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for Pleasure Slave

by Capitalist

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really did like this story yeah it was a little slow at first but i think that the out come is great hey its better then havin writers block like i did for 8 months yeah i know sad but please keep writting have a good day!
person Denef
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. it has been 2 months since i reviewed this and there still is no update. while i was waiting for an update i read the fanfic again to find some clues that yue might have wings. i think i found a really big clue with the windows that were really glass doors. why would yue need doors so high up? unless he has wings! and to make a hasty exit from the castle he flies out the glass doors.
thats my theory anyway.
person Taichi Prime
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! I wanna see some more of Sakura/Li!! this fanfic is so cool! Please update or something!!!! PPPPLLLLLEEEASSSSEE???
person suzu3334
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great fic please continue
person yahoo
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am a new fan of this fanfic. i only discovered it today and i finally finished it a few minutes ago. i don't know much about cardcaptors. i only watched the first season when it came out in english but this is a really good fic. i noticed that julian (yukito?} isn't in it? i thought that was a bit odd since he is one of the main characters in cardcaptors. but i am glad you did not include him. because i don't think that he would fit in very well into this story. he is too happy. and i think he would ruin the mood of the fic.

i hope you update soon. by the sounds of the other reviews you don't usually take this long to update? i hope you are okay!
person Sana-Chan
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When are there going to be more chapters?!?!?!?!?!?
person Kotay
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story(sat up three nights in a row to read it from the beginning to the last chapter)
You have done a wonderful job with keeping everyone in character while at the same time making it your own work.
Yue is so clod yet compassionate while Touya is strong and independent, doing his best not to give in to the feelings he has for his master...its truly amazing. Your writing style just blows me away.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
person strawberries
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow please continue!!!
person gabby
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't think there will be another update *sob*
person Nynja
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is one of the best fics I've read in a LONG time! ^_^ I LOVE it! You must update soon! Please?!?

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