown by how quiet he was being and how Li said he looked miserable. But of course I'm sad about Touya too. His curiosity has gotten in the way, but thats okay. A plot needs good times and bad times to be good, it can't always be 'I'm so happy, we love each other and will never ever hurt or fight because that's how ridiculously happy we are' I would hate a story like that. A story needs some angst and drama, at least for people who are trying to make a long and possibly complex story. If you're making short one/two shots and crack fics, no need of the drama and angst.

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Thank you sooooo much for writing this wonderful story!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just want to let you know I totally hate that you're such a FANTASTIC writer and that I LOVE your story to death!!!!!!!!!! My friend and I are just always like "we can't wait for the next chapter!" I'm Totally Not Fangirling (in a sarcastic tone) I think this fic definately needs to be turned into a book or something! I hope you update soon!! I can't wait!
Thank you sooooo much for writing this wonderful story!