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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Mizu
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you don't have a job. D: I'm in need of one right now, too. Keep hunting. You'll get it.

I'm not sure that I've reviewed this story but I've kept up with it. It's so much more than just an adult story. I really, really love it! I can't really explain it but this has to be one of my favorite fan fiction stories. I'm curious what the theory about Yue was. I'm starting to think perhaps he draws his power on the moon... That's why he's so weak and tired on the new moon. As to where he goes, I have no thoughts on that.

So...Touya is jealous of his little Sakura. XD And it's almost as though he has a sister-complex. But didn't he always? XDDD And Syaoran is jealous too! I really keep wondering about his fate in this story. Though somehow I'm a little more interested in Touya and Yue, even though I'd started reading this for the Syaoran and Sakura. *yawn* Tired. Well, Happy New Year! I hope the next update is as good as all the others have been.
person Lanie Kay-Aleese
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a better CCS story than this one -- and I've read far too many for my own good.
It's difficult for me to pinpoint precisely what it is that has given you the ability to put each character in the exact modes of thinking and action; it boggles me truly to consider the intricacy that is involved with the eloquence of your writing. You have a way with words, a way with thoughts, a boundless imagination and a tantalizing story that begs to be continued. I'm in awe of what you declared as a "crude pronfic" -- this is a work of art, to me, far more than I'd expected and infinitely worthwhile.

I wonder about the characters of Keroberos, Eriol, and also, Yue's alter of Yukito. Considering that Yukito is the dominant personality of CCS "Tsubasa: Reservoir chronicles", I can't help but wonder what you have in mind to handle that particular question. And of course, my thought is that since Yue's power comes from the moon, perhaps he pulls a rather Inuyasha-like transformation into the form of Yukito?

Whatever it is, I find it most intriguing...

And finally, Yue and Touya are sleeping in the same bed. ADORABLE.
person gabby
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was wrong. there was an update. i like this chap it was kawaii. plz update agaan soon. dont make me doubt u again lol. can u update for new years day? as a new year day present?that wuld be awsome!
person pockygirl
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gods, not only did aff actually load, the only story i stillcheck it for updated.
thank you very much for feeding my addiction to fanfic that actually has a plot.
i love the interaction between the characters, they feel very much like real people and i can never wait for the next installment. good luck with everything you're going through. at least you can take comfort in the sure fact that you write a very good story.
~pockygirl.
person ME
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My apologies for November's events and best wishes for your future (especially if you live in CA in which case I think I know about which slimy grease ball you're talking about, *ugh*).

Hmm, I went back and read her theory on where Yue disappears each month and I have to say that while the thought has crossed my mind I disagree. It seems to me it would have to do something with Clow to a certain degree, yes? You have yet to introduce him or Cerberus to the story line (which I only assume will happen, I mean you added Sonomi in there) and there have been some other hints of his existence as well. Like that time Touya accused Yue of not knowing what it was like to love another person and Yue had such a strong and angry reaction to what he said. It must have been for Clow yes? And then why doesn't anyone ever sit in the thrown room? Is it because it's not Yue's place to sit? Its suspicious and I think it may perhaps be Clow related? Just like all that extra guard for such a supposedly lonely palace is suspicious. >.>

Er, sorry I don't mean to be presumptuous. Perhaps its just the ramblings of someone who's a bit too fond of the CY pairing looking for things that aren't there but the suspense is maddening! Have to create a theory sooner or later.

As always this chapter was wonderful and I eagerly await your next update. ^ - ^
person maddi
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was so into that chapter that I thought there was something wrong with my computer when I couldn't scroll down! Great, great, great awesome! Ha. Touya is so obviously jealous of Sakura...I would be too. I mean, respectively, she has it made! dance lessons, martial arts lessons...wow. I wish I had all that. Oh yeah. And not to mention a ginormous castle....Gawsh I love this ficcy!! Can't wait 'till the next update!
Have a very Merry Christmas! :D
person midnightfox
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Fanfics I have ever read. I'm serious when I say this because you have them in character and the way you describe how they feel or any internal battle they are having and they are in character. Great Job and I can't wait for the next chapter of your story. I would like to know how long this story is going to be if you don't mind. Take Care and Hope you Have a Merry Xmas and New Years.

midnightfox
person Sana-Chan
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! FINALLY! At long last! I check almost everyday to see if another chapter of your magical words has been added! T-T I love you!
person cocoke5
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well capitalist is nice to see that you are back to write . i love the story , i have read it before and now i see new chapter i was happey; good luck on a new job and the boyfriend. i love the way yuri said here is comes. and touya mad at his sisiter for dance for yuir i lol on tht one. be waitting for more of the story.
person Tofu
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. The main reason why I go to this site is to see if you updated this story. I was very happy when I saw you did. happy holidays

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