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that was good and i thought he will ask for his sister free. and he stay with yue. but the story is real good i have been wait for mmore ofthe story.

You give reading a new meaning. Hm, that rhymes. Good. Yes, good, awesome, wonderful, can't-get-any-better chapter! Though, despite this story taking more than two years to write (Oho, please don't make it five. Tis killing me!), the way you write seems to leave a lasting impression on me that I don't forget certain parts of the story or where I left off. Tis amazing I tell you! Hm, yet I wonder, Hiiragizawa Eriol has not made his appearance in any of the chapters. Perhaps you will be using him later on, ne? ^__~ Yes, keep writing. I am an avid fan waiting for the next installment of Pleasure Slave. Go, go, go! Uhm, I hope that's enough encouragement. Although, I do realize that long reviews make you happy, but I'm too lazy and incredibly tired. And y'see, I made an account just so I could review your story, and no one else! I'm not bribing you or anything, or indicating something. Don't worry, I'm not stalking you either. Oho, I'm an awkward one. xD

Hi.
I just want to say that I am truely in awe. It is rare that someone writes a story that is so enthralling as well as sexy :)
Keep up the good work, and don't rush yourself(you should be enjoying writing it as much as we enjoy reading it!)

First off, major brownie points to you.
I've been reading your story for a while, and when I discovered it, it was when you were on Jealousy II. I spent 2 days straight just wanting to read your story.

The whole reason I even started reading CCS lemon, because my dirty mind had thought of it while watching the actual series. I've been going through a CLAMP phase, and am obsessed with it right now. With how the cross-overs happen and such...

You skills at writing and keeping the reader captivated are Grade A. I'm a picky reader, if the story doesn't keep me interested I lose interest and find it hard to finish a story.
And, for the sake of not assuming I'm a total perv... haha. Ann Rice (I'll assume you know who she is) did a erotica book, a few of them, based on Sleeping Beauty. I lost interest the first book and really really had a hard time finishing, mainly for the fact, the plot was released half way through, and it was just sex the rest of the way through. I didn't even want to start the second book.

I realized I wanted to comment, mainly after seeing a screenshot from a random hentai. As soon as I saw it, I thought of this story, and it was a situation that I would absolutely love to read about. Don't know if you're an author that enjoys ideas from readers, but I have to share this.

Toya and Sakura in the anime obviously have a strong bond, there's a lot of incest with them online and it's great. I'm not by any means interested in that stuff in real life, but for this pair, yes. lol

The screen shot was a guy sitting upright on the edge of the bed naked having a naked girl, wearing only stockings to the thighs, on his lap with her back to him. He held her legs completely apart thrusting in her as another guy was on his knees in front of her crotch sucking at her clit. The girl looked very embarrassed, scared, and also very turned on.

The whole picture instantly made me think of this story, and I thought I'd share the graphics with you, and see if you too could see that happening in your story.

Wow. All I pretty much have to say at this point. I loved how it seems Yue and Touya are getting closer, and I loved when Touya took control that was one of the hottest things I've seen in the faction thus far. And they were having sex in the rain. That was so cool. I wonder how it would feel to actually do that...

i love the story and been wait for you to up date the story and still love the story. up date soon.

WOW....I really liked this chapter....and I think I have a feeling about the full moon....I think Yue drives all his magic from that night, and he gets it from Clow by..sleeping with the man?? Maybe?? That might explain the strange smell Touya had in that one chapter when Yue relented into letting Touya bathe in the room. Please keep it up!!! Oh, BTW, will Kero be making an appearance in this story??

Oh, yeah, Yue's in looooove! And yay for Sakura, she gets to keep getting lessons! Now, if Ralen could just trip over a third or fourth floor balcony... Well, I look forward to the next installment. Laters! What can I say, I'm a man of few words...

wow! could that last part be something that is to come? hm, keep it up this is awesome ^~^

Hey there! In all honesty, this is probably one of the best fanfictions I have ever read (few stories top my 'best ever' lists). You have a talent for creating emotions and even nervousness and tension in some scenes. There is a lot of feeling put into this story, and I can totally sympathize with all of the characters. I do hope you update soon! I really adore this story and want to see a new chapter.

I think Ralen is an asshole, but yet I also find him fascinating. I think it would be neat if you wrote a story about his past, and maybe have him end up with a slave near the end of the story? It's rare that I ever taken an interest in OCs, but he is intriguing.