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i think that the story is real good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if they powers come to them . in the last chapters you have saka and tonya have powers i hope that they come out and help them . and i love the way that you have yue get mad at tonya and that clowed is come back to him. up date soon the story is real good my mom is read it too. and she said that your write skill are real good. so up date soon.

wow. you sound angry >_<

I'm sorry that there are bitches who complain about your fanfic-- I personally don't know what there is to complain about! It's a huge commitment to keep an online story alive; I couldn't even make it past chapter ten in one of my yaoi fics. You're right, the bitching is just unconstructive and unnecessary.

All that aside, I've been following this story for a while now, but haven't actually left a review in months, so I decided to just say HEY, AMAZING WORK. LOVE YOUR STORY. Yue x Touya is my favorite m/m couple, and a little Sakura x Syaoran is a nice story on the side. Your characters are well-defined and complex, and I love how every detail, no matter how trivial it seems, becomes a factor in the final outcome. I have enjoyed this story since the beginning, and I plan on keeping tabs on it until it is finished.

Meanwhile, I will say what countless others have said and suggest that you CHANGE THE NAMES AND MAKE A NOVEL OF IT. Fantabulous story, and it deserves... I don't know. Its own website. Does it have its own website yet? It should!

Loved this latest chapter. Please update soon! I look forward to reading more.

I LOVE THIS!!! Okay, I read 20 chapters until two in the morning, and now I'm sad I'm going to finish it today....
It reminds me a bit of Ai No Kusabi, but much more detailed and different.
Loves it. I only got into yaoi this year, and I'm very, ah, dedicated. Yep. Yep...

I loved your list. Yes, there are some thing I myself would personally change, but, hey, it's your story,and if I have such a huge issue with it, I should go work on one of my own stories. Which, sadly, I will have to do while waiting for your next chapter. Keep writing! It is beautiful! You fill my heart with joy! Ha, ha... Oh, and how old are you? Just wondering, ya know, from the writing techniques.

I have been following this story for a long time but this is the first time I am reviewing it. I can't speeek for everyone but I really like your story and its direction and I love the parings you have chossen for it. Keep up the great writeing and don;t let yourself get lost by lisening to what others say.

Eeps sorry for two reviews in one chapter. >.>

But I was rereading this again today and came across : "Some of them say, though, that one of our ancestors was an incredibly powerful sorcerer who made this sword and several other artifacts too. If it’s true, he would have been one of the strongest magicians that ever lived.”

Clow? o.o

Sorry that last review was by me. U__U

@ Ta Boo

Yay someone else was thinking that too! I was thinking the tiredness might have come just naturally because of the moon and he has to be near his corpse to absorb some power or something. Or maybe when there's no moon its the best time to try and bring Clow back to life or he's trying to find something. Remember he said the second time when he came back that things hadn't gone as he had planned.

LofuckingL You go, girl! That's all I have to say about what you stated at the end of your chapter. I think it was nicely put and I had quite a laugh when reading it. As for your fic, I adore every moment of my reading it except for the rare moments when someone bugs me when trying to read it. *smiles* You're doing wonderful and I can hardly believe some of the things people are trying to say to you. I've heard that kind of thing before and that's what has made me not post my work. I'm glad to see some of us can take the heat and fire it right back. *grins* Lovely work in every way, shape and form and I can't wait for the next chapter.

i for one have no problems with this story whatsoever. the plot is great, the romance digs ever deeper, and the humor and action are most excellent. rest assured that while there will always be hecklers, there will also be devoted fans who will wait any number of days for the next chapter of an excellent saga.

Wow......just Wow. I love this story. I really wish it was a book, it would probably be a best seller. I can't wait till you put up the next chapter. Please continue writing such wonderful chapters.