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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Here I was, just a person out looking for some sweet little Li/Sakura romance (and failing to find one that I like, unfortunately), and I keep noticing this fic called Pleasure Slave. I saw that it had a lot of reviews and a high rating but the AU part made me a little leery of checking it out. Finally my curiosity got the best of me and I opened it up to read the first chapter and know for sure what it was like. And it. Was. Captivating. ^_^ Your characters are absolutely amazing and I especially love how you've done out Touya's character; there's enough sweet and rough play to keep a perfect balance and you keep up on the non-sexual scenes just as well. Oh, and for this last chapter, it was nice to see Li's jealousy and Sakura's confession, that always makes my skin tingle when it's played out well! Also, I was pretty absorbed in the story (read it straight through, gulp! ^_~ ) but I breezed through a few comments as well and the predictions look fun. For my part, even if the situation for Yue to allow Li and Sakura to pair up were ideal, I think Yue might still have some issue with it. He seems very possessive, even if he's not playing with his toys he knows they are still his. Some serious control issues, but I hope he learns that submission can be fun too! Of course, that might be tricky if he's going to Clow every month and acting in part as a pleasure slave... (I'm so excited to see what he's really doing!) ...but that's just my guess. What I'd really love to see is when Touya finds out just how Ralen actually treats Sakura and maybe even get to pummel Ralen into the ground... ^__^ He's just so fun to hate! Anyway, to sum-up, I love your fic, you're doing wonderfully, and I can't wait to see where it goes. You have one more devoted reader!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, and have been following it forever...like since chapter 10.. <3
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was good and i l voe the way that yue got mad atonya and then tonya lie to his sister and then tell yue so he is fell in love with yue and can not tell his sister. good luck update soon.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever typed up a reply to this story or not yet... and if I haven't, let me start off by saying how sorry I am. It may sound kind of corny or whatever, but really I love reading this story, new update or old favourite chapters. I really did like the anime and was sorely put out when it ended (as well as what I saw when 4 kids or whoever did the dubbing did to it *shudders*) and I think it's lovely that people are willing to take the time to give us other people who are *cough* lazy something to do.
Now it's been a long while (and it's also like friggin' one in the morning) and so I cant remember if you said anything, but... we know that Yue has magical powers and then in this chapter we get a mentioning of Clow; is Sakura going to play any part in that at all? I wondered to myself whether I would have thought the story would be more interesting either or but I'm really indifferent. I do have to admit that I adore the bond between Sakura and Yue and would love to see something more with them. I don't know how, but I love how a pairing in this fanfic makes someone else jealous. Touya and Sakura make Yue jealous, I'm very much thinking that Yue and Sakura make Li jealous, and maybe Yue and Touya make Ralen jealous? *wiggles eyebrows* You know he wants in on that; he is rather dodgy about the subject.
Anyway, I'm a hopeless romantic and would love to see some sticking-up-for-lover fighting, so yeah. But then, I think (or hope...) we'll be seeing even a tiny bit ^^
Thanks so much for giving me hope for better CCS fanfiction,
S. St. James
Ps, would we ever seen an appearance from Clow? Or any of the other characters that haven't been introduced thus far? There aren't too many that you haven't gotten to, but you know...
Pss, I know you did last time... butupdatefast <3 I'm dying to know what happens.
Now it's been a long while (and it's also like friggin' one in the morning) and so I cant remember if you said anything, but... we know that Yue has magical powers and then in this chapter we get a mentioning of Clow; is Sakura going to play any part in that at all? I wondered to myself whether I would have thought the story would be more interesting either or but I'm really indifferent. I do have to admit that I adore the bond between Sakura and Yue and would love to see something more with them. I don't know how, but I love how a pairing in this fanfic makes someone else jealous. Touya and Sakura make Yue jealous, I'm very much thinking that Yue and Sakura make Li jealous, and maybe Yue and Touya make Ralen jealous? *wiggles eyebrows* You know he wants in on that; he is rather dodgy about the subject.
Anyway, I'm a hopeless romantic and would love to see some sticking-up-for-lover fighting, so yeah. But then, I think (or hope...) we'll be seeing even a tiny bit ^^
Thanks so much for giving me hope for better CCS fanfiction,
S. St. James
Ps, would we ever seen an appearance from Clow? Or any of the other characters that haven't been introduced thus far? There aren't too many that you haven't gotten to, but you know...
Pss, I know you did last time... butupdatefast <3 I'm dying to know what happens.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a boatload of progress! No doubt Yue will request that Touya play while Sakura dances again sometime, and at least Ralen didn't actually damage it, as Syaoran said, that would be just low! Not to mention rather pathetic. And why am I not surprised at Meilin's reaction to Syaoran's and Sakura's relationship?(Way to go, Tomoyo...) And at last the confirmation of Clow, whom I am presuming is, like his CCS counterpart, dead as a can of spam, though possibly reincarnated(Eriol-kun, anyone?). Can't wait to see what happens next at the 3/4 mark! Laters.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy your chapters are being added much more quickly :D
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T...i miss the angst XXDD....
between Yue and Touya i_i...
but damn its getting better....
come on...i know you want to do something
bad with Ralen and Touya :taunts: =P
between Yue and Touya i_i...
but damn its getting better....
come on...i know you want to do something
bad with Ralen and Touya :taunts: =P
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^ ^ yay! ^ ^ you updated! I've been looking foward to this ^ ^ Keep writing ^ ^ I loved it.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hayhayhay! Long time no review! But, I just wanted to take a guess at what Clow is in this story. Is he like, Yue's old lover who died, or something like that? And I still love your story and you don't know how happy I am to know that you are updating more often! xD YOU MAKE ME A HAPPIER PERSON IN REAL LIFE.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really quick!
I gotta say this chapter is one of my favorites :)
I gotta say this chapter is one of my favorites :)