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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

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schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good and i love the story when is yue going let li have saka . keep toya it is getting real good up date soon.
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cloooooow. Clooooooow. When will there be Clow? ; ; He's who Yue is refering to right? Right? ; ;

*gasp* Was/Is Yue Clow's pleasure slave? Maybe Clow was his? Or Yukito was Yues? @____@ I must know.
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why, thank you, I'm flattered. So, Sakura's learning to dance, and Touya's learning to play piano. Interesting. And Ralen is finally starting to realize the rather dnagerous line he's been trapeezing, very nice. Shame about that poor girl, and somehow I doubt the Magistrate paid for his abuse, more's the pity... And love the cliffie, who indeed? Clow Reed? Yukito? Eriol? Ruby Moon/Nakuru? Oh, but the possibilities abound. Well, look forward to chapter 29, and the eventual day out of the castle! Laters.
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...good chapter. The idea of a vulnerable trembling Yue is just...wow...droolworthy. And yay for Li just saying to hell with it already and kissing Sakura. Your Li is such a man, in a good way obviously. ^_~ As for the people who stop their entire lives to read this fic (as I did when I started it) its because for some reason a lot of really amazing fics get taken down by their authors for no good reason. You gotta read it when its there. I'm sad it took me this long to read, damn midterms :::shakes fist angrily:::. Anyway, fantastic chapter as usual, and I'll see ya next update.
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; and honestly I should've stopped 'lurking' and told you so long ago! I look forward to your updates and am so glad you are continuing this story! Always makes my day when I check back and you've posted a new chapter.
It's so very interesting watching the way your characters have grown and developed over the course of the story. My favorite is Touya and Yue, obviously, but the intertwined story of Sakura is intriguing as well. I hear you about RL getting in the way of writing, and was excited to hear that you've put finishing the story as a 'priority.'
Thank you so very much for a wonderful read every time :)
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, maybe... Though personally I think they'd at least consider trying to frame Ralen.

Clearly, Ta Boo...we need a new chapter.
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A scarf?! Please, I'd like to give them a little more credit than that! I'm sticking to the copious amounts of paint/finger pointing at Ralen(the latter with hopefully more of the female staff reporting how he's also taken more than a few "liberties" with them as well!).
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, you are a taboo and I am a bio-mechanical scorpion that can shift into a robot or base form at will; we're sinful by nature!

Attempting to cover up the changed collar? Yeah, probably involving copicous use of white paint. That, or lots of finger pointing at Ralen! Neither of which, I imagine, sadly, would get past Yue...
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Ta Boo, I was thinking in regards to actual agreement made between Yue and Touya back in chap. 8(or was it 7?), which basically stated that in exchange for Touya being Yue in Sakura's place, neither Yue nor any other man in the castle would touch Sakura, period! Hence, Sakura and Syaoran locking lips is forbidden! I also agree with the rest of your comments, though, quite right. And is Syaoran stupid enough to turn Sakura's collar black? (with sarcasm)Is he male? Oh, yeah, like you say, it's gonna get interesting...
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Well i'm another latecomer to your story and i am hooked. I heard about your story from a 'devoted fan' I know and am so glad i finally started reading it. It was nice reading your story at my pace (one a night up to 26) but now i must read it at your pace (SOB!)Thx for #27 ^_^.
your story's fascinating, absorbing and addictive and angsty and sweet and... srry, i'm getting carried away. In other words, I love your story (like it wasn't obvious)! I like the battle of wills Touya and Yue are having. Two control freaks butting heads and learning compromise without realizing it. Must be love.^_^ Si and Sakura's innocent budding romance is sweet, offsetting the harshness of the circumstances.

I will be among the many checking regularly for an update.

btw.I was happy in chap 20 to read i was only halfway thru

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