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Dude! So I'm guessing Yue's going to have to put the chains back on. No more freedom for poor half dead Touya. And poor Sakura! They have to get out soon now, before they both get killed somehow. Sad!

Hah- I love how Syaoran brags to Touya about being with Sakura everyday. Keep it up chica!

Wow, I really don't know whether I'm disgusted with Yue or if I just feel really bad for him. He completely lost control and the explosion was amazing. Times like this, I kinda feel like laughing at him, because it's just so obvious that Touya is NOT a slave and Yue keeps insisting on it. Poor Touya, though... I don't even know how he'll react to this. It doesn't seem like he's waking up yet, though, and that might lead to some interesting situations. I can't imagine that Sakura will be able to keep away when she knows that her onii-chan is in such bad shape. It would be interesting to see if her powers actually come to light while Touya's unconscious and she might actually connect with him that way. Oo, that would make Syaoran soo jealous! ^_^ Your comment about hating Li was such a teaser! Now I keep thinking about something that would make me hate him, but I can't think of anything that would keep him in character. I suppose the worst that I can imagine is him hurting Touya while he's down, but that doesn't really seem to hold to his honor, so unless something gets him really really mad... hmm... Well, all musing aside, this was a fabulous chapter, very intense and I couldn't help but read it over and over! Amazing. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Another great chapter. You're really talented at writing. I had a feeling something bad might happen when he went into that room. what an idiot. Well Please update again soon. I really can't wait to see what happens next, though I'm surprised its not halfway over yet. I feel kinda sorry for Touya and Yue. Hope things work out. Probably will be really awkward after that.

That had me on the edge of my seat and I thought I was going to have a heart attack. ^~^ Its good to know Yue's past on who he really was and now he was treated. I hope Touya makes it out of this.

Hello

I've been reading since chapter 14, and i must say this is the best Written Fanfic I’ve ever read.
Poor Touya! Yue's REALLY good at Doing stupid things and quickly Regretting them.
Predictions? Just one. I think the castle is going to be attacked. Maybe because of aya?... Maybe not, Who knows...
I'm kinda worried about That little hating Li Comment...
I think your making Review History, With 734-ish Right now, you're Approaching 1000 Rapidly (50-ish Reviews last chapter).
I shall impatiently Await The next Chapter.

P.s. I Was just noticing How wide spread The reviewers Are. Someone's In Hawaii, I'm in Maine. Cool.

XD I burst out laughing when I read "I kiss her everyday". Ah that was great.

And I don't hate Yue. ; ; If anything I love him more - the poor babes. So the musty smell was from Clow's bedroom? And the title really does refer to Yue? lol *go me I got some of it right* You mentioned something about an empty promise and the way it was worded made me wonder if Clow hadn't promised Yue that he'd come back to him somehow? Is Touya Clow's reincarnation in this version? o.o Or just simply a descendant of the reincarnation as he was in canon?

Other than that just . . .guh . . . this chapter was filled with ten types of awesome that I'm currently lacking the words to describe. When you described Clow's empty bed chamber my heart *ached* for poor Yue. Flashbacks plz! I'd so very much love to see a young Yue in a cage. Slave! Yue is a surprisingly sexy image. I can't tell you how thrilled I am that we're not half way finished like you said in earlier chapters. This story just makes me day every time you update.

Ok I'm babbling.

I'll review again later when I've reread it and can say something worth while other than just how wonderful and imaginative you are.

OMG! I was waiting for this! I can't wait to see how you patch them up. But now that the cat's out of the bag, they can reach a new level in their relationship. Poor Sakura though. To see her brother in such a condition has to be so horrible for her. And Li's inability to help at the moment is just heart-wrenching. I'm so excited about the next chapter.

Love the story so far. Keep up the great work :)

Well done - very suspenseful.
I can't say I hate Yue with the misery he's going through.
I looved how you tied little things in with Yue's past.

I never put two and two together - the bird cage and his wings. I just thought it was sexy to have a very innocent girl in a birdcage for show.

I'm hoping for the next chapter for Toya to wake up and hopefully Yue break down and tell Toya everything. That'll be interesting. I'll be watching for the next chapter - impatiently.