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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person ayachan
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was such a cute chapter! ^^ haha, sakura learning something called... the cartwheel..that's just too cute. anyway, I hope that life is getting better for you and I can't wait to find out why yue keeps disappearing! well... as long as yukito isn't involved. lol, I feel like the only anti-yukito person. Love him and all, but this story is perfect where it is at right now.
person 0ri
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I'm so happy you updated! Yue and Toya are just getting cuter and cuter. I got all nervous too when Sakura was going to dance in front of Yue, haha, you're so good at putting a reader into the story. ^__^ It makes me so happy to read a story as good as this one.
person Aureawolf
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're not dead. ^_^ You do have terrible timing though...to post the day before a final exam. Shame on you. ^_~ This really made my night though, pulled me out of the bottomless pit of exam induced depression. Touya ending up in Yue's bed was so sweet and perfectly written. And its good to see him still being at least a tad disobedient. Rock on!
person Scorpinac
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least asking him to pay for more lessons shouldn't be hard now. Next chapter should be most amusing! And I thought there was a connection to the phases of the moon at play here! Just like Inuyasha, but without his hair going black. Well, I eagerly await the next chapter, and sorry about the job. Laters.
person Scorpinac
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, and Happy Holidays!
person Mel
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you for updating! :D It makes me so happy. So Yue smells musty when he comes back, huh? Sounds like he's been hanging out in a cave, or maybe some place with lots of humidity? Where does he go?
As you can see I have so many questions. I love how this story is still so very interesting. Update when you can please! :3 I'll be waiting!

Your loyal reader,
Mel
person Sami
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since you put up chapter 21 and I'm glad I did. Your story flows so wonderfully, It's a shame that you can't get paid for writing fanfiction. Every chapter has me wanting more and more. The characters seem even more alive than in the manga or anime. I can't really convey everything I feel towards your fic in words but this is deffinitely my favorite fanfic at AFF. Maybe even in the CCS fandom. It's certaintly the only fic that's been able to hold my attention for so long. It would be wrong to not at least try to leave a decent review on it and let the author know how much I love her story and how much this fic has caprivated me.
person lili
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank youuuu! Happy holidays! I liked this chapter, especially with how Li sees Sakura. And Touya freaking out at the sight of Sakura dancing was priceless. And hilarious.

Anyways, I hope your muse goes on a mad rampage and there's more soon, but in the meantime have a great holiday season!
person Sunny
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pooooooooor Sakura. I am feeling very bad for her in the next chapter. She's going to get an ear full.
person Silverwolfe
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...you know they love eachother!!! But we need an update!!! PLEASE!!! XDXDXD. But seriously, have some happy holidays and keep working on things ^_~

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