rate_review Reviews

Still good

Whatever other people's reviews, I'm completely loving this story so far. Not only is it well-written, but the fact that you have taken the time to flesh out a plot while still keeping each chapter active with some sort of action is very appealing and satisfying. I can't wait for your next update!

LOVED THE WINGS! (being rude maybe but you get the excitement here ^^) Winged Yue *drool*
First of all, I desperately hope that the writing has not lost its enjoyment for you. Dabbling a bit in ff writing myself, I understand the anger behind that last AN note. Great rant, btw. It's hard to understand why, if they don't like the story, why they bother to keep reading. No one's forcing them to; its not like you'd miss their reviews; you've marked everything clearly; so people should learn to DEAL! Your writing, your story. If there's something they want to see happen in ff, then they should go write it themselves! Anyone and everyone can write ff. Except, of course, most do not write it with half the talent and honed writing skills you do. Since they realize that, they want to dictate what you do with your writing to satisfy themselves but too bad so sad cause it doesn't work like that.
I'm grateful every new chapter that this story goes on. Really, it makes my day when I check back and there's an update waiting for me. I love this story and have alot of respect for you writing a multichapter fic this long.
As to the latest chapters...the beginning "dark" tones of the story have lightened considerably. The latest chapter, if taken out of context, would almost qualify as "waffy." I can't help but wonder if this is the "calm before the storm" where we see Yue's and Touya's bond strengthening before it's inevitably "tested."
Interesting twist with the magic talents of both of them. I didn't even see that coming.
As always, GOOD JOB and hope to read more from you!

Beautiful latest chapter, I love the reaction Touya has when I finds out that Yue has wings, it is very, for current lack of a better word; cute. I check back here all the time to see when you have updated and love the results of when you do. Thank you.

Wow, I never read your reviews throughly enough to see the flames.
Sorry to hear about the problems - and also, it seems like this chapter was kind've effected by that.
It was a good chapter that moved the plot on, and was very well done - but something was off.

Hopefully you'll get some peace now, because I for one enjoy your story very much.

Juilan ate all the time in CCS! I love that little twist you put in! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're getting quick at the updates.

Well, I'm happy to say that you are one of my favorite fanfiction authors, right their with Post, who I still think is the best alive. I thank you for this new chapter and apologize for anyone posting stupid remarks in their reviews. Please don't stop writing, I love this story to much! Best of luck! ^__^

I really liked this chapter. it really left me wanting more!
Sorry, I was one of the people who commented on your title. I didn't mean it meanly and I'm sure you didn't take it that way >.< Don't stress too much on making chapters, ok? They're great, don't get me wrong, I love your story. Just don't get too stressed out over it, we can wait. And if you're curious at all, I found out about this story through a group in MySpace. I will always be thankful for that.

Good luck with everything! ^_^

(sorry if I sound a bit mixed up, I'm really tired right now...nite!)

I am sorry that you are recieving shitty reviews. I on the other hand LOVE your story. It is one of the very few that I have found of aff that actually uses correct punuation and grammer not to mention your writing style is very distinct. I donot think that it is sinful. Infact all of your sex scenes are very tastefull. I run a erotic writing circle here at University of Hawaii at Manoa and my co-president loves your work. Please write more. I would never tell you what to write but I would make suggestions. I'm dieing of suspense with clow over here and I am wondering if he will present an interest in Sakura like he did in the manga (albeit a platonic one). I would like to see more tomoyo sex scenes with sakura. The teacher student aspect is very alluring.
Sincerly,
D. Kubota aka EVILinnocence

This chapter was wonderful. ^_^ I've really fallen in love with the Syaoran/Sakura relationship in your story and its overwhelming cuteness. I laughed when I read about Li's reaction to his sword-handling being called "pretty". It just encompassed his personality entirely, though I was concerned that someone would see them "dancing" together... made a lovely chill go up my spine, but I'm glad that you're drawing it out. Anticipation and jealousy are two of my favorite things to feel when reading fiction like this and you do it so well! The magic element was a nice surprise as well. I was wondering about it when I first started reading but then it slipped to the back of my mind and I figured that it was just a part of the AU factor. Clumsy reading on my part, haha.

As for everything else, with the reviews and the spam mail and all, I'm terribly sorry to hear about all of the trouble. I was surprised when I went back to read over the reviews, which I don't normally do but was curious, and the comments were really rather harsh. Fanfiction stories are a personal thing and you should be allowed to take any direction that you like with your plot. Also spam mail is just that, spam, and it hardly ever originates from the person it is targeting. You're as much a victim as anyone else and I hope that administration was able to take care of it. It was nice to read the more recent reviews and see that you have many supporters out there as well. I would just like to say that I think this is a marvelous fic and that your writing is absolutely amazing. I wish you the best of luck.