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YOU BETTER CONTINUE MORE OFTEN THAN LAST TIME!

Like... Once every week? :'D -winkwinknudgenudge-

I quite enjoyed this chapter. I've been waiting for the update to come for a while, and was more than dissapointed when you weren't able to update do to the site being down. Thanks so much for this fic, it is indeed one of my favorites.

excellent. im off to bed i'll read the rest later. this is fantastic.

Okay this is stupid but here are more thoughts that I didn\'t put in my last review, which I wrote when my adrenal glands were still pumping (if this keeps on happening I think you can expect to get double reviews from me every chapter. Eh heh).

Anyways, the full impact of what Yue said in the end (\"And you always will belong to me,\" summat along that line) hit me. And I guess it\'s not the end of the Touya-Yue arc. More like a very puzzling interlude. Since Touya knows that Yue usually releases all his slaves after a short time, what\'s he going to do about that? Does he even want to escape anymore? And I\'m so confused!! What the heck is going on with their relationship? Touya admits and promises Yue that he\'ll only have sex with him, Yue gets manic-possessive, those literary hints that you put in there coming out (Yue asking Touya if he knew why he reacted the way he did when he was with Aya, and Touya saying yes, but we\'re not sure what\'s going on: what is that, reverse dramatic irony?? IT KILLS), Touya still not comfortable with the way Yue looks at him and agreeing to not do any more chores because he doesn\'t want others to get exiled from the castle, not necessarily because Yue asks him.
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And since this could be like Ai no Kusabi...I think that Yue might let Touya go for a year or some time period, since Touya cherishes his freedom so much and is still thinking about escaping. Although I agree with Aya-chan and I hope they don\'t commit suicide in the burning castle or something.

Way too obsessed with those two.
Okay.
-lili

Yes! An update! Loved the bit with Touya correcting Yue\'s pronunciation of his name.

*DOES THE HAPPY DANCE*

For some reason I feel like the Touya-Yue arc has somewhat ended though. Feels like they confessed to each other. Jkadfich. But big change in Yue at the end of the chapter! He is a lot more, uh...catty. And they started to call each other by their names! *MELT*

Poor Aya though. For a minute there I thought she\'d tell Yue the whole story and Ralen was busted. Then he\'d get fired, and then a new keeper would come, and the YUKITO ARC would start. Hahaha.

Okay still giddy. Loved the part at the beginning with Li and how he peeked at Sakura.

*HOPES JEALOUSY II IS COMING SOON*

Thanks for the chapter!
-lili

remind aff to never upgrade again XD but i\'m glad you updated ^_^

oh god... that was one scary chapter- i thought touya was in for another ass-whooping and RALEN SUCKS!!! so much -_- i\'m not a big fan of aya but it really was cruel what ralen did to her ;_; i hope she\'ll be ok in the city... hey, since this is mildly based off ai no kusabi, you aren\'t going to make both yue and touya die or anything are you o_O_o_O

can\'t wait for the next chapter or their first kiss ^_^

Sorry for not reviewing. I honestly read the new chapters the day or the day after they come out, but I don\'t review, because I don\'t have the brain capacity to write a constructive review and I feel like I should leave constructive reviews... Well as of right now I still have nothing to say except that YES WHEN I READ IT FOR THE FIRST TIME A COUPLA MONTHS AGO I TOTALLY ENJOYED IT, although the \"WHAT IS TOUYA\'S AND YUE\'S RELATIONSHIP GOING TO BE LIKE NOW?? NOT TO MENTION, HOW ARE SAKURA AND LI GOING TO PROGRESS??\" questions were nagging at me, and then finally and most utterly and sincerely and pleadingly, PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN. I seriously check back every single day. Like, when the site first went under construction, I went to the groups site to check when CCS was transferred. Then after it was transferred I sat around for the first few days and checked back in the category as OCD-frequently as possible and everytime I saw another story up there (At first it was \"Unforgivable\" and now it\'s the Wolf Falls story...) I was like SHOOT. And okay, I sound like an addict who needs a hit, but rehab is for quitters and I\'m not ready to quit on the next update coming up sometime soon.

So now, beyond the \"what-ifs\" of the Touya-Yue and the Sakura-Li relationship, here is my relationship with this story, as exhibited by passages from chapters that I have re-read way too much:



\"I will finish...if you ask me. If you beg me.”

“Please.\"

“Again.”

“Please!...\"




PLZZZZZZZ

-lili

Okay so I went back and browsed through the reviews and I realize that I do have a few constructive things to say!! (Although I still really really really crave an update.)

Touya and Yue : Riki and Iason. Whew. I can see the connection, although I think that there are some small differences, but that\'s mostly because of the characters\' personalities. I\'m really happy and a bit in awe that you were able to base the two on Ai no Kusabi without screwing up the characterization. :)

I think Aya likes Touya a lot. She thinks he\'s handsome and she really cares for him. I don\'t think he\'s ever going to reciprocate her feelings, since I feel like he\'s nice to her but not in a really \"You\'re my friend\" way. (...If Touya is capable of making friends. I never realized how antisocial he was without Yukito!)

And Sakura with Li. They\'re really cute together and I think Sakura fell hard; Syaoran is a little less invisible, but I think he likes her too. BUT WHEN TOUYA FINDS OUT...is the big bad question. And what happens after that, since Touya won\'t leave the castle without her, and if he does attempt an escape, if Sakura is in love with Li WHAT THEN...etc, etc.

And I want to know how Touya responds to Yue\'s threat! And whether Yue is so infatuated (for lack of a better word) that he does something even more forward that says \"there\'s something special about Touya\" (like when Touya is the only one allowed into his meditation room, to sleep in his room...). Like making him sleep in the same bed as him. (!)

Also, how Touya is going to follow through with his \"I\'ll participate\" proposal after Yue made him take it like a man. Mm hmm.

It\'s pretty obvious that I think too much about this stuff huh?

Much encouragement, much curiousity,
-lili

Okay, things are definately getting back to normal. How about a new chpater or two(or maybe even three, you\'ve had enough time!), huh? Let\'s get this ball rolling again! Okay, shutting up...