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Woah! An update finally! Now that you've mentioned it, Touya and Yue acted like Iason and Riki.. Maybe I'm too caught up with the story that I fail to notice. hehehe... keep it up! Make sure to update soon! Don't make us wait longer! ^_^

You had me fooled! I truely believed that our guys were going to live happily ever after! Well, I'll just have to stay tuned (what a horrible sacrifice, isn't it?) I liked the nex turn taken by this chapter, Yue's jalousy and frightening side.

*cheers* Yaaaay~ I'm really glad that you updated! I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Sakura has definitely fallen for Syaoran, though she doesn't know it yet. It's so cute!
*laughs* Touya sending Ralen flying across the floor made me extremely happy. The bastard totally deserves it! I also very pleased when Yue threatened to skewer Ralen's hands if he ever touched Touya again. I can't help but feel sorry for Touya; the punishment sounded really painful. *cringes a bit*
You were right; the library moment did make me feel fuzzy all over... But the punishment definitely brought some of the bitterness of their current relationship back.
I wonder what Ralen's plotting, how Touya and Yue's relationship will turn out, and if Sakura will ever figure out that she is in love with Syaoran. I look forward to the next chapter! Please update soon. ^^

Whilst reading the story over, I noticed that in chapter 20 (Leash loosened) that when Touya was 'participating' Yue calls Touya 'Toya.' This struck me as odd, because you haven't made many spelling mistakes that I've noticed and made me think; Is this a bit of Yukito coming out? Which lead onto "Is Yukito even going to be in the story? Will Kero be in the story?" Then I got an interesting mental image of what could happen when/if Touya meets Yue's 'brother.' And writing this leads on to another question; "How many times will I use quotation marks in this review?" Until next update, I'm going to patiently wait.

Oops, forgot to mention anything about the latest chapter ^-^;; While I feel sorry for Touya, I do have to give him props for someone FINALLY hitting that... fiend. And dispite a bit of a setback I believe in Yue's and Touya's erm... 'relationship,' I do feel there was good that came from it. Not only did that jerk finally get what was coming to him, but Yue also told him to keep his hands off Sakura.

.... Or was it Touya? Yue said "My slave" but both Sakura and Touya are his slaves.... Hrm...

Oh, and Sakura and Li bonded a bit. That was cute.

Ooooh... I got a good question! If or when Touya gets a collar, what color would it be? I mean, Yue obviously done some very sexual things to Touya, but would that mean that Touya lost his virginity, or would Touya have to be the penetrat*or* rather than the penetrate*ee*? After all, it could be argued that Sakura also did some sexual things, and yet her collar is still white.

I had a bad dream that Touya was the one who made Sakura's collar black, most likely because of something Yue did. That was not a good dream, and I hope not a premonition of things to come!

I absolutely love love love this story!!! This is one of the best CCS fanfics I've read and I can't wait for you to update. I love Yue and Toya together...one of my fave pairings. And I really love Sakura and Li together to so I'm hoping that pans out...lol. Anyway just wanted you to know that I sat down and read all 21 chapters in one sitting and am now eagerly awaiting more!!

Amazing chapter. I especially like the cute blushing of both Sakura and Aya. If I wasn't loving the torrid affair of Touya and Yue so much, I might be interested by Touya and Aya's relationship. ^_~ And yeah, the Ralen punch was a definite high point. I love Li's reaction to Yue's anger, very believable. Can't wait for the next update. ^_^

Once again AcColeman87@aol.com Sorry but thr=e thought just hit me while I was rereading this chapter. This whole Ai no Kusabi bussness is wierding me out. I was wondering, will you be taking a very Kusabi-ish point with this? Will Touya sleep with Aya? Will Raelin get fired and start rummors in the village and convince an angery mob to follow him up to the castle to "kill the beast"? WIll Touya and Yue only share their first kiss amist the firey inferno of the castle burning down with them inside it??? I'm dying to know!

Oh, yes, loved Ralen getting clobbered, and also liked Yue having a "word" with him afterwards! Also, everyone seems to have forgotten about the dance lessons, but I imagine when Meilin returns the following week they'll recall. Well, loving the progression, and I do believe Aya's falling for Touya, there! Well, Laters!

DAMMIT! AND THEY WERE STARTING TO GET ALONG SO WELL!!!! ;0; lol, yup, i definitely got those distinct nice and fuzzy Disney vibes from the library incident.. sigh..but watching touya sock ralen one was just classic.. not sure if it was worth it ;_; poor touya.. AnK huh? now that i think about it, it's true :P mwahahaha, this means that yue will love touya in the end!!! lol, yeah, i am so convinced that they love each other.. well.. probably more along the lines of liking for now... but man, i am convinced that yue told him all the stuff about being a man to lessen his punishment.. otherwise i think touya would have gotten double

anyway, the syaoran/sakura relationship coming along nicely! meilin still cracks me up, and i hope tomoyo will make a visit again sometime soon.. w/ meilin! lol, that would be awesome

nevertheless, i looooove this story ^^ so keep up the good work!