rate_review Reviews

Wonderful story you have hear.

You have got to be the best writer out their. Keep up the good work.

Since I don't review a story 'til it's done I'm breaking one of my own hard and fast rules here - but excellent job so far! I particularly like the way that Touya has unknowingly come to depend on Yue for emotional support and validation and that Yue has come to regard THIS pleasure slave as something much more than that - both in spite of their commitment that nothing of the sort would happen.
Can't wait for the rest of the story - hint, hint... I DO so hate to have to finish these types of stories in my own twisted mind.... not to mention that by showing that Yue does indeed have a soft spot (even if he doesn't want to admit it) helps tp lay some of my own demons to rest as it were - but that''s another story...
THanks for conrinuing to update when you can - I completelly understand hectic and busy schedules.

I was recently introduced to your story by a friend. I thank him gratefully for that and I thank you even more for writing this beautiful piece of art! I think you should definitely make this an original work. You deserve it! I want to review every chapter but don't have time so I'll just review the last chapter. Love the Yue/Toya moments especially in this chapter. They're finally in bed together! I can't wait for next chapter to see what happens. There was too much Sakura. I love her but prefer Yue/Toya.

I have one chapter left and god am I hoping it ends! Not that I don't like the story, far from it in fact! I LOVE the story and don't want to be left hqanging! ^_^ well, on to the last chapter! @_@

I absolutely LOVE this story and I think it would be a shame if it just stays here on the internet and never gets published. Maybe you could get a really good artist to help you... This would make a WONDERFUL manga and an even better animated series! good luck! and I will be sure to check on it regularly ^_^

I was re-reading this chapter, and I just thought of something .... did Yue hit Touya because of Clow?
I thought it was a bit strange that Yue would hit Touya (ont the face) for a comment that was, well, typical for Touya. And I thought it might have something to do with Clow.
Actually, I have TWO reasons as to why I think Yue hit Touya -

1. Yue HAS loved someone before (Clow). And (for some reason) it's a touchy subject for him.
2. Yue has never been in love before. And now that he IS in love (with Touya), he doesn't know how to react to it.


That's all I wanted to say ^^

Please update soon. This fic is sooo good. I'm dying for the next chapter. It's been nearly 2 months since the last update. Please update before a full 2 months have past!

!! Wonder what's going to happen when they wake up

Anyway, thanks for the reader review mention, although I'm not sure if leaving four reviews a chapter is necessarily a healthy thing ;;;;;;

I don't much to say, but there is this one thing...after Touya and Yue made that deal where Touya promised to participate, I don't think they have had penetrative sex yet. (I hope I'm not the only perv who noticed this ***** but needless to say I hope %$#! happens next chapter ahaha)

But the Sakura and Syaoran thing is soooo cute, although I wonder what happens if/when Touya finds out, and if Syaoran or Sakura ever actually say anything.

Like always though, hope you update soon!!!

-lili

Please update before the weekend is over. *Gets down on knees and begs*