rate_review Reviews

first things first: this story is really good. it is good that you have kept the flow of the story the same during the 2 years of writing it. not many authors can do that. well done. as someone said in a recent review: only sakura left the room after touya saw her dancing. so li must have stayed in the room and saw touya yelling at yue. i wonder what li thinks of this? i bet he has never seen a slave act like that towards yue. i wonder if li will tell any one [like the gossipy slave girls].

also when you said: "Best review goes to Katbites, who isn’t as whiny as she claims she is and postulated an interesting theory about Yue’s disappearances. Very well thought out, very rational, but not quite right, as she will soon see." in the authors notes, you got me very interested. you said 'AS SHE WILL SOON SEE' which means that yue's secret will be revealed soon? i hope so.

i dont want yukki in the story. some reviewers have already said that his personality wouldnt suit the story and i agree.

yue was also weak when he got back and a few nights later touya noticed that yue was weak when the moon was thin. i thought tht was interesting. i hope you write more about that in the next chapter.

i am also sad to hear about your election. that must have sucked.

i hope u update soon. could you plz update this month in january? to make up for the long 3 month wait we had last time? plzzzzzzz.

pls pls pls update soon
me like dis

This story is very unique and the thing that continues to make me wonder, well one of two things anyway, is why Yue has no interest in Sakura at all? He bought her but the moment Touya arrives she is all but forgotten. Seems kinda cheap to me. I would think someone as him, finding the need for pleasure slaves, would find some better use for Sakura, then to simply diregard her the moment he lays eyes on Touya. He bought her, I'd think he'd at least use her for some reason. I know you put that Touya took her place and all, but he doesn't seem like the personality part of him, having made Touya's his with it, would listen to him, just to make him his. Seems illogical on some levels. But maybe with this new chapter's last words, he will find a use for her. x3

And to note upon his disappearances, you stated he disappears every month on the New Moon. And from Cardcaptors, his ruling was the moon. That was his source of power. Seems like that'd be a reason enough to leave for a bit. The moon vanishes and he doesn't want that weakness shown, when he is powerless. I was pondering that theory since it seems to fit. But I don't know if you're using parts of the series like that.

Anyways though, keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.

I REALLY ENJOYED DIS STORY^_^ IT WUZ DA BEST CARDCAPTOR YAOI STORY I READ KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK N WRITIN ^_^

This story is one of the most interesting stories i have read on AFF.net, and most certainly the one with the most plot twists. I am VERY much interested in learning what goes on with Yue's dissapearances, and personally, I have a theory.

I think that Yue turns into Yukito on these nights, and leaves the castle so as to avoid any of his servants or slaves noticing this weakness. Yue always seemed very scandalised that he shared a body with Yukito, so I do hope you will put that into your story as well. I'm hoping that Yukito will make an appearance. He is my favorite character after all.

Anyway, this story has thrilled me and kept me up for near twenty four hours reading it, helping me to reset my internal alarm clock. I do appreciate the work you've put into this story, and I'm very sorry aobut your lost job. I hope that you update soon, and I VERY much hope to see a chapter if not just as good, then better than this last one.

i think i kow what happens to yue.....does he somehow manifest into yuki and some strnge thing happens where the moons powers have something to do with it....am i close????? or did i just ramble on. well whatever it was this story is very goodd. keep it up and trow me another chapter bcause even if you think your story id dead, i'm sure someone will read it (me)

yay! another update and you haven't died! great job with how you made sakura preform infront of yue, it was very believable. i can't wait to see your next update and i hope it's soon! oh, and sorry about losing the election thing...

Wow, this fic is just the best ever. It's good in length, nice details, love the Yue/Touya, have a hate for Ralen, and I cried after reading chapter 18 when Touya was telling Yue of how Sakura was kidnapped on her birthday, since I'm just an emotional person. Keep up the good work, it's worth waiting for this story, even if that waiting time is many years or more. Happy 2007 ^_^ *Hasn't read chapters 19-25 yet*

Oh.... Hey, in my review, I meant chapter 19, not 18... I have been reading so much, I forgot which chapter I was on.... Hehe.... It hasn't even been 8 hours of me reading this. I have been reading on and off, and when I add those times I have been reading, it's probably about 5-6 hours. But ever since around 1AM I have been just reading, reading, reading, and now it's almost 5AM

Wow two reviews for one chapter. >.> Sorry 'bout that, but I was rereading this today and I realized that Sakura is the only one who leaves the room when Yue and Touya have their exchange. That means Li was there to overhear everything yes? Will that lead to something interesting?