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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Amanda
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a great story!! YOu definately have the story and sex and every quality fit for an amazing story! When I thought "oh this is getting boring" or "What? that doesn't even make sense" you seem to surprise me everytime with your twists and turns. My guess and predictions were all false. The story was really very original and thoughtout. I like how you didn't make it all about sex and all those good stuff. Thanks for the great story which will be read over and over again. I can't wait for another great piece!
person Cher R. Shales
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story and ending. Though, I haven't been reviewing since the first chapter or so, I apologize for that. I've been standing by for every chapter... Silently. Lol. It's prolly unfair for you but It's really great. <333
person kika
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why I never reviewed before (probably being lazy) I really loved reading this. I stayed up late for days catching up to chapter 23 (I think this is where I started). And then checking up every week or so for an update. It saddens me to see this come to an end but happy because it was one of the best I've ever read, and it ended so beautifully.

I can't really say I have a favorite scene, every part was pieced perfectly in my opinion. Yue's dream at the end of chapter 42, it really gives you that big finale feel. At least that's what I felt when I read it.

schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you ever manage to turn it into an original and get it published, please let us know! I'll definitely be one of the first to buy it!! x3
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just realized I have no reason to come to this site anymore now that this fic is finished. What a weird feeling. Kudos to the good work!
person Moonspell
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I don't belive its you! I read your story Hair to the Kingdom on FF.net a long tome ago. It was one of my all time faves. As for being to old to write fanfiction. I'm 22 and I still write fanfiction. Everybody needs a hobby it keeps us working girls from lossing our minds. If you ever want to cheak out some of my stuff look up TheFicChicks2 at Fanfiction.net. My stuff is not as great as yours but I try. And remember your never to old for anime. This past summer at a con I met a 70 year old woman cosplaying as Kayade from Inuyasha. That put all my worrys to rest.
person Eloradanin
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn I will miss looking for updates on this story it's been a wonderful ride. good luck in your future writings and look forward to anything else you may "dream" up lol.
person RandomPanda
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember finding this fic 2 years ago and just staring at the screen going 'WOW'. I recall being on a hunt for Yue/Yuki/Touya and begroaning the fact that there were hardly any stories for this pairing and no Touya as uke fics, and suddenly I found this little treasure. I couldn't believe how long the pages were and how detailed and picturesquely the scenes flowed. My absolute favorite pairing too! *sigh* It was heaven! And now it's all done. Congratulations! It was a wonderful piece and my personal favorite of them all. I've truly became addicted to it (and hope that you keep it up on this site for future rereads because it's just that good!). I have to admit that I'm sad that it has ended, but it was inevitable and you finished it off splendidly! I also wanted to thank you for actually finishing it as well. This is the longest fanfic that I've EVER read and I was actually afraid that it would go on hiatus at any point. Sadly, too many stories have ended up with that fate, and I couldn't bear to imagine this story being left unfinished especially after that long break before you started up on the story again. Can you imagine my glee when I randomly checked this section again too reread old fics and saw that your story was updated? I swear I whooped out loud, screaming 'yesyesyes!' (and startled my roommates in the process). You took so much effort to complete this and complete it well that its impossible not to see the beauty of it all. You've inspired this CCS section to be updated again as well by the popularity of your story! Once again. thank you. I'm also sad to hear that you've decided to stop writing fanfiction, though after taking years to complete this huge novel it's very understandable. It's a shame that I won't be able to read more of your works in the future for you have a lovely style to your writing. I wish you the greatest luck in the future though, whatever it may hold. You're a talented writer and story teller, and I'm truly inspired by your dedication. Thank you.
person Bound2Darkness
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So in all my years of reading this (since chapter 4) I finally created an account (not signed in now) that will never be used again. I know I didn't review much but believe me when I say I reread each chapter several times out of my love for you. I can honestly say you are the only reason I visited this site!
I don't really know what to say now that its the end, other than I'm sad. On the other hand, I can now go add you on ff.net and obsessively read all your other stories!
As for the story itself? Best written case of Stockholm's Syndrome ever!

I'll love you forever and ever (even if your a. dateless, b. jobless and/or c. stop liking yaoi for some odd odd reason)

P.S. (hehe pun...wow I need sleep) Who needs family when you have strangers from all over in love with you!!
person Amy
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello.

I have been following your story since you started and i have been shocked, amazed, sad, happy, over joyed, and crying.
you story is THE BEST story i have red so far, and i dont think i will find a story anythime soon that can beat it.

i must say the ending chapters were very fast but they were still good.

i cant wait to read some more of your other AFF.

Thankyou so much for writting this story and sharing it with me and everyone else. xoxoxoxo

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