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O MY GAWD!!...I SOO LOVE YOU!!!...YOU UPDATED!!! YAY..HAVE BEEN WAITIN FOR YOU!!!
Anywayz, can't wait for the next chapters, I like it how
Touya is getting confused at his feeling for Yue...please continue...
Update as soon as possible!!!

Ya Ne!!!

Eep, I'm the best reviewer for the last chapter? Yay! I didn't even know there was such a competition. xD Very smart way to get people to review properly, heh. It's probably a good thing that I have decent grammar and spelling, seeing as how I write as well... Would be sort of bad if I didn't. Hehe.

Well, anyway, onto reviewing for this chapter... GAH your writing is intoxicating. Ralen makes me... so mad... he's such.. a bastard... Throughout the entire story... I really want Li to stab him in the face. It made me really happy when he threat him with the knife.

And awww!! The scene with Yue hugging onto Toya just made me melt. Yue was being so cute, and Touya is so stubborn to try to escape when he's accutally getting the opportunity to lie on a nice bed. And just... squeee!! Hearts for you on that.

As for how long this fic is and how long it's taking you, WOW, what an accomplishment. What's your secret? (lol xD) It's so difficult to keep going on with a chapter story, to not lose intrest, or inspiration, or just.. get lost in the plot and not know how to dig your way out. So yeah, that's extremely impressive... And as for the other 400 page fic you did, tell me where I can find it if you posted it anywhere, I would read it in a blind instant.

One last comment... turning this into an original... I would recommend it. Although your characterization is of course, close to the original characters; it's also different in a way that makes them unique. You could easily play with the names and call this an original. It's your choice. :3

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT'S SO AMAZING!!
To be perfectly honest this is the first fanfiction story I have ever read that I thought about when I wasn't reading it. I actually ponder what is going to happen next and the development of the characters. It is a captivating character study and I am so in love with your characters I can't tear my eyes away from the computer screen. Please keep working on this story and update soon!

Jaida-chan

ok, that was stupid of me -_- anyway, i'm impressed with sakura! finally! go sakura go and kick ralen's ass. can't wait to see what happens between touya and yue ^^

Hi. New reviewer here. Well, all I can say is: This was an excellent chapter, as the same goes for the rest of the chapters. I'm not a big fan on yaoi, but I don't know why I'm still reading your very well written fic. I loved the part when Sakura was practicing dancing and Li was stealing glimpses at her in the reflection of his sword. I thought: Wow! That's really original! Also, I like the part when Syaoran was blocking Ralen's path, and then said how he's afraid of the dark. That was a funny part. I just realized something... I seem to like Li and Sakura's moments the best. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the TouyaxYue moments also. I hope you'll finish within a year! And damn AFF's for screwy formats and random upgrading! I used to have an account with successful stories, and when I came back to AFF to check my review status, I realized it was all gone. I was like: NOOO! Because you know, I didn't have my stories saved on a disk, and it was a somewhat awesome account. T.T Anyways, keep writing. You'll become an astounding writer, if not already. Hehe. Go Yaoi! >.>;;

I've been a fan of Pleasure Slave since maybe.. The ninth chapter was posted? I can't really remember. But I do really enjoy it. I really missed it when AFF was changing and stuff.

But anyway. I really enjoy the detail you put in your writing, and I think you really keep the characters in character, even though it's an AU fic. Especially Yue. Sometimes he might stray a little, but then you add a twist to his relationship with Touya and pull the rug out from under us. x3 Those two certainly keep things interesting.

Also, the way Li protected Sakura was just adorable. ^^

Oh, and though I never noticed it until you pointed it out, I think it's good how Yue and Touya have never kissed. It's really not normal for them. I'm sure it'll be very... captivating when or if that time comes. :o

Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see you update! Even though this fic has been going for so long, I don't think it's ever dragged.

OMG!!! I loved this chapter!! Yue actually showed some kind of emotion xDD. But, hey the guy deserves a break after delaing with Touya lol. Please write more soon!! P.S. Is Kero ever going to come into the story?

Ah, so nice to see Ralen quaking in fear. And Sakura's learning Kung Fu, huh? Well, that'll certainly be different. Speaking of Meilin, isn't she due for another lesson by now? Just saying. And as for Yue and Touya, that's definately starting to get intersting, and I feel certain we'll be getting to find out where Yue keeps disappearing to sometime soon! Well, laters.

Thank you so much for writing this story. I look forward to every review and I'm really enjoying the way you keep the characters distinct and allow their personalities to shine trough. This is the one story I can reread everyday and not tire of it. And congradulations on writing such a large work and staying committed over a period of two long years.I can't wait until Yue and Touya actually kiss and Sakura and Li take a step forward.
Until your next update.

Flawless as always. And if you ever do make a book, tell us, cause I'm sure everyone of us would by it. ;) Can't wait for the next update!