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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW... just WOW... great story, really great... i don't know what to say... It's just GREAT!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're updating again- your story is about the only reason i bother checking AFF anymore.
I adore someone who can write a fanfic with decent plot, characterization and technical skills.
Can't wait to see where you go with this next, and the way the various characters' relationships are working out is just... <3
anyway, much applause for you.
~pockygirl
I adore someone who can write a fanfic with decent plot, characterization and technical skills.
Can't wait to see where you go with this next, and the way the various characters' relationships are working out is just... <3
anyway, much applause for you.
~pockygirl
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing entry. The depth of this story continues to captivate. It's fascinating to both linger over the details and equally absorbing to hurry through the chapters as quickly as possible in order to get to the next plot twist or development. I absolutely can't wait for the story to conclude (in what I know will be a totally satisfying way) and at the same time I will be sad to see it end.
I suppose the only thing I am really wanting for to find out more about Yue and what makes him tick. But I'm sure that's planned for upcoming chapters and I absolutely can't wait. He really is an enigmatic character. Thanks for doing such credit to this favorite bunch of characters of mine.
I suppose the only thing I am really wanting for to find out more about Yue and what makes him tick. But I'm sure that's planned for upcoming chapters and I absolutely can't wait. He really is an enigmatic character. Thanks for doing such credit to this favorite bunch of characters of mine.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOh FINALLY!!!...I really like this story..the best part of it wa
the Dream/vision thingy...So sweet..maybe it is true??
But please update soon, I want to know how all of this
will continue...PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
JA NE!!
the Dream/vision thingy...So sweet..maybe it is true??
But please update soon, I want to know how all of this
will continue...PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
JA NE!!
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the absolute BEST fanfiction IN THIS MORTAL REALM.
No, really. I mean it.
Keep up the good work,
Mori~
No, really. I mean it.
Keep up the good work,
Mori~
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Second review in the same day, go me.
I'm sure someone has already brought this up, but you could seriously turn this "monster of a story" into a novel, quite likely a best-selling one. (You'd have to change names, and such, but ah well...) Although you might not want to be known as the person who made millions off of adult fan fiction turned into a novel... eheheh.
I understand why it takes so long to finish a chapter.
I'm sure someone has already brought this up, but you could seriously turn this "monster of a story" into a novel, quite likely a best-selling one. (You'd have to change names, and such, but ah well...) Although you might not want to be known as the person who made millions off of adult fan fiction turned into a novel... eheheh.
I understand why it takes so long to finish a chapter.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm ^_^ Pleasure Slave is officially my favorite fic on this entire website! I usually avoid romances (no matter how weird and twisted), and go straight for the PWPs, but this is FABULOUS! Yue is so sexy =3 Gorgeous imagery, fantastic prose, and the sex scenes leave nothing to be desired. Except maybe a Tomoyo of my own :: koffkoff :: Ralen makes it as the most annoying baddie (maybe ever) and I can't help but wonder if he'll get raped by some random man in the end. The thought of it makes me smile. Favorite line is still "because she wasn't you". It was like my brain constricted. Update soon! I await the next installment of your delicious fanfic.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haven't read a ccs in a while and I'm not disapointed and I'm glad that a evil bastard is a OC because I'd get irritated is is was one of the charactors. the relationships ae cute and not at all what I immagined when I saw the summary and the the title. I'm glad I was wrong and this was just enjoyable
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is...
so....
SO....
GOOD.
I don't ever read things like this, usually. Especially card captor sakura fanfiction. I'm not at all a big fan of Yue, and Sakura doesn't intrest much at all... But I started reading this and just couldn't stop. Not only is the writing beyond the point of being fantastic; a perfection in the descriptions, grammar, spelling, dialogue and mood - but the plot... Oh my god the plot. I love this story. It's so very exotic and new, and I just love alternative universe with a passion.
I feel so horrible for Touya, through all of this... The sex scenes are very harsh... and the rape/sex is pretty realistic, especially from a guy's perspective.
Please keep writing this story. I'm dying to see you update, and I've only just finished reading this. xD Thank you for letting me read this marvelous peice of work.
so....
SO....
GOOD.
I don't ever read things like this, usually. Especially card captor sakura fanfiction. I'm not at all a big fan of Yue, and Sakura doesn't intrest much at all... But I started reading this and just couldn't stop. Not only is the writing beyond the point of being fantastic; a perfection in the descriptions, grammar, spelling, dialogue and mood - but the plot... Oh my god the plot. I love this story. It's so very exotic and new, and I just love alternative universe with a passion.
I feel so horrible for Touya, through all of this... The sex scenes are very harsh... and the rape/sex is pretty realistic, especially from a guy's perspective.
Please keep writing this story. I'm dying to see you update, and I've only just finished reading this. xD Thank you for letting me read this marvelous peice of work.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok... im not sure if ur already done with this yet, but if you arent, y dont you add something with yue and sakura even though yue promised touya? .. like maybe touya did something bad?
btw, im only on chp.t 17 so dont get me wrong if you DID add something of sakuraxyue...
p.S. pleasure slave if my favE!!
gotta admit, youre GOOD at this!!
btw, im only on chp.t 17 so dont get me wrong if you DID add something of sakuraxyue...
p.S. pleasure slave if my favE!!
gotta admit, youre GOOD at this!!