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WILL SAKURA EVER GO TO THE BEACH!?

In my opinion, that was the best one so far! but I think the title is wrong. I think it should be confessions, or something like that mainly because both brother and sister confessed their love. It was great! But that's when Li got caught by Ralen, right? ahhh... now I'm at a loss for words... goodnight!

2 weeks is up where is the update? update soon

2 weeks is up where is the update? update soon

as always I'm so happy to see an update, and the story just seems to get better and better. Keep up the great work and update again soon

Last chapter I was thinking, so hmm, Yue is an old slave himself, but to whom? And being a total noob, I completely forgot about Clow (but it has been years since I've touched a CSS book).

I THINK YOU SHOULDA LET SAKURA-CHAN GO OUTSIDE WITH YUE AND TOUYA IT WOULDA BEEN COOL TO SEE HOW YUE AND TOUYA ACT AROUND EACH OTHER WITH SAKURA-CHAN AROUND

OMG!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITTING STYLE!!!!!!!! you make it sooooo easy for me to imagine it all. thank you! your the best!!!!

now please continue and DON'T GIVE UP!!! ^_^

I was told about this story by my best friend a few weeks ago and I haven't been able to review it since I'm not a member so thanks for enabling guests to review your story. This chapter has everything I love in a good fanfiction: love, jealousy, angst, power, etc. It's the little things that matter to me. For example Yue holding his hand over his heart to show heartbrokeness after Touya said he feels nothing when they both kiss. Such a simple line was written to describe that moment yet it displayed so many emotions so perfectly. You truly are a talented writer in that respect. I must admit that you have peaked my curiosity with this Clow character. I haven't watched or read the anime or manga so I don't know what relation he is supposed to have with Yue but I suspect he was important no? I supose that doesn't matter since this is an AU fic. Will Yue mumble Clow in his sleep again that night? Touya should realise that Clow must be important if his powerful master is talking about him in his sleep. I think a previous reviewer mentioned that too so Clow must be important. Will Touya take Sakura's words into account and think about his feelings towards Yue? I can imagine that would be a mental struggle: he hasn't had a mental struggle for a while.

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Linday

I love this series you have created! I've been checking the site periodically for the next chapters. Keep up the great work, ok! You can finish this! I know you can!!! ^o^