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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the Story first time I've reviewed. Sorry :) Just wanted to say this is the best CCS story I have ever read. So thanks, keep it up and I can't wait for the next part.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I'm curious. You've implied that Syoaron is a decendent of Clow Reed in earlier chapters. And now Sakura and Touya have magic. That leads me to wonder if you are following the simlier line from CCS:Master of the Clow with Fujitaka being the other half of Clow Reed's reincarnation thus making that the source of their magic.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i'm not quite sure about uh....all the angry reviewers out there but I know I like this story quite a bit myself and am always looking forward to a new chapter! I luv the pairings, and how much of a badass Touya is ^_^ something about the rebel that does it for me he he ^_^ I say keep up the good work and I can't wait till I can read a new chapter.....I'm eager to see if Sayoran will make his move wit Sakura and if they'll get caught......oh....I can't take the suspense!
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_~ Awesome writing and this is the best fanfiction story I've ever read. Your story is perfect the way it is and I can't wait for more.
~Alexa~
~Alexa~
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It took me two days to read it but it was worth it. Its so good. You're a fantastic writer. I can't wait till you update again...which probably won't be for awhile.. but oh well I can wait. Anyways I read every word of it and you must work really hard cause every chapter is so long. I couldn't stand writing a fanfic with such long chapters. It would take forever...I just can't help but wonder how you do it XD
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Ok first because I know we read each others reviews :
First off you can't throw a bitch fit every time someone gives you a negative review. That being said some of these reviews are bitch fit worthy. I've expressed my own negative review in the past about something that I didn't like but it wasn't out of pure distaste for this story so I obviously believe in giving an honest opinion rather than blind and empty praise. However . . . Pushing an author to write a pairing in their own story is the most pig headedest thing ever. There are plenty of other fics out their that cater to every taste and the one being bitched about in particular is not one of the more obscure ones that some of us have to hassle with.
The truth of the matter is plain and simple - if something is no longer to your taste simply stop reading. No one is holding you at gun point to the screen and saying "read this". And for that matter no one made you lord god of reviews where you are fit to tell others what to do in their witting. You can give your opinion of devices used or not used, you can give constructive criticism or express your reaction to something - either negative or positive - no one ever said reviews have to be all sugar and glowing praise. But what I've seen here goes beyond good taste. I'll admit I don't enjoy everything about this fic but its still more than pleasurable to read and you're wasting precious time you could be using for something else I'm sure you'd enjoy much more by sitting around here complaining.
And while we're on the subject : 7 parts of an inch people. That's how far it is between the "a" key and the CAPS and that's all that you need to have your pinky cross to keep from sounding like you're mentally challenged. Giving a review in caps does not get any point across other than the fact that you lack the cohesive abilities to express yourself in a becoming manner.
That being said . . .
Oh god I've been thinking about that door forever and a day now. >:E When the heck is it going to open - ever since the Clow-ness was confirmed I've been biting my nails down to the quick to finally figure out what happens. The thing in the air really has me perplexed. Is it one of the cards? Does it have something to do about Cerberus?
I don't know if I've pondered this before in a review but is the smell on Yue the scent of the grave? I'm assuming Clow is long gone but does he have his body propped up somewhere that he goes to when he's running low on energy to snuggle up with or try and bring back to life? At first I thought it might be an after sex smell since you described it as musky but Touya always says its unpleasant so I've been trying to think of something else that would leave a strong smell. :/ I always thought the title referred to Touya and Sakura but now I'm not so sure. 9__9
As always I look foreword to the next chapter and thank you for continuing to take time out of your busy schedule to write for us.
Ok first because I know we read each others reviews :
First off you can't throw a bitch fit every time someone gives you a negative review. That being said some of these reviews are bitch fit worthy. I've expressed my own negative review in the past about something that I didn't like but it wasn't out of pure distaste for this story so I obviously believe in giving an honest opinion rather than blind and empty praise. However . . . Pushing an author to write a pairing in their own story is the most pig headedest thing ever. There are plenty of other fics out their that cater to every taste and the one being bitched about in particular is not one of the more obscure ones that some of us have to hassle with.
The truth of the matter is plain and simple - if something is no longer to your taste simply stop reading. No one is holding you at gun point to the screen and saying "read this". And for that matter no one made you lord god of reviews where you are fit to tell others what to do in their witting. You can give your opinion of devices used or not used, you can give constructive criticism or express your reaction to something - either negative or positive - no one ever said reviews have to be all sugar and glowing praise. But what I've seen here goes beyond good taste. I'll admit I don't enjoy everything about this fic but its still more than pleasurable to read and you're wasting precious time you could be using for something else I'm sure you'd enjoy much more by sitting around here complaining.
And while we're on the subject : 7 parts of an inch people. That's how far it is between the "a" key and the CAPS and that's all that you need to have your pinky cross to keep from sounding like you're mentally challenged. Giving a review in caps does not get any point across other than the fact that you lack the cohesive abilities to express yourself in a becoming manner.
That being said . . .
Oh god I've been thinking about that door forever and a day now. >:E When the heck is it going to open - ever since the Clow-ness was confirmed I've been biting my nails down to the quick to finally figure out what happens. The thing in the air really has me perplexed. Is it one of the cards? Does it have something to do about Cerberus?
I don't know if I've pondered this before in a review but is the smell on Yue the scent of the grave? I'm assuming Clow is long gone but does he have his body propped up somewhere that he goes to when he's running low on energy to snuggle up with or try and bring back to life? At first I thought it might be an after sex smell since you described it as musky but Touya always says its unpleasant so I've been trying to think of something else that would leave a strong smell. :/ I always thought the title referred to Touya and Sakura but now I'm not so sure. 9__9
As always I look foreword to the next chapter and thank you for continuing to take time out of your busy schedule to write for us.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry you got such bad reviews lately, i know the feeling... but please, don't let it stop you from writing! you've done a wonderful job writing this fic and i could see it as an original if you changed the characters' names, so don't worry about what other people say.
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love dis
pls pls pls update very soon
pls pls pls update very soon
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised that you have had any issues with this story its so awsome I don't understand why people would bitch. I love this story please don't stop updating, I egearly await the next chapter. (Hurry up with the next chapter! lol)
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow your really mad...i guess the more known your story the more people is attracted the good and the bad kind. as always of course loved the latest chapter the wings, i totally forgot he had them.