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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heyo. I've been keeping an eye on your story for a while now, and I think it would be a good idea to make it an original story. ^_~ You're a very, very good writer.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gapes* what kind of cliffhanger was THAT shit???!!!! OMG! feeling kinda neglected over here! what the HELL happened to Yue? and when are the two FINALLY *rolls eyes* going to 'dramatically fall in love'?
*grins* I'm just giving you a hard time. AWESOME FIC!!! Hated the depressing beginning, but I like the fact that you stuck Yue and Touya together, thought the raping at the beginning was a little iffy for me, I hung on! *grins* And man, it was worth it! *cackles manically*
*grins* I'm just giving you a hard time. AWESOME FIC!!! Hated the depressing beginning, but I like the fact that you stuck Yue and Touya together, thought the raping at the beginning was a little iffy for me, I hung on! *grins* And man, it was worth it! *cackles manically*
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waah! The more I read, the more I am glued to the story!
Finally, Touya and Yue's feelings are getting deeper. Just remember Ai no Kusabi where Iason said to Riki, that he (Iason) will return to him. Hope Touya ands Yue wont die. Hehehehe..
Keep it up!
Finally, Touya and Yue's feelings are getting deeper. Just remember Ai no Kusabi where Iason said to Riki, that he (Iason) will return to him. Hope Touya ands Yue wont die. Hehehehe..
Keep it up!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going. make li jelousy of sakura some how. thanks
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You are the best, please keep up the good work!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn >.< I thought I would have read about a kiss by now...
And what´s happening to Yue? Is there a human form of him?
... why is he a different creature?
And what´s happening to Yue? Is there a human form of him?
... why is he a different creature?
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are good!
you do write pretty well...
this story has a nice plot.. very nice plot for a NC-17 fic!
im looking forward to ur next update.
this fic actually made me cry..
wah..
im such a sucker for romance..
you do write pretty well...
this story has a nice plot.. very nice plot for a NC-17 fic!
im looking forward to ur next update.
this fic actually made me cry..
wah..
im such a sucker for romance..
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writting is brilliant, Li's dialogue especially. I love the wit there.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed at your genuine skill in story writing. I love your story! Iwould very much like you to
update sometime soon, please. I especialy love the fact that Yue let Touya sleep in his bed with him! Ah, it was so great! I also have to say that this may well possibly be my favorite fanfic.
I sincerely thank you.
Your loyal reader,
Mel.
update sometime soon, please. I especialy love the fact that Yue let Touya sleep in his bed with him! Ah, it was so great! I also have to say that this may well possibly be my favorite fanfic.
I sincerely thank you.
Your loyal reader,
Mel.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story and I think it's really well written. You have them all in character and you even have Yue (I love Yue) I hope you update this. This is an excellent piece of work and one of the very few I've come across and enjoyed. Hope you update soon.