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=D I loved how this chapter came out! You're so awesome, please keep up the excellent work!

I haven't reviewed the story before despite the fact i have been reading it since the start, It was horribly remiss of me >.> sorry. It truly is one of my favorite stories on Aff. The responses in your last chapter made me do a double look. Fans can be .. cruel especially about pairings. I always thought you labeled the story honestly for what it is making sure to warn everyone about the different things that popped up and I for one was appreciative. Everything else .. major props to you. It is your story and readers who read it then complain about you not doing it their way need to get off their lazy bottoms and write their own stories. They don't boy books in the store then write long letters to the authors to complain about how each chapter should have been written according to them. Of course not because thats a waste of time and utterly stupid. A reader reads a story so they can be given a slight glimpse into another world crafted by the author. It is not up to the reader to craft the world .. we are all along just for the ride. And I have to say it has been an amazing ride so far .. this story will remain in my top picks and suggestions to my friends because of that. Well thought out, well crafted and a truly different world then any other AU i have ever read. Thank you for sharing it with me.

hello.

This is a fantastic storie. please write another chapter soon. i cant wait to read it.

thankyou

Sucks about the crap you've been getting. I noticed an Administrator put a notice on your review page asking people not to blame you, but who reads review pages? (well, me, obviously, but I wanted to see the angry reviews ^_^').

Another great chapter; I'm beginning to get more into the Yue/Touya storyline than the Sakura/Syaoran one now. A reversal! (Although I must admit the idea of them having sex in a feathered cocoon makes me laugh)

Okay so I had a whole review typed here but I accidentally pressed a button and it was gone. If it was revieww... well you get two! Yippie!

First off, people who dont like this story should be pfft'ed upon. You're here to write what you wanna write, and the hell if you should bend over backwards to please anyone else. Dont you forget thet.

Two... I love you. I like pairings, I like Touya's easiness now with Yue... blah blah... I'm really bummed my thing was erased. But anyway, I with Touya, I wanna know more about Cloooooooow.

Holy Sakura/Li happenings, batman! Those two are dancing on the strings of luck. That scene in the begining was cute, btw.

Write more or else I'll go into a state of depression. So booya to everyne else.

S. St. James

Ps, I hope my sarcasm on a few things travels well. I mean no disrespect and I absolutely love your story.

You are without a doubt, absoultey freaking amazing!!!!!! ^_^

my god...do people really bash your story that much?
thats horrible! your one of the best writers on the whole site!
I asbsolutely LOVE Pleasure Slave...I cant believe anyone would say bad things about it >:(
great job on the new chapter...it was so romantic *heart*

This was a beautiful chapter. I don't think I've ever enjoyed one more. It was soft and sensuous without being too sexual. I think Touya is getting closer to finding out Yue's secrets than before.

>_> If only it were easier to ignore negative reviews. I didn't agree with them either though. In fact everything I hoped you would comment on, you did.

So... Does it mean that someone or something is calling to Yue on those new moons?

Also, I know this has nothing to do with this chapter, but Touya really does play the piano in the anime. Very well, in fact. I'm not sure if you were aware of it, but when I saw that in the anime I instantly thought of this story and was glad you had him play. ^_^ And again, great chapter!

Sweet Crispy Jebus, but that's some anger in the AN. And upon checking the reviews myself huuu, is it warranted. Did someone yell at you for writing a romantic kissing scene?! Ridiculous! Personally, I think your writing's spectacular, as does my good friend Dea-chan (who unfortunately doesn't trust the new AFF age contract thing and hasn't read since it went up), and we're kinda snobbish when it comes to that sort of thing. Especially her, since it had the two "Y" words in the warnings, and she's pretty much a het girl all the way.

Okay, enough general support, onto the review. This was a fairly WAFFy chapter, like HOMG. With a title like "Pleasure Slave" it still comes as a shock when it's not bondage all the way. ^^ Teehee, Sakura thinks Syaoran's sword is cute. If those thoughts continue, her collar won't be white much longer (bow chicka bow wow). I was wondering if Yue's wings were going to come into play when he started complaining about his shoulders being sensitive, and of course you didn't disappoint. ::drools at winged Yue:: I'm really eager to see where this story goes next (What's behind the mysterious door, why does an evil shadow pass through the room whenever Yue must leave, how exactly does Clow fit in...) and for all I love explicit yaoi, the Superman-esque love scene was sweet too.

And to that prat "Undisclosed", I don't know about a lot of people, but it was the promise of motherluvin' Yaoi that drew me, the yuri being a distasteful side note (however, it was well enough written that I even found myself enjoying the yuri, a rare occurrence indeed). The story was never promised to be yuri, and I'm frankly surprised Tomoyo plays as much of a recurring role as she does. In essence, take the tampax out of your ass, slap yourself in the face and stop bitching about an excellent story. Are you undisclosed because you're too ashamed to show us what you write?

I have been with this story for a while now, but have never actually reviewed before. I just want you to know that I ADORE this story, and am absolutely shocked that people have actually flamed/criticized this. I think that your writing style is wonderful and easy to read, and that the plot is creative and is always leaving me wanting more. I think that anyone else who believes something contrary to that, should just simply press the back button. No one is forcing them to read this, after all.

Please, do not let some stupid reviews discourage you (even though I don't think they will). I love this story, and eagerly await each update. It's always fills me up with emotions and the romantic scenes leave me with fuzzy feelings that only well-written stories can do.


There is a reason as to why your story is the most popular CCS one: It kicks ass.