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Argh! The holidays are nearly over and I need my Pleasure Slave fix before school starts. Pleeeease update soon *whimpers* This is one of the best fanfics ever! I love Touya and Yue's relationship. Its so cute and sad. The story is starting to get into the nitty gritty now. I wonder why Yue came home all tired and weak? *curious*

*Looks at Ta Boo's last comment*
Yue being taken by Touya? What a beautiful idea! Weirdly enough, I can imagine Yue being uke. Is he a virgin in that sense?
That would be cute if Touya was the first to ever take him ... the first to ever dominate him.
What a gorgeous scene that would make.
And poor Yue would be so confused and maybe a bit regretful afterwards.
Sorry. I'm just rambling here. Sometimes I just let my mind go wild. lol

Beautiful story by the way. Please update soon!

great story. really love it.

i have a question though. will we ever get to see yue's wings? or are they not in this story?
and if they are, i'd love to see touya's reaction to them XD

It would be cool if you were to make this into
an original story, the only problem I see with that
is that it might be harder to make the original
characters. I mean with a fanfic your basing it
on characters already known so there's no need
to explain too such about them, with originals you would
have to include a bit more back ground info.
Aside from that I can't wait until the next chapter,
and your finally putting more Sakura and Li.

I absolutely love how you ended this chapter. It's so adorable how both Touya and Yue are reacting to their feelings towards each other. I especially love the scene where Yue finally arrived home exhausted (can't wait to find out why) and Touya helped him without even asking. And they're sharing the bed together! Squee! I also love Yue's uncertainty about his love for Touya too. He sounded so ... well, uncertain, when he asked whether Touya desired him. Poor Yue!

I just wanted to say a few more things... I really love the hints of kindness that Yue has - even something as simple as saying "please" showed how much he cares for Touya (and even moreso considering how Yue treated other slaves).
It's just so beautiful.

Random thought ... I wonder if Yue will ever allow Touya to take him? :)

Finally seeing Sakura come more into her own as a person is incredibly satisfying. Touya and Yue are so full, so deep, I was starting to worry that Sakura wouldn't get the same treatment, and I can't help but feel a soft spot for her, as she is one of my favorite female characters of all time. As always, you do a great job, and every installment leaves me panting for more! (And truly not in a sexual way, but simply because I'm so enthralled.)
As for making this an original story...there's so much more here with all of the characters than is accounted for in the source material that I could see this easily being done with a simple search and replace!
As as sort of closing thought, though, I sort of want to ask about the Sakura, Syaoran dynamic... they seem to be going down a slightly rougher path as far as their relationship goes...and how interesting that would be! I'm not sure how I would feel about that but it's a fascinating idea. I know however you choose to handle it, it will be done with great grace and respect for the characters.

wow!!! its been 2 yrs since the story was published!!!
thats crazy that you've continued to be dedicated 2 it.
luv it

I have been keeping up with this story from about....Chapter 12 I think. I must say, this is quite possibly one of the most well written, gripping fanfics, nay, stories, I've ever read. I melted when Touya finally started to open up to Yue, and the new twist with Sakura learning how to fight is just adorable. There's something for everyone in this story, which makes it so amazingly ...For lack of a better word, awesome. I hope that after this saga is finished, you will create other works that shine just as brightly as this one.

I have been reading many of my favorite chapters of your story over and over again. I have to say the anticipation is almost too much to handle. In the previous chapter I noticed that Ralen grabbed Sakura's ass. I hadn't noticed it before, but upon reading it again I saw it was true. I wonder, will Touya find out about it and if he does, what will he do? Also I wonder why Yue came back so weak. I do sense some angst in the near future though. There just has to be. Will Yue be angry?
As you can see I have been putting alot of thought into this, but I guess I wont know until you update. Well, in any case please do update soon.
Your loyal reader,
Mel